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    I am extremely sorry for the delay. I had typed the update yesterday itself but had some network issues and was not able to post it yesterday.




    Part 2


    Trisha looked at raghav helplessly. She knew that they are totally trapped in such a situation that they can't do anything else rather than spending the whole night inside the car. They don't even have a way to contact someone. She closed her eyes and took a deep breath.


    Trisha: ok fine! Hamare paas iske alava koi aur option bhi nahi hai.


    Raghav too came inside the car and sat in the driver seat. Trisha pulled back her seat and lied down. Raghav too did the same. Trisha looked at the sky which was visible from the front glasses of the car. It was a full moon day and sky was full of stars. Trisha smiled.


    Trisha: kitni sundhar hai na iss tarah aasman ko dekhe toh. Poori chand aur tara pata nahi kab mein ne iss tarah aasman ko dekha.


    Raghav smiled.


    Raghav: par mein toh har roozz chaand ko dekhti hoon.


    Trisha: really! Woh kaise?


    Raghav: har rooz ko tume dekh thi hoon na.


    Trisha: raghav!


    Trisha just couldn't stop blushing. Her cheeks adorned with red. Raghav could visibly see that trisha was blushing. She looked hot while blushing. Oh god! He prayed silently to god to help him to control his feelings.


    These kind of moments with her is the main usp of his life. He closed him eyes. He just couldn't stop smiling remembering trisha's blushing face.



    After sometime


    Raghav remembered that on the way when they were coming he had noticed a dhabha. He looked outside & by judging the topography he could see that dhaba is somewhere near. Though he didn't voice out he was not feeling secure in car at this hour in this highway road. If he was alone then it wouldn't have mattered. But trisha is also with him. Her safety is important. He called trisha who had gone into a mild sleep.


    Raghav: trisha jab hum yahan aa rahi thi mein yahan aas pass ek dhabha dekha tha. Muhej lagtha hai hume ek baar ja kar dekhna chahiye. Ho saktha hai hum wahan se kisiko contact kar sake.


    Trisha: ok! Aisa hai toh hum ek baar ja kar dekhthey hai. Hum gadhi lock karkey jayengey. Aur subah hum kisi mechanic ko bulakar ghadi theek karengey.


    Raghav: ok lets go trisha.


    Raghav locked the car. They walked towards dhabha. It was hardly 5 minutes walk. Since it was almost one o clock in night dhabha was empty. They saw an elderly lady in the counter. They went towards her. She scanned and looked raghav and trisha. Raghav being a psychiatrist immediately understood what's going inside her mind.


    Raghav: suniye hamara ghadi raaste mein kharabh hogaya. Aur humare mobile phones mein network bhi nahi hai. Kya hum yahan se ek call karsaktha hoon?


    Lady: dekhiye saab yahan ki phone karabh hai kuch dino se. Aur hamare pass koi mobile phone bhi nahi hai.


    That lady was looking at trisha through her eyes even while answering to raghav. And raghav noticed this.


    Raghav: dekhiye agar mein akhela ho toh koi parishani nahi thi par mere saath meri biwi bhi hai aur woh do mahina pregnant bhi hai.


    Trisha was astonished. She unknowingly started blushing. And she became totally red. She just couldn't look at him. She was feeling too shy.


    Lady: lagtha hai aap dono ki nayi nayi shaadi hui hai. Aap ki biwi toh bahuth sharam aarahi hai.


    That's when he noticed trisha. She was totally red due to blushing. She looked so gorgeous while blushing. Trisha and blushing that was quite a rare site.


    Lady: dekho raat bahuth ho chuka hai. Aur iss haalath mein aapki biwi ko aaram karana chahiye. Aap log ek kaam kyun nahi kar lethey yahan ek kamra hai aap log aaj raat yahan rukh jayiye aur kal subah hum ek mechanic ko bula kar aapki ghadi theekh kar leyengey.


    Raghav: theek hai. Shukhriya!


    Trisha looked at raghav. He assured her through his eyes.


    Lady: bitiya tume bhook lag rahi hai kya? Mein tumarey liye kuch khaney ke liye ley aao?


    Trisha: nahi aunty ji thank you!


    Lady: phir toh tume dhooth peena padhega. Raat itna ho chukha hai aur iss halath mein itni dher bina kuch khayey aur peeyey nahi rahna chahiye. Aur upar se tum kitni dhugli padli ho.


    Trisha: nahi aunty ji muhjey dhooth pasand nahi hai.


    But the lady had already gone inside. Trisha stared at raghav who was having a naughty smile on his face.


    Trisha: raghav! Stop smiling! It's not funny. Aur kya hai yeh saab? Tum uss aurat ko choot bholne ki kya zarrorath thi?


    Raghav: trisha tumne dekha nahi kiss tarikey uss aurat tume dekh rahi thi? Bhusurgh aurat hai. Unhe sach bata de thi toh bhi woh tumari bare mein galath soch thi aur mein nahi chathi koyi bhi tume uss nazar se dekhe.


    Trisha calmed a bit.


    Trisha: aur pregnancy?


    Raghav: trisha hamesha ek pregnant aurat ko consideration milthi. Uss lady ne hume yahan rehna jaga sirf issliye de dhi kyunki unhe lagtha hai tum pregnant ho. Aur itni raat ko hum highway mein ghadi mein rukhna it's not safe. Especially for you.


    Trisha: aur muhey dhooth bhi peena pad rahaha hai.


    Raghav smiled. Aur uskeliye mein kuch nahi kar saktha.


    By that time that lady came with milk for trisha. Trisha was forced to drink it even without liking it. When she was drinking milk raghav came near her and touched her abdomen with his hands. Trisha shivered under his touch.


    Raghav: i know jaan tume dhooth peena bilkul bhi pasand nahi hai. Par baby ki growth ke liye dhooth toh peena padega.


    Trisha blushed profusely. The dhabha owner lady smiled seeing them. She could see pure love in between the couple.



    Trisha and raghav looked at the room allotted to them. It was a small room with a double coat bed and an attached bathroom. They hardly had space to stand. But the room was extremely neat and well maintained. They both didn't look at each other. The situation they had landed up was awkward rather than cute or romantic. Trisha went to the washroom to freshen up. After she came out raghav too went to freshen up. After coming out from washroom he saw trisha setting up bed and putting the pillows in middle of the coat.


    Raghav: tum yeh pillows ko coat ki middle mein rekh kar border kyun banarahi ho?


    Trisha: sone ke liye. Mein right side mein aur tum left side pe.


    Raghav came near her and whispered on her ears huskily.


    Raghav: tume yakeen hai tum raat mein yeh border paar karke mere pass aaogi toh nahi hai na?


    Trisha: raghav! Chup chap apne side pe jake so jao aur muhey bhi sone tho.


    Trisha switched off the lights and lied down before getting teased by raghav further.



    Sleep was far away from raghav. Though lights are offed there was small amount of moon light coming through the windows and raghav could see trisha's face. She looked like a fairy while sleeping. The moon light only added the beauty of her face. They were lying down so close yet he felt far from her. Even though only a small border with pillows was in between them.He remembered his first meeting with trisha in dilip chauhan's office. He had just joined CBI. He was selected to the newly formed special crime unit only because of his observational skills and his psychiatric knowledge. He only knew that he had a female colleague who apparently is an young girl who had just finished her college and joined cbi. Her honesty, straightforwardness and being a strict follower of law and order was noticed during her training period in cbi and that made her the team leader of the special unit of cbi. He couldn't deny the fact that when he met trisha for the first time he was attracted to trisha. After all she is beautiful. And more than that she had an attitude which could make any man fall on her knees. Initially they both didn't get well together. After all they were poles apart in thinking. But in these 8 years working together they have became comfortable each other and they have understood each other so well. He himself didn't knew when he had fallen in love with her. He just couldn't imagine a life without her. He himself didn't knew when he slept looking at trisha.



    Trisha woke up when she heard someone's murmur. The light sleeper she was, she heard raghav murmuring something in his sleep. She understood that he had bad dreams regarding his past. She learned from dr.kammath that raghav have sleep issues due to his past memories. Trisha removed the pillows in between them and moved towards him. She kept her one hand on his chest and the other one on his hairs. She caressed his hairs.


    Trisha: raghav relax! Its only a dream. I am there with you.


    She kissed on his forehead. He stopped murmuring and pulled her to his chest in his sleep unknowingly. She lied on his chest and she herself didn't knew she slept off lying in his arms.



    Next day



    Raghav opened his eyes slowly when the light rays from window hit his eyes. After a long time he had a satisfaction of a complete sleep. He felt some light weight on his chest. That's when he noticed trisha was sleeping on his chest. His both hands are around her waist and there legs are entangled. He remembered last night he had dreams about his dad's murder and that's when someone consoled him and kissed on his forehead. He realised it was none other than trisha. Wait did trisha hugged him and kissed him? He took deep breaths remembering that.


    Trisha opened her eyes when she felt someone's hot breath on her head. She realised that she had accidently slept off in raghav's arms. Her eyes met with raghav's. She was feeling shy.


    Raghav ( softly): mein ne kaha tha na raat mein tume aapne aap ko rokh nahi paogey aur mere pass aa jayegi. Dekho waise hi hua.


    Trisha didn't knew what to say.


    Trisha: woh raat mein tum neendh mein kuch bhadbada rahi thi. Aur mein sirf tume console karna chathi thi.


    Raghav: neendh mein takhleef muhej ho rahi thi aur becheyni tume ho raha hai. Ais kyun hai trisha?


    Trisha didn't knew what to say. What all he was saying is correct. When she saw raghav getting disturbed in his sleep she just wanted to console him.


    Raghav: waise trisha thanks.


    Trisha: thanks kisliye?


    Raghav: bahuth saalo ke baad tumari wajey se mein teek se so payi.


    Trisha smiled.


    Trisha: thanks bolne ki zarrorath nahi hai. Mein hamesha tumari saath hongi.


    Raghav: hamesha?


    Trisha: hoon. Hamesha!


    Raghav: trisha meri past aur meri situation tum kab thak aisey mere liye intezaar karogey?


    Trisha: mein ne tume khabhi bhi yeh sab keha kar parishan kiya? Nahi na.


    Raghav: par tum apni gharwalo se kya kehdhoongi?


    Trisha: tum fikhar math karo mein unhe samjdhungi.


    Raghav was at loss of words. The determination in trisha's voice astonished him. He knew trisha is a composed women. She is never confused or dramatic like usual girls. She exactly know what she wants in her life. But even in his dreams he didn't expect trisha to open up in front of him like this. He totally was in a dilemma. He knew he loves her a lot. He can't imagine a day without her. But his past, without clearing it he can never lead a peaceful life. Moreover he don't want to put trisha's life in danger. But at the same time he don't want to hurt trisha and her feelings. He was abnormally silent after that.



    So that's it for now. I assure teaser will be in next part. Since the story became too long i had to cut it into two parts.






Edited by Az07 - 22 April 2016 at 10:00am

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Posted: 22 April 2016 at 10:34am | IP Logged
Aww such a cute update. Really enjoyed reading it a lot .loved raghav concern for trisha about staying in the car alone that to on the highway. the dhabba wala scene was just awesome. kaash we could see something like this .I could really imagine all the thing .Raghav said main Akela tha to thik tha but mere Saath meri preggy wife bhi hai OMG I could really imagine trisha expression after that.the milk penne wala scene was awesome. Raghav was really successful in convincing the lady that trisha is his wife ...the bedroom wala scene was so awesome raghav bhi n.a. trisha ko tease Karne ka Mauka nahi Costa.Really loved this awesome update really loved it a lot

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Posted: 22 April 2016 at 10:38am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Tasha1994

Aww such a cute update. Really enjoyed reading it a lot .loved raghav concern for trisha about staying in the car alone that to on the highway. the dhabba wala scene was just awesome. kaash we could see something like this .I could really imagine all the thing .Raghav said main Akela tha to thik tha but mere Saath meri preggy wife bhi hai OMG I could really imagine trisha expression after that.the milk penne wala scene was awesome. Raghav was really successful in convincing the lady that trisha is his wife ...the bedroom wala scene was so awesome raghav bhi n.a. trisha ko tease Karne ka Mauka nahi Costa.Really loved this awesome update really loved it a lot


Thank you dear
Raghav is always worried for Trisha and her safety
Raghav can do anything after all he is a master in mind game
Yes Raghav never leave a chance to tease or irritate Trisha.
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Posted: 22 April 2016 at 10:49am | IP Logged
Lovely update dear.
First in the car raghav saying that he sees moon everyday, how romantic?
Then the dhaba scene, can imagine Trisha's shock and dismay along with inside happiness at being presented as his pregnant wife.

Doodh uhhh use bilkul nahi pasand but pregnancy me peena padega, so hilarious.

Then the night room wala scene just awesome. How she gets worried for him whenever he is in problem. She'll do anything for him. Her determination after their confession, too good. After all she isn't a confused soul. She knows what she wants in life.

All in all a great job dear. Will eagerly wait for next update.

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Posted: 22 April 2016 at 10:55am | IP Logged
Originally posted by braveheartdoc

Lovely update dear.
First in the car raghav saying that he sees moon everyday, how romantic?
Then the dhaba scene, can imagine Trisha's shock and dismay along with inside happiness at being presented as his pregnant wife.

Doodh uhhh use bilkul nahi pasand but pregnancy me peena padega, so hilarious.

Then the night room wala scene just awesome. How she gets worried for him whenever he is in problem. She'll do anything for him. Her determination after their confession, too good. After all she isn't a confused soul. She knows what she wants in life.

All in all a great job dear. Will eagerly wait for next update.


Thanks for your lovely comment
Yes Trisha is his full moon
Being presented as Mrs. Raghavsinha along with pregnancy though embarrassed initially she was happy inside and she can never see him in pain yes she is not a confused soul she exactly knows what she wants in her life and all these events and there closeness gave her courage to confess her feelings indirectly
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Posted: 22 April 2016 at 10:57am | IP Logged
Lovely part!
Kept blushing throughout!Embarrassed
A mention of raghav rememberng the dhaba ..wonderful!
Trisha mentoning to be there for him forever despite the odds showed how much she loves him.
The part where she consoles him was wonderfully written
Raghav using the moon as a metaphor for her is beautiful.
The act put up in front of the lady was a treat!
On the whole, a lovely part.
Waiting for the next update. Do upload soon!

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Posted: 22 April 2016 at 11:08am | IP Logged
Originally posted by nymphadora12

Lovely part!
Kept blushing throughout!Embarrassed
A mention of raghav rememberng the dhaba ..wonderful!
Trisha mentoning to be there for him forever despite the odds showed how much she loves him.
The part where she consoles him was wonderfully written
Raghav using the moon as a metaphor for her is beautiful.
The act put up in front of the lady was a treat!
On the whole, a lovely part.
Waiting for the next update. Do upload soon!

Thanks for ur lovely comment
Well both loves each other a lot and all the events taken place and there unexpected closeness gave Trisha the confidence to confess about her feelings for him indirectly
And yes she is his moon u will understand more about it in next part
Though it was an act in front of the lady both of them enjoyed it
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Posted: 22 April 2016 at 11:28am | IP Logged
Awesome update. Totally ratrilicious. Trisha looks like moon for RaghavEmbarrassed.  Love the flirting and Pregnancy scence was hilarious.Wink RaTri in one bed room and Trisha and Raghav sleeping together was such a romantic situation. Trisha consoled Raghav this shows how much he matters for her. All the ratri scenes are so cute and romantic that they are making me crazy. They love each other madly but there nature and duty don't let them express there feelings. Hope there will a direct confesion of Ratri in next update as Trisha said that she will wait for him and will stay forever but they still have to say the three magical words to each other that is I LOVE YOU.  Waiting for the next update.Embarrassed 

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