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DevAskshi OS: Bairiya...

cherrynicolem Goldie

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Posted: 16 April 2016 at 7:39am | IP Logged
Its my first attempt to write an os on DevAkshi. 
Here it goes... 

Dev was waiting for Sonakshi in cafe since 3 hours.  It was almost his 10th coffee for the wait. He was having mixed feelings: Anger, worry, hatred and lively.  Anger because his Miss Bose sorry Dr.  Bose hadn't turned up.  Worry because she was never late and how come suddenly today she is late; is she alright or in problem. Hatred as she didn't picked up his 8th miss call.  Lively just because he was meeting her alone and today none knew about it. 

But it was enough for him. He never waited for Someone so long not even for deligates. It was 8.30 at night. 

Sonakshi reached home safely with Elena and her dada told that Mr.  Dixit had called him to ask whereabouts of Sonakshi. She saw the watch. It was already quater to 9. She rushed without thinking about anything and took out her scooty and reached cafe. 

And here in cafe Dev was not there and had already left. She asked the receptionist and he said that Mr.  Dixit had already left half an hour before. Sonakshi dillaed his no.  But it was unreachable.  And she started worrying so much that her palms started to sweat.  

Sonakshi to herself: itni tensed toh tu medical exams ke time pe bhi nai hui thi. Calm down Sona.  
She sits on a nearby table and asks for a glass of water. And gulps down immediately. 
Sonakshi to herself: ab soch what you will do next.  

She just blindly dials Nikki's no.  
Sonakshi: Hello Nikki.  Dev sorry i mean Mr. Dixit ghar pauch gaye. 
Nikki: ha ye time tak toh woh aa jaate hai. 
Sonakshi: nai mujhe abhi confirm karke bolo. 
Nikki: Ruko ek sec. (After a long pause she said) Bhaiya toh ab tak ghar nai pauche.
Sonakshi: nai pauche ka kya matlab hai.  Tumne ache se check kiya naa. 
Nikki: ha. Maine ache se check kiya.  Is everything alright? Kya hua hai? Aap tensed lag rahe ho? 
Sonakshi: nothing much. I will call you later. 
And Sonakshi cuts the call. She even calls at his office but there to she gets negative response.

So she gets more worried and it was already 9.30.
She leaves the cafe.  But gets a call from Dev's mobile. She immediately picks it up. 
Sonakshi: Hello Dev.  Tum kaha ho?  Main kabse tumhe try kar rahi hoon. 
Suddenly someone on other side speaks up. 
Madam ek aadmi ka accident ho gaya hai. Hume ye uske car se mila. Aap ka last dialled number tha toh aapko call kiya. Hum unhe City Hospital main leke aaye hai.  Aap inko agar pechante ho toh jaldi aa jaye yaha hospital main. 
Sonakshi: aap rukiye.  Main pochti hoon thodi der main. 

She called Nikki and told about accident and told bring Ishwari aunty and mamaji to bring to hospital. Next she called her dada and narrated the whole incident. And told if could come to hospital and said not to allow maa and papa to come hospital. And she started the scooter. 

Re baandhe, re baandhey, re baandhay
Aise mohe baandhe...
Haan mohe baandhe wo nainon kee dor se...
Hai ye pyaar kaisaa...
is kaa raaz hai kyaa bol de...
Keh bhee de..

She reached the hospital and met the man.  And took his belongings.
And started to cry immensely after seeing them. She thanked the man. And said herself to be strong. Next she contacted the docter incharge and asked for Dev's condition. First doctor refused but then he agreed as soon as she said that she is also a doctor. And the fear she had came true. Dev's condition was critical 

Kabhi sukoon, kabhi laage balaa hai...
Kabhi duaa, kabhi laage halaa hai..
Nainon se ye kyaa ho chalaa hai...
Bariyaa o bairiyaa, mujhe sataa naa bairiya..
Bariyaa o bairiyaa, mujhe sataa naa bairiya..

Everyone arrives. She started to cry again seeing her dada. Goes and hugs him.  And her dada narrated everything to Ishwari, Nikki & mamaji. 
Soon doctor comes and tells that he is out of danger and operation was successful but he is not responding to any of treatment. Everyone was stunned. Sonakshi gathered courage and asked what exactly was his condition. And asked whether they could meet him.  Doctor explained his condition and allowed to meet 1 person at a time. 

Kaisi ye peer jo raatein jaage...
Taaron ko chhaantey re..

Doctor said that they can try to talk to him. Since he is not completely got well. But could response to treatment if something makes him to do so. Everyone goes and meet. But negative response from Dev. Lastly Sonakshi was left. It was already 1.30 at night. She requested everyone to go home and take rest and she will be there to cake care of Dev.  Mamaji objected but then Ishwari said as she is a doctor it will be more helpful if she stays here. And said to Sonakshi that she herself will inform her parents and will come in morning again. Sonakshi nodded a yes. 

Palkon kee dibiyon mein rehte
Khwaab hain udne ko kehte
Haathon se chhootaa, chhootaa chalaa hai jiyaa..

She was hesitant in entering his room.  It was that she never saw a patient.  But today she felt a sharp pain as if she had got hurt. 

Udne lagee hain khamoshi se
Baaton kee parchiyaan

She went near his bed and started to murmer. "kya jarurat thi aapko itni saari coffee peene ki ? (doctor said that lot of caffeine was found in his blood and might be due to excessive caffine this had happened) Maine aapko kaha tha naa not more than 2 cups a day of coffee.  Aapne fir bhi nahi maana. 'khana bhg" (now suffer)."

Hone lage aadhe aadhay
Aankhon se hi kayi vaade
Saansein jalaaye ishq ki sardiyaan

She was silent then but was speaking to him in her mind.  And reminiscing their few moments of togetherness.  That dance, car drive, sorry note and lastly when he called in morning and told that he wanted to meet her and he has cancelled his all meetings and appointmens. 

Bairiya o bairiyaa, mujhe sataa naa bairiyaa
Kabhi duaa kabhee kabhee halaa
Bairiyaa o bairiya...

She unknowingly slept there and her hand was on his hand. Later it was Dev first who woke up in morning and opened his eyes. And after a while remembered about the car accident and now he is in hospital. As he started to move his hand he found someone's soft hand on his. She instantly got up as she realized his hand was moving. Dev understood the whole situation. He murmured a Sorry. Sonakshi placed a finger on his lips and nodded a no. And said Dev jo kuch bhi hua woh kal tha. Aaj se ek ek nayi shuruwat karte hai. (Dev everything happend was a past. Let's start a new new beginning.) and smiled. Many unspoken words were spoken between them and sorted everything. 

Everyone had arrived till then. She called the doctor. He said it was a miracle and allowed Dev's discharge. But only on one condition that his healtg now should be in the hands of a nutritionist. Everyone laughed. Ishwari requested Sonakshi to join itself from today for her and Dev. She nooded a yes. And everyone reached home safely.

The end. 
Please read and review how is this small piece. 

Edited by cherrynicolem - 16 April 2016 at 7:45am

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Posted: 16 April 2016 at 7:55am | IP Logged
Wow this is so nice n awesome. 
Plz do write more 
Ps: sorry my like button is not working so cldnt click 

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Posted: 16 April 2016 at 8:25am | IP Logged
I REALLY don't want Shona to resume her job in Dixit house. But still it was a good OS. Clap

Edited by Onie... - 16 April 2016 at 8:25am

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Posted: 16 April 2016 at 10:56am | IP Logged
awesome os. do write more dear.ClapClapClap

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Nice Os...

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Posted: 16 April 2016 at 12:58pm | IP Logged
Awesome OS.
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Lovely OS 

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