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Ratri TS: Ehsaas! last part on pg 11 (Page 13)

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Posted: 24 April 2016 at 7:53am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Desaitara1234

Such a awesome update loved the story a lot it's simply awesome. Loved the RaTri confession scene a lot. Thanks a lot  for this awesome update 
thank you so much dear

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Posted: 26 April 2016 at 12:43am | IP Logged
lovely update
oh god raghav i love u bol raha hai 
aur trisha interrogation kar rahi haiROFL
too good
nice ending

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Posted: 26 April 2016 at 1:51am | IP Logged
Originally posted by bloomie

lovely update
oh god raghav i love u bol raha hai
aur trisha interrogation kar rahi haiROFL
too good
nice ending


Thank you dear
Wanted confession to be unique
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Posted: 26 April 2016 at 4:13am | IP Logged

      Part 2... 


      Trisha looked at the sky which was visible from the front glasses of the car. It was a full moon day and sky was full of stars. Trisha smiled.

      Trisha: kitni sundhar hai na iss tarah asman ko dekhe toh. Poori chand aur tara pata nahi kab mein ne iss tarah aasman ko dekha.

      Raghav: par mein toh har roozz chaand ko dekhti hoon.

      Raghav: har rooz ko tume dekh thi hoon na.

    This was phenomenal.. i mean Raghav is saying these kind of words n that to his boss... WinkEmbarrassed Lovely expressions... Clap

Raghav being a psychiatrist immediately understood what's going inside her mind
He exactly did what was needed... he never wanted her image to lie on stake... cos human minds are so narrow that they cant understand a frndship between a man n a woman,,,,

Raghav: trisha tumne dekha nahi kiss tarikey uss aurat tume dekh rahi thi? Bhusurgh aurat hai. Unhe sach bata de thi toh bhi woh tumari bare mein galath soch thi aur mein nahi chathi koyi bhi tume uss nazar se dekhe.
Exactly my point... He has a great regard for Trisha that one wrong thought from anyone can spoil her image n thats not acecptable to Raghav.. 

    Trisha woke up when she heard someone's murmur. The light sleeper she was, she heard raghav murmuring something in his sleep. She understood that he had bad dreams regarding his past. She learned from dr.kammath that raghav have sleep issues due to his past memories. Trisha removed the pillows in between them and moved towards him. She kept her one hand on his chest and the other one on his hairs. She caressed his hairs.

    I liked this scene... StarClap He was actually murmuring out of fears of past... n Trisha took care of him as a frind n as a lover too... But more as an affectionate gesture... Loved it... !

      Raghav ( softly): mein ne kaha tha na raat mein tume aapne aap ko rokh nahi paogey aur mere pass aa jayegi. Dekho waise hi hua.

      Trisha didn't knew what to say.

      This was funny... Tongue N Trisha kya no one had the answers.. WinkBig smileLoved the teasing raghav... He is back... ! 

        Raghav: neendh mein takhleef muhej ho rahi thi aur becheyni tume ho raha hai. Ais kyun hai trisha?

        Trisha didn't knew what to say. What all he was saying is correct. When she saw raghav getting disturbed in his sleep she just wanted to console him.

        Shud we call this the Ehsaas... that they both are feeling n feeling for so long... Embarrassed

        Raghav was at loss of words. The determination in trisha's voice astonished him. He knew trisha is a composed women. She is never confused or dramatic like usual girls. She exactly know what she wants in her life. But even in his dreams he didn't expect trisha to open up in front of him like this. He totally was in a dilemma. He knew he loves her a lot. He can't imagine a day without her. But his past, without clearing it he can never lead a peaceful life. Moreover he don't want to put trisha's life in danger. But at the same time he don't want to hurt trisha and her feelings. He was abnormally silent after that.
      She has made him speechless... But her words are true... Now its Raghav's turn to do sumthing to avoid his hesitations n his past giving no effects to Trisha n their life... I loved Trisha's determined mind... she knows what she is up to n what can befall upon her n her relation as Raghav's past is full of danger n his own emotions are hard to tackle at that time... ! 
      Lets see what happens next... Off to read the next one... Thanks for understanding ,,,, your reply at pm gave me much support... otherwise i was feeling very bad... EmbarrassedLOL
      Thanks Uma,,,, ! StarClap


Edited by bawaswift - 26 April 2016 at 4:13am

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Trisha: raghav mein tumhari parishani nahi thakath bana chahthi thi. Tum fikar math karo. Sab theekh ho jayega. Aur meri chintha bilkul math karo. Mein sab sambhalongi.She could understand his dilemma.
I loved how Trisha managed to see the things that even Raghav cant... The love is so pure... that she knowing his dilemma ,, made him relieved of all the tensions henceforth.. ! Amazing girl Trisha is... StarClap

 Its not as simple as that. He knew trisha knows the intensity of the situation.
Raghav knows her situation as well... Actually they both are feeling for each other n unexpressive Raghav has to take the front seat n do sumthing.. !


Raghav smiled hearing her words. How well she knows him. Even without him voicing out she knows exactly what's going on inside his mind.
The more they talked,, the more they were closer to their hearts... 

Trisha: agar tum muhey apne baho se chodoge toh tab mein yahan se udaa paogey aur tayar ho paogey.
hahaha... this was unnoticed by even me... LOL But great they talked so much in that position... WinkTongue


Raghav smiled and replied: beti. Bilkul meri trisha ki tarah

Trisha too smiled hearing his answer.

Life set hai dono ki... EmbarrassedStar


 After biding good bye to raghav trisha went near her car and while she opening her car raghav came near her and whispered in her ears huskily.
The first night mention blushed her... but for him.. he totally enjoyed this teasing... Wink


But now seeing trisha blushing and smiling all alone so obvious to herself her mother confirmed that trisha has someone in her life
I liked her mother's visual... She knows of something happening in her life... but is ready to wait for her to come n tell... Mothers are always worried... But here i saw a concerned mother of two... n worried for their future.. !

But now its high time that he show some responsibility towards her. Though he know trisha is not like usual girls who will bully about the future and irritates, he has to understand that she has some responsibility towards her family too. Just because she loves him and is ready to wait for him he can't keep her waiting till the end of her life. That will be too selfish of him.
He is totally responsible for every outcome... I liked him thinking this way,, ClapClap

Jinti bhi strong kyun na hai woh ek ladki. Usse kuch limitations hai hamari society mein. Trisha tume aachi tarki ke se jaanti hoon. Tumara khayal bhi rakthi hoon. Unhe tumare baraey mein sab kuch pata hai. So i think you really need to give a chance in your life. Aur raghav tum iss tarah apni dad ki khooni ke liye apni aaj karabh kar li toh tumara dad ko bhi acha nahi lageyga.
Good advise by a very nice doc... I liked how he judged the situation n advised Raghav... A girl's situation is not that easier... but i loved how even Trisha managed n consoled Raghav from his depression,,, 

He knew what all dr.Kammath had said was correct. He need to start living in his present. He knew no one else can understand him better than trisha. As she said she wants to be his strength; he too wants her care and affection. The way trisha managed him last night when he was disturbed in sleep made him amazed. Not even his medications have worked in his sleepless nights.

Right move... !!!! Trisha is n will always be there for her... He only have to take th3 first step... !


Its high time that he give a chance in his life.

Exactly... Star


 He himself wondered why he is behaving like a love stuck teenager. Just like some romantic hero in stories he had came to meet trisha in this midnight. He knows trisha stays upstairs and while climbing the pipeline of the building he murmured himself: i just can't believe what trisha had done to me.
LOL What a situation he is in... Wink He like a love stuck teenager climbing the... Uff the Love... LOL

Trisha smiled. Last night when he called her as his moon she just thought that he was casually saying it to tease her. She didn't expect that he really mean it. He took the chain from her hands and put it around her neck.
Beautiful ... Awesome epitome of love... ! Moon played the metaphor n she is all the way called a moon by him... not as it is... but as a real expression,, with love n passion of Raghav for Trisha... Heart
Lovely ending... StarClap
Uma... this was a lovely story,, n i liked a stronger Trisha for whose love Raghav did what he shud have.. ! Miracles happens when love strikes... and when love is realised,,, there is nothing that can come in between the lovers... ! 
Thanks... !!! 

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Just finished my exams for this sem. today. 
Off to read the chapter, sorry for being late.

Love U Uma Heart

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Lovely ClapClap
Uma, i just loved the way this Ehsaas came into being. U have meticulously provided us with the magic of RaTri and the realization that Raghav felt in the end. Beauty lies in the pen with which u wrote !!!StarStar
A very strong Trisha is much much liked. She not only handled Raghav and his emotions, but also took care of her mother's feelings and also the team as the two special agents were missing. She accomplished her work with every efforts, but at last as a girl her heart thinks of Raghav and him only. Awww Day Dreaming
I liked rather loved that they both were talking and discussing their life in a very " comfortable " position Wink Their realization made them looked blushing and U have given us a chance to smile and blush too. Uma, this was fantastic !Blushing
Loved Raghav still teasing his boss for the 1st night they spend under one roof Wink It was lovely night for both, they understood both much better. 
So, her mother knows that someone special has come in her life. I wanted some scene of her later, but the way it ended, it looked more pretty. 
I liked that Raghav gave himself some time to think of his life with Trisha and his apprehensions. I liked the way his doctor talked to him about the life he must live with Trisha. Danger is everywhere, but letting Trisha wait for longer is not a good thing.
 Raghav knew that he was correct and so did he preformed like a teenager climbing up to his beloved's room Wink I liked him saying what Trisha has dome to him. It's love man, and U can't keep yourself away from it and from her. 
I loved Trisha interrogating him how he came to her room. He was bound to confess and confessed too, and there she was asking him totally out of subject questions LOLLOL
But i loved how he confessed, and later made her to do the same. Beautiful pendant, lovely couple, love in the air and the necklace around her neck put by Raghav. Wow, what a scenic beauty. Loveeed it Heart
I loved him saying that he is the star in the pendant and she his moon. Elegance prevailed and the confession became the time to rejoice forever ! 
Nice ending, i wanted more but the end came. I loved it loved it and more i love U Uma Hug
Special will be this realization for RaTri and for me too. Loves to U for this very fine beauteous. 
Hugs Hug

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Posted: 26 April 2016 at 7:11am | IP Logged
Originally posted by bawaswift

      Part 2... 


      Trisha looked at the sky which was visible from the front glasses of the car. It was a full moon day and sky was full of stars. Trisha smiled.

      Trisha: kitni sundhar hai na iss tarah asman ko dekhe toh. Poori chand aur tara pata nahi kab mein ne iss tarah aasman ko dekha.

      Raghav: par mein toh har roozz chaand ko dekhti hoon.

      Raghav: har rooz ko tume dekh thi hoon na.

    This was phenomenal.. i mean Raghav is saying these kind of words n that to his boss... WinkEmbarrassed Lovely expressions... Clap

Well he actually meant that 

Raghav being a psychiatrist immediately understood what's going inside her mind
He exactly did what was needed... he never wanted her image to lie on stake... cos human minds are so narrow that they cant understand a frndship between a man n a woman,,,,

People just don't realise the friendship between colleagues if they are male and female 

Raghav: trisha tumne dekha nahi kiss tarikey uss aurat tume dekh rahi thi? Bhusurgh aurat hai. Unhe sach bata de thi toh bhi woh tumari bare mein galath soch thi aur mein nahi chathi koyi bhi tume uss nazar se dekhe.
Exactly my point... He has a great regard for Trisha that one wrong thought from anyone can spoil her image n thats not acecptable to Raghav.. 
He respect her a lot and he can never afford anyone looking at her in a wrong manner 

    Trisha woke up when she heard someone's murmur. The light sleeper she was, she heard raghav murmuring something in his sleep. She understood that he had bad dreams regarding his past. She learned from dr.kammath that raghav have sleep issues due to his past memories. Trisha removed the pillows in between them and moved towards him. She kept her one hand on his chest and the other one on his hairs. She caressed his hairs.

    I liked this scene... StarClap He was actually murmuring out of fears of past... n Trisha took care of him as a frind n as a lover too... But more as an affectionate gesture... Loved it... !

The care he needed for years was given by Trisha 

      Raghav ( softly): mein ne kaha tha na raat mein tume aapne aap ko rokh nahi paogey aur mere pass aa jayegi. Dekho waise hi hua.

      Trisha didn't knew what to say.

      This was funny... Tongue N Trisha kya no one had the answers.. WinkBig smileLoved the teasing raghav... He is back... ! 

      He actually made her speechless 

        Raghav: neendh mein takhleef muhej ho rahi thi aur becheyni tume ho raha hai. Ais kyun hai trisha?

        Trisha didn't knew what to say. What all he was saying is correct. When she saw raghav getting disturbed in his sleep she just wanted to console him.

        Shud we call this the Ehsaas... that they both are feeling n feeling for so long... Embarrassed

        That was indeed an Ehsaas for both 

        Raghav was at loss of words. The determination in trisha's voice astonished him. He knew trisha is a composed women. She is never confused or dramatic like usual girls. She exactly know what she wants in her life. But even in his dreams he didn't expect trisha to open up in front of him like this. He totally was in a dilemma. He knew he loves her a lot. He can't imagine a day without her. But his past, without clearing it he can never lead a peaceful life. Moreover he don't want to put trisha's life in danger. But at the same time he don't want to hurt trisha and her feelings. He was abnormally silent after that.
      She has made him speechless... But her words are true... Now its Raghav's turn to do sumthing to avoid his hesitations n his past giving no effects to Trisha n their life... I loved Trisha's determined mind... she knows what she is up to n what can befall upon her n her relation as Raghav's past is full of danger n his own emotions are hard to tackle at that time... ! 
      Lets see what happens next... Off to read the next one... Thanks for understanding ,,,, your reply at pm gave me much support... otherwise i was feeling very bad... EmbarrassedLOL
      Thanks Uma,,,, ! StarClap
      Trisha is a matured girl she knows what she wants in her life and what exactly she is in to now it's his turn to do something for her 
      No problem I can understand take ur own time and you have given such a lovely comment that means a lot for me 

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