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ShraMan/NiMik AT#31 - Bedroom Story (Page 24)

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Posted: 16 April 2016 at 11:57am | IP Logged
Originally posted by hasinig89

Kriti...lol I already said in above posts...not Jockey it's MACHO...u know why ...baar baar keh rahe hai na
MACHO PRESENTS EK DUJE KE VAASTE 
& MACHO...BADE AARAM SE ROFL

Hasu..totally..
every time I see that "macho presents" bit I think how could have they found such an apt sponsor for our showLOL Shravan, our own macho manEmbarrassed

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Posted: 16 April 2016 at 11:57am | IP Logged
NOw that everyone is talking about scenes
I want a scene where Suman keeps her hand on Shravan shoulder after a tiring day and he has his hands around her and they discuss their day.

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Posted: 16 April 2016 at 11:58am | IP Logged
Originally posted by .SankaDevi.

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Originally posted by .SankaDevi.

OMG RIYA I JUST WATCHED YOUR VM IT WAS SOOO EFFIN CUTE I LOVED IT. MY SHRAMAN FEELS ARE ALL OVER THE PLACE RN.


THAANKU Heart
I WANTED TO ADD SOME VISUAL EFFECTS EXCEPT THE BRIGHTNESS THING. but dont have much effects option Ouch

AWW 


WOMAN U SO SWEET Heart But trust me that was all you Heart don't give me credit for your hard work Heart


Also for effects etc. I'll be making a post about that soon, you can manipulate some of the transitions to give it an "effect" wali feel. Heart

if u make a post then let me know. and i need a sound recorder. my windows wala doesn't work Cry

Edited by Ri21 - 16 April 2016 at 11:58am
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KEEP IN MIND I HAD WRITTEN THIS LIKE 2 YEARS AGO.
JUST OKAY
BE GENTLE LOL

"Suman" he softly called out as he entered the room. 
He was fully drenched even though he travels by car.
Mumbai. He sighed. 
He switched on the bedside lamp as there was almost total darkness in the room even when the window was open.
It was raining cats and dogs out and the pretty sky was grey with overcast clouds.
Lightning flashed through the sky, illuminating it a beautiful purple.
He was exhausted from the day's work.
And all he could think was a cup of chai to make that exhaustion go away.
"Sumo" he called again, loosening his tie.
No one was home at the moment. His dad and Pushkar were away on a case, and the rest of the family were attending a relative's wedding.
So it was just him and her.
"She must have returned from her office" he thought.
He checked his watch-it was 7.
"Suman" he called out, raising his voice.
He peeled of his wet socks, results of wading in knee deep water, and threw them in the laundry basket.
"Point" he said as it flew right in.
"Shravan?" Said a voice from the bathroom.
"Yeah, it's me. Will it take you long? I need to shower."
There was a minute or two of silence.
And he heard the door click open.
His eyes widened as he took in the meaning and hurried in.
***(after an hour or so)
He fingered the rope of her bathrobe as she stood in front of the mirror, trying to dry her hair.
Keyword being trying.
It seemed like all his exhaustion flew out of the window when she opened that door.
"Shravan,nai. Abhi abhi to-"
"Toh kya hua?" He said kissing her neck.
"I am sore Shravan"
His expression turned guilty. "Sorry" he muttered against her hair.
She smiled and turned around.
"Its ok." And pecked his lips.
He wrapped his arm around her waist and rested her head on his chest.
"Chai banaogi?" He asked cutely.
She looked up. "Ok. Lemme change."
He nodded and started cleaning the sofa of the magazines and wet towel.
She changed into comfy grey tracks and a white tee. Her hair was wet and hung loosely around her head and her face was devoid of makeup.
Yet Shravan found her irresistible.
He simply smiled at her, his eyes conveying what words couldn't.
She smiled back, her smile understanding.
"Chalo? Kitchen?" She asked.
"Kyun nai?" He said and took her hand and left.
He watched her work silently as he ate a banana.
"You look pretty today."
"Sirf aaj?"
"Har din"
"You are not getting any tonight Shravan. Butter laga k fayda nai."
He looked affronted. "I don't just think of today. I am a future person. Aaj nai toh kal."
She laughed.
"Kitne badtameez ho tum."
"Sirf tumhare liye." He said, pecking her cheeks.
She carried the tea tray and he held a plate of pakoras with green chutney, munching on the same.
"Suman, bahut acha bana hai." He said.
She just smiled.
She did that a lot. Smiling. Around him.
And she kept smiling as she settled between his legs and lent back, enjoying the warmth of his body.
They sipped their chai together, sometimes talking about an incident that happened that day or something they found funny, laughing with each other and at each other.
They shared their bouts of worry, her worrying about her promotion and him worrying about his presentation. They reassured each other.
The plate of pakoras was soon eaten and the cup of chai finished, and things was nothing more left to share.
But still they enjoyed each other's company, feeling strangely proud that they reached that stage in their relationship where words aren't needed.
And they reveled in silence of their companionship and secrets that will be formed tomorrow, said today.
They looked at the stormy sky, feeling nothing but calm within, for they had each other.
"I love you Suman" he said, kissing the side of her head.
"I love you too Shravan." She said, snuggling back and making herself more comfortable as she closed her eyes and sighed.
"I love you too."



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Posted: 16 April 2016 at 12:00pm | IP Logged
Kirti is your mouce working nowLOL

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Posted: 16 April 2016 at 12:01pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Ri21

Originally posted by .SankaDevi.

Originally posted by Ri21

Originally posted by .SankaDevi.

OMG RIYA I JUST WATCHED YOUR VM IT WAS SOOO EFFIN CUTE I LOVED IT. MY SHRAMAN FEELS ARE ALL OVER THE PLACE RN.


THAANKU Heart
I WANTED TO ADD SOME VISUAL EFFECTS EXCEPT THE BRIGHTNESS THING. but dont have much effects option Ouch

AWW 


WOMAN U SO SWEET Heart But trust me that was all you Heart don't give me credit for your hard work Heart


Also for effects etc. I'll be making a post about that soon, you can manipulate some of the transitions to give it an "effect" wali feel. Heart

if u make a post then let me know. and i need a sound recorder. my windows wala doesn't work Cry

ri.. that VM is Heart

Can't get over it...
LOVEEEDDD IT...

Already watched it 3-4 timesBlushing

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Posted: 16 April 2016 at 12:03pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Sanika.


HOW DOES PIKACHU KEEP UP WITH ASH WITH HIS SO TINY TINY LEGS? Heart

I LOVE PIKACHU. LIKE I USE TO CRY AS I WANTED IT FOR REAL Heart
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Posted: 16 April 2016 at 12:04pm | IP Logged
@Sanika- Totally gentle
Now that you told me romance is not you I could just not imagine Sharavan and SUman romancing.LOL
Like IDK why I feel I love you is just not going to come out form their mouth.
Or maybe it is me who is trying to frame them LOL


Nice wiritng though considering your age back then.
You dont want to see what I wrote as 16LOL

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