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Ratri TS: Ehsaas! last part on pg 11

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Ratri TS: Ehasaas!


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It was almost 11pm in the night and trisha was still in the cbi headquarters as she had some paper works related to the recent cases which they have solved. Office was almost empty. Except for her & raghav. Even while working on case reports trisha couldn't stop thinking of raghav. Raghav had gone abnormally silent after bikram's shootout. Bikram had saved raghav from getting shot and injured himself. Since they have taken him to hospital on time he was saved. But still had not recovered completely and was on sick leave. Trisha could understand raghav's emotions. After long 20yrs he had got a chance to catch his dad's murderer. But couldn't and top of that he had used cheif's face mask and fooled everyone. When in reality chief was kidnapped. If raghav hadn't seen the face mask everyone would have blamed cheif. Trisha wondered who is this man who had kidnapped the chief of cbi & challenged the entire team. Why is he after raghav? Why is he trying to kill raghav? Trisha shivered by the thought. She remembered when raghav was almost going to get shot. That moment still makes her scared. She closed her eyes and took a deep breath. She knew at the moment she has to do something. Otherwise raghav will go into severe depression. He rarely talks after that incident. Always lost in thoughts. Trisha knew somewhere in heart raghav felt himself responsible for what had happened to chief and bikram. She should somehow bring him out of that. She realised how she missed his cool jovial attitude. She missed his tea sings. Trisha closed her laptop. She took her wallet and mobile phone and went towards raghav's cabin. Raghav was playing with his favourite rubic cube. Trisha knew raghav uses it whenever he needs to relax himself.


Trisha: raghav


Raghav looked at trisha.


Raghav: trisha tum yahan tume kuch chahiye?


Trisha: raghav raat ka barah bajchuka hai aur muhej bahuth bhook lag rahi hai. Suna hai old delhi up highway main ek naya Italian restaurant aya hai. Mein akhele iss waqat nahi jaa saktha so drive pe chalogi mere saath?


Raghav was astonished. He looked at trisha as if he was seeing eighth wonder in the world. Trisha asking him to come for a drive that too at this hour, he knew trisha is a fearless women. She drives alone in late hours. For last 8yrs he has seen her doing that. Now all of a sudden she asking him to accompany doesn't fall on place. He remember once they were on a case investigation he had asked her to come for a drive with him just to lighten her mood how fierce she looked.


Trisha: raghav! Kis soch mein dooba hai? Muhej bahuth bhookh lagrahi hai. Come lets go.


Raghav: ok fine! Lets go.


Raghav didn't want to leave trisha alone at this hour. Though he never voice out he always was tensed whenever trisha drives alone at late night.


Trisha was driving the car. Trisha noticed that raghav was smiling silently.


Trisha: kya hua? Kyun itni hasi aarahi ho tume?


Raghav: trisha mein tume achi taraike se jaanta hoon. Tume italian khaana bilkul bhi pasand nahi hai. Infact tum health conscious ho. Isliye tume salads aur sandwiches pasand hai. Aur tum hamesha office mein aisa kuch banakar khaletey jab tum der raat tak rukhjata toh.


Trisha smiled.


Trisha: arey wah raghav tume toh meri har pasand na pasaand ke bare mein janthey ho.


Raghav: ha pichely 8 saal se dekh rahi hoon. Sach batao trisha aise muhey akhele raat ke bara bajehey drive pe kyun le ja rahi ho? Muhej toh tumari irada kuch theek nahi lagti.


Raghav raised his eyebrows. Trisha smiled mischievously.


Trisha: tume patha hai raghav tumari problem kya hai? Tum na apne aap ke bare mein kuch zyaada upar soch raki hai. Tume lagtha hai tum bahuth zyaada handsome ho aur ladkiya tumre saath waqat bitane mar rahi. Par sorry to say raghav aisa toh bilkul bhi nahi. Tum itni bhi handsome nahi hai jitna tum apne aap ke bare mein soch rah hai.


Raghav smirked. Really?


Trisha: ha really! Its a fact tum jitna jaldi yeh accept karogi na utna tumare liye acha hoga.


Raghav smiled. He himself just couldn't stop wonder how care free he becomes whenever trisha is around. She just make him an innocent and naughty kid which had been hidden inside for years. He had lost his mother when he was very young. He doesn't have much memories about his mom. But as far he could remember trisha resembles a lot to her. His mom too was very strict and disciplined like trisha. At the same very much affectionate, lovable and caring. He used to purposefully irritate his mom when he was a kid. After she passed away his dad became both his mom and dad. He was never mischievous with him. He was very much similar to his dad. After years it was when he met trisha he has brought out his mischievous side only to irritate her. He likes to tease her. Her eyes rolling and desperate warning calls remind him so much of his mom and unknowingly trisha was giving him back his childhood desires.


Raghav came back from his thoughts when trisha stopped the car. Both got out from the car.


Raghav: kahan hai tumari nayi italian resturant? Muhjey toh yahan kuch bhi nahi dikh raha hai. Restaurant toh bahuth door ki baath hai.


Trisha: lagta hai galat jage pe aaya. Chodo lets go back.


Trisha turned towards the car. Suddenly raghav hold her hands. She stood & turned back.


Trisha: kya hua raghav? Haath kyun pakda?


Raghav: trisha tume pata hai tumari problem kya hai? Tum itni straightforward ho ki tum chakar bhi tume choot bholna nahi aati. Agar bolti bhi toh bahuth jald pakda jaati.


Trisha: matlab?


Raghav: mein janti hoon trisha tum yeh sab kyun kar rahi ho.


Trisha: kya


Raghav: sirf issliye kyun ki tum muhey cheer karna chati thi. Apni duniye se bahar lejana chathi thi. Am i correct trisha?


Trisha: raghav mein janti hoon pichele kuch dino se tum par kya beethi hogi. Jis insaan ka talaash tum pichle 20 saal se kar rahi ho woh tume almost milne wala tha. Tumara talaash katham hone wala tha par phir se woh maukha tumare haath se nikal gayi. Aur upar se chief ka kidnapping aur bikram ka shoot out yeh sab tume hilakar rakh diya. Tum itnii khamosh hogi thi. Muhej toh lagraha that tum depression mein ja rahi ho. Tume wapas le aana bahuth zaroori tha. Warna we would have lost you.


Raghav looked at her eyes. He could see how much worried is trisha for him. Her eyes showed so much care for him.


Trisha: raghav i know its not easy for you. Especially after that incident. Par raghav iss tara khamosh ho kar har waaqt usske baare mein soch kar tum apni zindagi barbad toh nahi karsaktha. Raghav i am not saying ki tum apna makshad se peeche hato. Of course tume apne dad ke murderer ko dhoondna hoga aur usse sasa bhi dilwana hai. Aur iss mein tum akhele nahi ho. Hum sab tumare saath hai. In fact yeh sirf tumari ladayi nahi hai. Hum sabka hai. Ek muhjrim ko pakd kar usse kanoon ki hawala karna har ek cop ka karthavya hai.


Raghav: i understand trisha par bees saal hochuka hai. Hume aaj tak uske bare mein kuch bhi nahi pata.


Trisha: raghav pata hai sach ka khoobsurati kya hai? jiitna bhi hum sach ko chupana koshish karti hoona uthne thakath se woh bahar aajatha hai. Chahe woh jitne saal ke baad kyu na ho. Aur woh sach kya woh agent raghav ki nazar se chhup jaye?


Raghav raised his eyebrows.


Raghav: kya baath hai aaj kal tum muhej bahuth tareef kar rahi ho?


Trisha smiled. That's when she has realised he was still holding her hands. She looked at her hands. It was then raghav too realised that he never left her hands all this time. He left her hands immediately. She was not looking at him.


Raghav: trisha raat bahuth ho chuka hai. Hume wapas chalna chahiye.


Trisha nodded her head.


Raghav: trisha chabi do mein drive karthi hoon.


Trisha gave the key to him & went inside the car. The drive was silent. Raghav just couldn't stop thanking trisha inside his heart. How well she has understood him and how easily she was able to bring back the real raghav. He could read others mind and cheer them only because he is a trained psychiatrist by profession. From childhood he has seen his dad doing that. But trisha at times amaze him. He knows that she likes him a lot. He has seen how worried she gets when he is in danger. Even though she mask it by saying its her duty and responsibility as team leader, he knows what he meant to her. Only if his past is not a hindrance he would have confessed his feelings for her by now. He just don't want to put her in danger by becoming close to her. He just can't imagine to lose her. Its only she whom he has now to call as his own in this entire world.


Trisha was revealed that the real raghav is back and that gave her such a great relief. She knew raghav used to attend dr. Kammath's counselling sessions. She has over heard his conversation in phone with doctor. She has never asked him about this. She always wanted him to open up. But after seeing his behaviour for past few days she has met Dr.Kamath secretly as she was hell worried for him. It was he who suggested to her to try to bring him out of his silence. Otherwise it can affect raghav's health.


Both of them came out from there thoughts when they heard a noise. They realised that the car has stopped.


Trisha: kya hua raghav? Gadi kyun rokha tumne?


Raghav: mein kahan rokha? Khudh apne aap rokha.


Trisha: kya?


Raghav: lagtha hai gadi karabh hogayi.


Trisha: oh no raghav.


Raghav: ek minute let me see.


He got down and opened the bonnet of the car. After few seconds he closed it. He came near trisha.


Raghav: trisha gadhi karab hogayi. Hume kisi mechanic ko bulana padega.


Trisha: raat ki bara bhaj chuka hai raghav. Iss waqat kaunsi mechanic apna dhukan khool kar raktha hai?


Raghav: ha. Then lets call a cab.


He took out his mobile only to see that his phone got switched off as he forgot to keep it for charging. He looked at trisha. She understood and took her phone from the wallet only to see that no network in her phone.


She showed it to raghav.


Raghav: awesome! Mera phone bandh hogaya aur tumari phone mein network bhi nahi hai. Hamari gadi bhi karabh hogayi aurr yaha aas paas koi insaan bhi nahi hai madad karne keliye. Aur waise bhi yeh tumara idea tha aisi jaga pe Italian restaurant se dinner karne ka. Ab tumi bataao hum aage kya kare.


Trisha: mein kya jyothish hoon? Muhejy yeh saab hone wala ke 6th sense hoga? Ab jo hona hai wo so hogaya. Ab aagey kya karna hai woh sochthi hoon.


Raghav: kya karna subah hone takh iss gadi mein rukh jati. Aur option nahi hai hamari pass.


Trisha looked at raghav shocked.



So that's it for now. Trisha and raghav all alone. What they are going to do now?


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Edited by Az07 - 23 April 2016 at 9:04am

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Part 1 above
Teaser for part 2 on pg 3
Part 2 on page 9
Last part on pg 11


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me first thanks for the New story off to read it

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Originally posted by Tasha1994

me first thanks for the New story off to read it
I was missing ratri a lot which made me penned down a new story.
take ur own time. waiting for ur review
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Read the first part. Great start. Just this much now. Detailed review I'll give later

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Originally posted by Az07

Originally posted by Tasha1994

me first thanks for the New story off to read it

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I was missing ratri a lot which made me penned down a new story.
<div>take ur own time. waiting for ur review
yeah missing agent raghav. today is first weekend without agent raghav

Edited by Tasha1994 - 16 April 2016 at 2:46am

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Originally posted by Az07

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me first thanks for the New story off to read it

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I was missing ratri a lot which made me penned down a new story.
<div>take ur own time. waiting for ur review

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Originally posted by braveheartdoc

Read the first part. Great start. Just this much now. Detailed review I'll give later


Thanks waiting for ur detailed review

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