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Threeshot : A Matter Of Life And Death Part 3 Page 10/3 May (Page 11)

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Posted: 03 May 2016 at 6:01am | IP Logged
really really liked this TS. the emotions were perfect for yamdoots - not too mushy mushy and not loose either. you did really well here

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Posted: 03 May 2016 at 8:39am | IP Logged
are moti...kya baat kya baat kya baat...kinna mast tha...awesome blossom one...loved it to the core...

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Posted: 03 May 2016 at 11:42pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by BeyondHorizon

It was an interesting readSmilePiya was confused over her own feelings and Abhay over her feelings for himLOLJealousy is an old trick used to bring someone back to you and he used it well I must sayLOLFinally Piya got to know about Abhay's punishment and this was bound to melt her heart. Though she had already lost her heart to him, she needed something to push her and this did the trick. Good one Shreya Thumbs Up


thanks Mandy. Yeah Piya needed to be pushed back too didnt she LOL
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Posted: 03 May 2016 at 11:49pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by ..juhi..

are moti...kya baat kya baat kya baat...kinna mast tha...awesome blossom one...loved it to the core...


Thank you so much!
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Posted: 03 May 2016 at 11:54pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by ..Bournville..

really really liked this TS. the emotions were perfect for yamdoots - not too mushy mushy and not loose either. you did really well here


thanks a lot dishu. I am probably not capable of writing a story without emotions, but I did try to deliberately tamp them down here considering the circumstances.
I'm glad it came across to you and I'm even happier than you understood why I did it.
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Posted: 04 May 2016 at 12:26pm | IP Logged
Just WoW WoW update...made me emotional at confession time...with each flow had many feelings while reading..somewhere *goosebumps* too!Beautiful written and i love ur some witty lines... and possessive Abhay...!Unexpected update...i predicted something else but i loved this one...enjoyed reading and it was one of ur mind blowing writing!



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Posted: 04 May 2016 at 12:54pm | IP Logged
Wow! Another brilliant story from you! Clap

It was different, experimental yet beautifully written. The scenes between Abhiya were really very realistic even though they were supposed to be Yamaduts. That's the thing I love about your stories- REALISTIC. Clap

Now , again I am speechless. Really, nothing much to say! Big smile

And...will be waiting for your next work! Smile
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AwesomeClap  aahhh am seriously addicted to your writing . Eagerly waiting Smile

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