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Software Symphony 65 "Playthings" (Page 74)

sonalgupta2004 IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 27 June 2016 at 9:10am | IP Logged
For DEL-HKG was the longest flight known to mankind that night 6 years ago, This January he was unable to head home on the day she had passed which had been the day after Pongal, but he had flown down from Bangkok (after meeting with Sukrit)for a day on barsi day though for a few hours and had returned to Paris...two weeks ago

Like always feel so sorry for dude
One cant even imagine how he must hav felt!!!

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..sush.. IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 27 June 2016 at 9:17am | IP Logged
I feel so bad for dude..
And happy that Ii is finding solace in r&b

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jyothi_cool IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 27 June 2016 at 9:48am | IP Logged
I just wish r&b can finally find peace 

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shidin0117 IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 27 June 2016 at 9:57am | IP Logged
After reading the last two updates esp. appa and II's convo...I felt so homesick, I wanted to run back to India and its just two weeks since I came here. 
And the disparity in everything is glaringly obvious...Angry...but I am missing the bengaluru water and my parents the most.Cry

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shidin0117 IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 27 June 2016 at 10:04am | IP Logged
loved the way II asked for a hug...and the bond they share became obvious. Whatever insecurities II has she knows deep down she can completely depend on dude...he has been there whenever it matters. 
But yeah as Jyothi says I really wish he finds it in him to let go of the pain and find some semblance of peace...its painful to read about his grief.

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shidin0117 IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 27 June 2016 at 10:06am | IP Logged are just a master in writing...some updates just grip you in heart...esp.. the small details you add. 

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Tuc_Mob Senior Member

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Posted: 27 June 2016 at 10:57am | IP Logged
Back on the track both of them.
Last two updates are heart touching.

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Nisha0604 IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 27 June 2016 at 11:25pm | IP Logged

I HAVE to do a foochar part

Party & Politicians

I have to do a foochar part, every few days... its an addiction

"Umm... u dont have to tell Daddee" Nivi whispered, awkward and nervous

"Apdeena? I shud hide it?" II demanded, Sahana squirmed like a ball of jello in her arms
II smacked her butt

"Stoppp!!" she warned

"Amma I didnt mean to" Nivi was almost in tears

"they look up to you, they worship you, they follow you from room to room, this is not done kanna" II said sadly

Nivi had invited, Macy, Greg and a "bunch" of kids from her class to spend the summer day playing outside in the sprinkler, 
and then play tennis and then have lunch, she had picked a day when the twins were at Rohini

It just broke II's heart

"You are so big now, your brothers cramp your lifetsyle?" II asked choking
She imagined the soft cheeks and those bigg eyes and how they would react to seeing the soaked lawn and the slip and slide drying out in the sun
The crushed ice maker brought out to the front porch
They wud know there was a party and they werent invited

Nivi sat in a corner hugely upset twirling her straw nervously
James and Chuck whimpered by her feet

Ranjan paced the kitchen afraid

sahana moaned in II's arms wanting freedom, II handed Ranjan the fat blob

"Chhadd gudiya" he whispered

"I DID... I let her have her party, the friends came at 8 and played until 6" Ii said firmly

"she feels bad betaji, safai karwayin gudiya" he said

"No Dad... not until the boys see what they missed" Ii whispered

Nivi cried as she imagined her brothers' shocked faces

"Amma they are always talking gibberish, and they dont give us privacy" Nivi mumbled

"ENNADI privacy, u are TEN" Ii warned

R&B returned from meetings, he had no idea what had happened

sahana lay on Ranjan's shoulder and sucked her thumb

R&B walked over to II, she looked hassled, in her wrap around tie and dye skirt and sleeveless spaghetti blouse
She looked like a tall stick
He hugged her shamelessly in front of his Dad

Sahana growled

"whats going on II?" he asked pushing his hair back as it fell on his forehead teasing her bare shoulder

"She partied all day, after sending the twins to Rohini" II began to cry

He was confused...

He looked at Nivi, she was crying too

"Sabko vaqeel banna haiga... bachi nu rulaake tuannu ki milega?" he shouted
Walking over to Nivi

"What happened?" R&B asked

"Arey kuch bhi nahi baat ka patangar banaya hoya isne, she had a party, the twins are not home" Ranjan said

"I said I am sorry, but Amma wont clean up the party mess she wants Sid and Ved to see what they missed" Nivi sobbed

"II" R&B turned to her stunned

"Paavam da rendum, Mimika mimika pinnalaye pohum, looks like she is all grown and doesnt want her immature brothers" II cried (the twins adore Nivi)
Amma thats not true" Nivi shouted

sahana growled at II

James cocked his ears... "this baby is seriously evil" he told Chuck

"To you!! Not to me!" Chuck said smugly

"Podi" II warned her baby

"That was not very nice was it?" R&B whispered to Nivi

She shook her head and let herself be picked up

"they dont let us play, they keep asking questions, they dont even know scrabble" Nivi said

"Good point" R&B agreed

"Thats horrible" Ii said

"Its true though" R&B said

"Hey Bhagwaan... kee karan main... dimaag kharab kar ditta see" he shouted seeing them fight again

"U are teaching her to shun her brothers?" Ii shouted

"SHHH" ranjan warned "amma abhi aa rahey hongey... chup kar ja gudiya... shaadi nu kinne saal hue?" he mocked

"Too many" Ii said disgusted

"She is allowed to want to hang with her friends" R&B said

"Allowed to be sly? and devious? And and trick them?" II asked horrified

Amma followed the twins

They jumped up and hugged her

Sahana kicked her feet and spazzed, on Ranjan's arms she adored her brothers
Chuck and James, scampered to the backyard

"We get a chance to flee every week... yet we stay, for the comfort & the food...  what does that make us?" James asked
"Good politicians" Chuck said

Amma was supposed to bring them at 5 and it was 6:30 and the front yard was a mess and it was

"Amma do me ham a pawtee?" Sid asked

"We HAD one" Ii said garing at Nivi

Amma looked on confused

Ranjan looked  on embarrassed

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