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Software Symphony 65 "Playthings" (Page 68)

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Posted: 24 June 2016 at 7:09am | IP Logged
Ha ha Vidya
Beautiful song

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Thought it was apt for the moment Nisha.

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Posted: 24 June 2016 at 7:38am | IP Logged
Bala's Anna ? Really II ... Star . Amma Thaaye unakku oru kumbudu...
Brain in the deep freezer moment Big smile .

Allright guys... Pongal's over. Maha sivarathri comin'up LOL .

Nivi's prints for her thatha and paati ... Adooorable. Cho chweeet.

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Posted: 24 June 2016 at 7:45am | IP Logged
Wow Sri. This choice goes so well with the currents now.
Lovely.

Good day and evening all.

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Posted: 24 June 2016 at 7:30pm | IP Logged
Peace pl !!!
Amazing update!!
" in blue jeans and a white shirt unshaven and ruffled "
Nisha, u visualize R&B in just 10 words that's why  u r great writer and we love this story like a drug-addict (we are SOSY addict)
I don't have words about II's anger, frustration and ...
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OK... and NOT OK

He sat down beside her on the rug, leaning back on the Louis chair, her daughter
slobbered all over him and smudged him with her feet. Jenny had wiped and rinsed her hands off, she sucked on a teething sucker flavored like orange,
fat rivers of drool rolled down her chin, she had a cleft like him, chin like him and eyebrows like him
He gently collected the soft tendrils and held it back from her face, she stared on chubby face, bending to kiss it hard, inhaling, she dropped her sucker on his shirt and held his face and kissed him back
R&B reached and grabbed his wife's braid and pulled off her scuncie from her braid trailing the floor, and used it to bind his daughter's hair on top of her head

She had enough to make 4 or 5 braid links, curly silky and thick, just like her Daddee

"Feel better?" he coed to her, she smiled wide, displaying 3 teeth two down, and almost one on top


she tried to suck his finger

"I have dirty hands, I flew on a plane" he whispered softly

she watched him talk and then looked at II and grunted

"Podi" II said inching sideways putting space between him and her

"Did u have a good two weeks?"

Nivi made a face, as one hair teased her nostril, she sneezed eventually

"Not good huh?" he whispered

They stayed like that attached

Ranjan came in

"Oye shabaash" he smiled joyously "Jaldi laut aaya?" he asked

II hadnt asked him when he would return so she didnt know

"aise kya dekh rahi hai gudiya, he told u he didnt have to go to Sweden" Ranjan said

R&B was quiet

"aapko bhejoon coffee?" II asked

"saath mein idli ho jaaye" he begged

"idli batter khatta go gaya uthapam chalega?" she asked

He smiled happily
R&B admired his daughter's art work, Ranjan gave it finishing touches
Nivi flew into Ranjan's arms half way through
He hugged her and leaned back as she played with his phone

Nivi spoke for a bit, acted like she was talking on the phone, holding it on her head a few inches above her ear
R&B laughed hysterically

"Dekho Ma saara din phone par baat karti hai inko abhi se baat karna hai"

II grunted
R&B chuckled agreeing

"Ghar par koi to baat karega na Dad?" Ii accused

"karo jee karo... roka kisne hai, isne to mooh nahi kholna" he flicked his son with his fingers

"Onakku venuma?" she asked

"Bacon and eggs" he said looking at her straight

"I will ask Mahavir to make it" she said

She attempted to get up

"I am going to D II to help pack" she said

"Athim knows someone that can help move the big stuff" she said

"Ofcourse" R&B muttered

She was gloating at having pissed him off

"hes probably the only one that knows such a thing" R&B said softly chasing behind her to the kitchen

She busied herself making dosa, after hitting his espresso maker

It squealed and sputtered steam, he waited for her to make his mug

"I told u before I left I cant make it back to Lohri" he said pissed

"You always do the right thing" she snarked back

Ranjan walked in to get a wet towel, he had handed the baby to Jenny in the lounge

He glared at them

"GHANTA sabr kar lete?" he shouted

"I am making dosa Dad, I am not starting this" she claimed

"TUU? AB aya na, saare tyohar ke baad? learn to suck it up man" Ranjan hissed

"she knows I was outta town 13, 14 and 15" he argued

"Baat samajh nahi aayi tujhe? Waha saare wait kar rahe the, tum dono saath malai mandir jaaogey" Ranjan thundered

II began to cry, frustrated

"I am OK with EVERYTHING. I am helping my parents move, went to see a 100 houses, he didnt go ONCE. He didnt go to close
 He didnt go to help out with the bank work.
He wont go for moving either" "Athim is RIGHT THERE Dad" II shouted waving her steel spatula


"KAR raha hoon  na baat?" Ranjan shouted "Ekdum chup... CHUP... SHHH" he ordered II

"He is the managing partner, one of 6? 7? Cant he tell the other guys, "I havent been home much in Dec can I be in Delhi these three days?" II shrieked

"CHUP BETA" ranjan begged

R&B sipped his coffee quietly

"I am goingt o make your dosas and get ready and go Dad, Mahavir can make what he wants for him"

"Didnt u go this morning?" R&B spit out, angry? baffled?
If she was wearinga  saree and flowers and vibhuti it meant she went to the temple with them
She looked like a goddess with zero effort, nearly six feet tall and wrapped in that traditional garb

"I am sorry, its NOT OK... I REFUSE to let you count" she spoke trembling "I will go how ever many times I want" she said

"What are u doing?" Ranjan looked at R&B

"Can u stay out of this please?" R&B requested

Mahavir came from teh backyard, smiling happily upon spotting R&B

"Can I get some eggs please?" he asked

"Bhurjee bana leein?" he drawled

R&B nodded

"NOT OK Puttarjee  gudiya sahi keh rahi hai...Please nashte ke baad D II jaye aa, waha se Rohini jaake ghar dekh aana" Ranjan begged

"I have a call at 2" he said flatly

taking the back stairway up


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Posted: 24 June 2016 at 10:37pm | IP Logged
Mmm...these two lock horns at the drop of a hat and now it has become a habit !!!
And no giving way at that Confused
He sticks to his guns and does his own thing, not making that effort to get closer to appa, to pitch in as Bala does, nor cares if he is being compared to Bala every step of the way...

And as for II, though she has a point to make and is justified, she does not do anything in half measures. Fight to death, blood, gore and all, love with all her heart no holds barred and hold onto her ego, not letting go for  a second...

Kya karen in dono ka ??? want to shake them up all the time, but these tussles are what makes SOSY as special as it is !! And the descriptions of baby Nivi are just gorgeous EmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed
I have this vivid image of her in my head and not one baby around me is a match for her !!!

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Posted: 24 June 2016 at 10:40pm | IP Logged
Still fighting? 
Sulha kab hogi

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