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KRPKAB {Alternate Universe} - Their Priced Misunderstandings (Page 2)

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Posted: 19 April 2016 at 11:45pm | IP Logged
Fantastic teaser SamBig smile

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Posted: 20 April 2016 at 1:22am | IP Logged
Wowww Sam! This is so so soo interesting! And yeah finally u in action! I so missed this!
Yaar one small request...plz sid ko add kar story me! *showing puppy eyes* dekh tuni bhi hai nah! Plz plz plz plz...infinite Plz...plz yeh chotti si icchha purn kar plz...
Eager to know this mystery now!
Update soon!

Edited by -Saishree- - 26 April 2016 at 7:24am

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Posted: 20 April 2016 at 3:45am | IP Logged
Res!

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Posted: 20 April 2016 at 4:13am | IP Logged
Wow! The concept's really nice! Can't wait for the story to proceed!

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Posted: 20 April 2016 at 5:11am | IP Logged
Res ! Its not my lazyness. ~_~
un
where to start? Umm yes u took a lot of time to post it. I am late but not more than u are.
Hmm banner is very colourful and looking beautiful and i love ur introduction to. Magenta is looking perfect with black.
Well i know u will kill me if i end my comment here. ROFL afterall i ate ur head so much.
So coming to the story. It was awesome re. Tere hath,payr and dimag me jaadu hai. Itni awesome idea ati kahanse hai re ?
I love the starting..it was very admirable.
*Dev took off his coat went to washroom to freshen himself*
i can totally imagine my handsome aary pata hai when he comes from office and takes off his coat he looks so yummy.
And that convo in that phone call was very interesting. What have his father done re?
And that part where my arya asks who opened that case mr bhat answers it is a young lawyer. It was funny how he reacts "i don't care if she is young or old." *arrogant boss* hmm B-)
and while having this convo when he undid his shirt buttons, i was shipping :-P *my bedsome arya*
see, i notice each and everything. :-D
and that flashback it was so interesting and touching as well. Btw is it the same girl who is reopening the case?

i was literraly angry when the man pushed her to the ground. And what happened to her dad and why her face was guilty? And that part where *she kept looking at him telling him to forgive and belive her* and arya was fighting between his heart and mind. It was so beautifully written. But it was so sad how the girl was crying.
And then that ishwari. :-| ugh! She is such a vampire in the show. :-|
but the last sentence
"its her opening the case"
i guess, the flashback wali girl hired a lawyer. And it is divisha. i guess she wants to prove that her father was not a criminal..it was awesome start of a story re. U rock !
Update soon. Want more And can't wait. When will u update? Don't make us wait long.



Edited by Sonatia - 22 April 2016 at 2:16am

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Posted: 20 April 2016 at 5:29am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Sonatia

Res ! Its not my lazyness. ~_~
ugh ! Dead
I will drink your blood re ROFL
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Posted: 20 April 2016 at 5:35am | IP Logged
Originally posted by PanchaliKaArjun

Originally posted by Sonatia

Res ! Its not my lazyness. ~_~
ugh !Dead
I will drink your blood reROFL

blood?! Yuck ROFL
have tasty tasty cocacola and thand rakh :D

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loved it 

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