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Our Inseparable Hearts || NOTE ON PAGE 11 || PERMANENTLY STOPPED (Page 9)

cuppypie121 IF-Rockerz

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Wow interesting story 
Loved it 
Continue soon 

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..Sugary_Pie.. IF-Rockerz

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Hey everyone!  Big smile Hearty thanks for all the comments for the previous chapter.

Here's Chapter 3.


After a 45 minutes of arteries, tricuspid and bicuspid valves and clotting of blood, which seemed to me like a live tour inside the Human heart, Ms. Woodley at once left the class with her sly smile. No sooner did I even take away my glance from her than Jess started her fangirling about those fashion  models'.

"Oh my god, he was so freaking hot. I guess he's a newbie to the modelling industry. But he's got great scope!!" Jess said entwining her fingers with her long brown curls.

I smiled lightly knowing she wouldn't stop this any time soon.

I kept my eyes fixed at the way her fingers were playing with her hair and those eyes, embellished with thick black kohl and her other hand moving in the air.  I smiled for she always is expressive. I get so involved in talking to her probably because of this. No wonder, there is a plethora of men lined up for her.

"So, when can we start?"

I turned to my left to see Theo. His eyes were too captivating to handle.

"Start what?"

"Preparations for the biology seminar" he said casually.

"Uhm, I don't know. You say?" I said.

"How about tonight?" he kinda' winked.

"Huh?" I widened my eyes for what he just said.

"Tonight? Isn't that early? Can we start tomorrow at university?" I tried explaining.

"Miss, the earlier the better"

I looked at Jess with what-should-I-do-now' look. And to my surprise, she gave me an accept-it look.

I turned back at Theo, who had fixed his glance on me.

I felt a little uncomfortable by the stare, but I replied.

"Hmm okay. But we have to get back home by 8pm"

"Well okay, agreed!"

"And should I come to your place or me to yours"? he asked again casually.

My place'? Are you kidding me? No freaking guy of my age is allowed to enter my house except Robin! I remember once,  there was this guy who kept strolling in my neighbourhood and kind of stalking me. Once, he dared to enter my house and my dad , on seeing him, grilled him to black.

Robin is warmly welcomed to the house because he is a straight guy, always into books and nothing else, a little sweet and mom likes him so much. Okay, add one more, he looks good. Robin has been my friend right since I was 9 years and we get along well. And I have this feeling that he likes me. I don't want to accept this because hey, let's just keep to friendship. He'd be good as a friend rather than boy-friend.

"Hello??" Theo shook me lightly.

"Uh... Yeah I'll see you at your place" I blabbered.

"Cool. Bye Jess and Bye ... Blair" he said my name quite sexily and was soon out of sight.

Okay wait, this guy called Theo bumped into me twice and he starts talking to me and I've got this unknown feeling with him and we're paired together for a Biology seminar and he's calling me to his home and winks at me several times and calls my name in a sexy tone and I stay clueless all this time... with..my eyes .. wide open... and cheeks ...a little.. pink.

"Good girl. Theo's a nice guy and I'm sure he'll make you feel comfortable with him soon. Look at me, I've got Jason as my partner. God!" Jessica said in a peevish voice, being not very happy with Jason as her team partner.

I don't understand why Jason is disliked by Jessica. He's a nice guy and he's got this crush upon Jessica. He proposed to her once but sadly was rejected by Jess. She's not always an angel.

But Jason has never stopped liking her but he never troubles her by being a pyscho-after-love-failure. Jason is the second guy after Robin that I like as a friend. Though Jess chides me for talking to him but he's a great friend of mine.

"Come on he's not bad. Infact he's awesome. You should give him a chance babe." I tried explaining to Jessica.

She gave a straight fake smile which immediately turned into a sarcastic Really?' face.

I knew that if I would talk about Jason for one more minute, Jess would start her #NoTalkForAWeek trend.

So we headed off to our homes after college.


When I reached home, I found mom sitting on the couch looking defeated. On asking, she said me that this little monster in our house has gone mad at her for not taking him to the Avengers movie. So I thought I'll handle this little monster.

"Hey brother. Want some pringles?"

"NO." Chris yelled.

"Oh-kay. So how was school today?"

"Fine." He said almost irritated.

"And what about your super cars? You're not seen with them these days."

"Is it necessary for you to ask a pile of questions to me now?" Chris finally yelled with massive aggression visible on that tiny little nose, which had turned red.

I laughed quietly for which Chris gave me a sharp look.

"So little brother, won't you come with your sister to watch that Super-hero movie?" I kind of winked.

Chris turned around to face me. Apparently, he was surprised.

"Which Super-hero movie are you talking about?"

"Uhm, what's that.. There's this green huge man..." I tried explaining (in reality, I was teasing Chris!)

"You mean THE HULK?" asked Chris euphorically.

"Oh yeah him..and there's this red steeled man and there's also this arrow guy ..." even before I ended Chris shouted,

"That's AVENGERS!!!"

"Are you gonna take me to Avengers?" he asked with his big green eyes.

"Yup!" I readily said.

"Wow! You're the best sister ever" I could feel myself hugged and planted a hundred kisses on my cheeks.

"Okay boy, I gotta go now." I waved a bye at my little monster for which he smiled really wide.

Before I leave the room I turned back at Chris and huffed "Monsters in crime". And Chris accurately and simultaneously said it with me.


"Tring. Ring" I pressed the doorbell.

I once saw myself. I had worn an orange tee and paired it up with a beige shorts. Hair left free and a slight tinge of pink gloss.

"Hey. Hi Ms. Jones", Theo greeted me on opening the door.

"Hi." I said softly.

"Come on. Hop in" he said casually.


That's all guys. I apologize for getting late in posting the next chapter. I was busy with college.

Anyways people, hope you liked this part.

Please do comment and like lots!


Reshma x

Edited by ..Sugary_Pie.. - 30 July 2016 at 7:10am

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Posted: 30 July 2016 at 7:52am | IP Logged
That was awesome girl
Though u updated late..
So umm I had practically forgotten the previous chapter but I did recollect soon !!!
Waiting for next chapter wen they will be working together on ... Umm yeah 'biology seminar' !

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Posted: 30 July 2016 at 8:32am | IP Logged
Res ..will unres soon .. n reply ur scraps too soon baby .. sorry gtg nw ..
Pinky promise ;) will unres asap n reply too :)

Princess i have commented separately for ch 2 n 3 on page 10 .. Smile

Edited by chinudolly - 31 July 2016 at 11:48pm

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awesomee updateClap

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Posted: 31 July 2016 at 7:09am | IP Logged
Awesome it is Resh..Clap
Waiting for more..Day Dreaming

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Posted: 31 July 2016 at 7:15am | IP Logged
Originally posted by KrishnaPriyaa

Res Embarrassed
Unres Embarrassed
Chapter 1:
It was fantastic ClapClap
I love Blair and Jess' friendship. It is so sweet and beautiful Day Dreaming
I can relate to Blair as well. I am like that most of the time LOL
Chris and his hot wheels ROFL

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