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Software Symphony 65 "Playthings" (Page 72)

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Posted: 26 June 2016 at 12:35pm | IP Logged
Rest & Retire

She marked the boxes by the rooms in the new apartment

Appa looked weary and sad
He frequently went off to go sit in Periappa's now almost empty room
Shubhang slept on II's bed

Amma took a mid afternoon nap
The house was quiet, Shravu went in and out, she finally had to tell him to quieten down

"Neengalum poi konjam padungo pa" (go rest) she urged sitting down on Periappa's bed, beside Appa

"I wanted to continue living here and keep working for the government" Appa laughed between tears

II held his hands and began to cry

"Ashadu" (silly girl) he hugged her warmly

"I cant imagine my day without going to work, Sharmajee is saying Iyer saab why dont you go to South" Appa explained

"Nooo there is nothing there, even Janaki Athai is in Janakpuri" II said

Appa nodded
His brothers were uncaring and self absorbed

"If Periappa was still here we would go" "Now there is no reason" Appa said

"He would have loved the new house ille?" II asked smiling

"He was very sharp I say, he knew when I didnt get the promotions I had a bad day, when I went to Singapore that one time he knew" Appa listed gushing

"Athai cant come so frequently to Rohini also, edo adwana kaatla irukku veedu" (the house is in some no man's land)
Appa hated the new abode she could tell
It pained her to see him go through this transition

"U had so many people call you for consulting" she offered

"Epdi mudiyum ma?" (how can I do it? ) "knee is almost shot... Amma wont let me drive to CP everyday" "most of them are in Gurgaon or Nehru Place" Appa said


"We can work something out" II promised

"Givernment shud take away age limit and let people work how ever long they want" Appa said wavinga  finger

II hugged and squeezed him

"Amma will go off in the morning, what will I do?" Appa said upset with the whole thing

"Nee engeyo, aval engeyo... Shravu will start driving in a few years, but he cant come so far" (u and Vandu are so far away from Rohini) Appa said

"We will come see you every day for the first five years" II chuckled

"Delhi is prohibitively expensive for the honest man" Appa ranted

II nodded
Retirement, relocation, separation anxiety from DII were all hitting Appa below the belt

"Innum rendu varusham kudpaan nenaichen" (I thought I will get two more years) he mumbled

"Its OK Appaaa" II cooed

"See the way I work is very different from these young IAS boys" Appa said smugly

"U are the best" II smiled with tears glistening

"Odambu themba irunda NCAER la oru kai pakalam" (If I were able bodied I cud tried at Natl Council of applied Eco Res)
"its near ITO or somewhere... its so faraawy" he mumbled

"Do u want to take a trip with Amma some where, to celebrate retirement? Europe or Tropical Island?" Ii offered

Appa looked stunned

"Where will we go, Amma has school until May, her book continues to be gridlocked she cant seem to publish... she has sacrificed so much for this family di" Appa said passionately

II cried again

"Which woman will care for her ailing BROTHER IN LAW?" Appa joined II

II nodded choked up

They leaned back on teh wall and stared out teh window

Amma woke at 5 ish made chai and keasri and pakoras for II she ate packed some for Ranjan went to her paattu class at 7 and returned home at 8 with fresh flowers in her hair

He sat on the ground floor swing as his daughter wandered trying to "garden"
All soiled and dirty
His face lit up on seeing her

She looked sad and drained

"Will you hold me?" she asked honestly
"I can try" he said getting up and hugged her tight, as she sobbed long and hard on his chest






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Posted: 26 June 2016 at 12:47pm | IP Logged
Will you hold me?" she asked honestly
"I can try" he said getting up and hugged her tight, as she sobbed long and hard on his chest

Awww this is so I don't know wht to say
I m so full of emotions write now

Brilliant Nisha
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Posted: 26 June 2016 at 1:15pm | IP Logged
Poor Appa. I can't imagine what it must feel to sit at home after a lifetime of service. All the more difficult if kids are not around and spouse is still working. I hope II and R&b do something to help out. Get a driver or something for appa can go wherever he wants to. 

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Posted: 26 June 2016 at 1:17pm | IP Logged
The last two lines just stole my heart 

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Posted: 26 June 2016 at 1:25pm | IP Logged
For now those last lines were the most modest and truest of lines spoken by them to each other, and such moments rule out the need to profess love in words.

These moments are the ones we fight for to be with our loved ones at the end of the day nothing matters rage jealousy grudge but just a loved one to hold us tight.

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Posted: 26 June 2016 at 1:43pm | IP Logged
it becomes so hard for parents when they retire and have to stay at home and here amma appa have move out of the place where they have lived for like 30 yrs they have all their memories...        Cry

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Posted: 26 June 2016 at 2:27pm | IP Logged
Good! Complete honesty for once. RB gets his wife back, and II is able to ack that her emotional anchor is HIM. It's almost as if he let her throw her tantrum, let her figure it out in her head and waited for  her come back. Thanks Nisha, and it's nice to see you on a  roll, although Abhi  chakkar adha hi hua hai, two more please for the full roll! Wink

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Posted: 26 June 2016 at 6:42pm | IP Logged
Father and daughter conversation is heart touching !!!
Poor II Cry

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