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DFL RomCom Ishtyle! Chap 13 up on 1st Sept on Pg 21! (Page 7)

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Posted: 15 May 2016 at 11:46am | IP Logged
Awesome update
Loved it
Well written
Plz continue soon

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Posted: 15 May 2016 at 12:21pm | IP Logged
Lovely update. Afreen and rakshas meet again LOL waiting for next.

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Posted: 16 May 2016 at 8:42am | IP Logged
 Actually I wanted to read combined story of Maaneet and Arhi so while searhing I came across DFL and wen I read first few parts I became very curious to read further.. and I loved ur writing... that's y completed all the parts in 3 days LOL 
Coming back to romcom.. I loved this update... I was waiting for the update Big smile
So ASR was very much stressed out and affected seeing his motormouth in that condition... 
and Akash also left him as he understood ASR :)
So khushi finally visited Shantivan... and except Geet and Arnav's room Anji showed her the whole house...
Geet woke up and introduced herself wen she came to knw about khushi. .. Loved Anji and Geet's talk SmileBig smile lol and Geet didn't inform Mami.. and Anjali knew mami would panic and Akash being overprotective will order to search the whole house LOLLOL
Anji went down to tell Akash about Geet,.. And Geet sat down even Khushi was lil concerned seeing marks on her hands and legs.. while khushi was admiring the poolside Geet wasn't feeling well and wen she saw Khushi confused she pointed towards Arnav's room..
And Arnav was very much concerned and upset seeing Geet like this.. he just wanted her to annoy with her continuous chatter LOL I just loved it.. please ASR ko Geet tang kare ek update me LOLLOL 
And finally Khushi and ASR came face to face both were shocked seeing each other.. and Arnav touched her cheeks and Geet was feeling lil better and she was literally shocked seeing the scene..and wen Arnav felt she was more shocked LOL.. I loved hw Arnav flirted with Khushi LOLLOL
bt before they talk further Anji came and she introduced ASR and Khushi and Aakash scolded Geet.. poor Geet.. LOL

Haila wen Khushi was leaving Arnav winked and Khushi was Shocked
they both were thinking about each other,, Arnav wanted to get grip and Khushi just prayed that Arnav doesn't come to knw abouth that engagement lie! 

Loved the update.. waiting for the next update Big smile take care :)

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Posted: 20 May 2016 at 4:12am | IP Logged
Wolaa This is superb!!! I loved DFL and now I'm confident this will be another amazing piece of yours
The first 7 parts was wonderful to read, remembering back all the scenes.
Then the continuity now is another brilliant ones. 

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Posted: 21 May 2016 at 12:07pm | IP Logged
Awesome...

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Posted: 22 May 2016 at 1:35pm | IP Logged
Poor khushi... jalebi is her only escape... lol

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Posted: 22 May 2016 at 2:03pm | IP Logged
wow awesome update loved it thank you for pm.

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Posted: 22 May 2016 at 10:52pm | IP Logged
amazing update 

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