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Software Symphony 65 "Playthings" (Page 148)

taramira Goldie

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Posted: 28 August 2016 at 1:54pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Nisha0604

I went to my state fair yesterday from 2 PM until MIDNIGHT
It was muggy hot dusty grimy... noisy crowded and chaotic

My friend timed the ride duration LESS THAN THREE MINS but the lines extended up till North Pole

I ate deep fried Oreo, Snickers and peaches. HEAVEN!!
Ive lived here 20 years but didnt know "fair food" is its own genre

Until I started watching Food Network 4 or so years ago and watched a Great Fair Food show

Everything was so greasy and so so so good

Its like everyone and their aunt was at the fair in a town of 100k people

You know Nisha we get so caught up with our useless daily routine that we sometimes forget to enjoy life as its meant to be. When the kids were little we used to take them to the annual Fair called PNE it has rides, it has food, it has local,performances, animal races etc etc. As they grew up and started going with their friends I stopped going until I went again this year and realized what I was missing. The rides - screaming on top of your lungs, eating crazy potatoes, mini doughnuts (cheee!!! But yum!) just getting sucked into the atmosphere was super. Can you imagine I never go for the annual Christmas parade or the st Patrick's parade etc should you know...Lekin Kya psychology ho gayi hai...ghar mein baith kar Saturday Sunday ko bas laundry, jhaaro pochcha and sometimes useLess potlucks. 
Glad you enjoyed yourself, do it more often. 

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Nisha0604 IF-Rockerz

Joined: 11 August 2014
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Posted: 28 August 2016 at 2:32pm | IP Logged
Laddoo & Poha

She took Nivi and dropped her off at Munirka at Akka's in laws house
He stood in the balcony watching her load the baby, Nivi cried and grumbled and sniffled and sneezed

He had changed and tried to feed the baby some oatmeal when she packed her own lunch
She didnt call Sam she knew Sam would immediately agree

She felt like she was using Sam

After last night's revelation to Tan she was being cautious

She replayed her admittance to Tan of how she missed R&B
It wasnt a huge explicit rant, she had casually crafted it to sound like "R&B was too busy to hook up with his wife"
She hadnt intended for it to sound like a physically frustrated wife

She was... a physically frustrated wife

She missed it more now because she was sure it wasnt her fault

He had fondled and made out after her Chennai visit and they had blown up like cannon balls over having the second baby
The Chennai visit had caused her to miss him too

Something in his vibe hinted that he was holding back

That pissed her off

sam texted her  "Gudiya kaisi hai?"

"Mai ya meri beti?" II teased

"DONO" Sam insisted

"Fine" said II not texting back a picture of Nivi like she would usually... no not this morning

Nivi sat there like a soggy tomato.. leaking from every facial opening
Nose, eyes, mouth... pulling her ear lobe with anger

She wore a white sleeveless dress with watermelons and strawberries all over
The draw string on her shoulders ticking her and irritating her more

"Ondeee ma" II cooed picking her up

Her oatmeal bowl was returned by the husband half eaten

Not a single offer of "Can I take her to the Doc"

He watched her load Nivi's stuff in the car

Ranjan paced the lawn disappointed

"30 saal roj subah Maruti ja raha hoon... ek din nahi gaya to kuch nahi hoga" he yelled

"The Japs are in town, u are India's top dealer, you HAVE to be there" Ii said calmly

"I have people puttar" he begged

"Nivi does too... Thatha Patti want to see her anyway" II smiled weakly

they did actually
However fragile their health was, their face lit up upon seeing Nivi

She smiled and moaned

Paati grabbed her with love

Shubhang yelled "VEEVEE" "VEEEVEE"

II held him and kissed him all over setting him down

Paati was serving brunch (older Iyers eat rice sambar rasam at 11 AM ) to Thatha

Paati mixed rasam rice in a bowl and added beans bhaji for II handed her the bowl
She accepted it with a smile

Thatha looked at her and said "saaptutu po kozhandey" (eat and go) "Avalukku Kamakshi anupichale maa laddoo kudu dee" (give her the laddoos my sis sent) he said with a mouthful of rasam rice

Paati wobbled to teh kitchen in a hurry and dropped the lid of the tall container it clattered to the floor startling Nivi causing a crying fit
Shubhang cried to

II went in and packed some for herself

"Irukeya konja nazhi? akka vara?" (will u stay? Kamakshi athai is coming from NOIDA)

"No paati pohanum" (I have to leave)

"Pohanum sollade, varen sollu) (dont say I have to go, say I will see u soon)
Ii nodded her throat clogged with tears at the simple warmth

"R&B na ketten sollu"(tell ur husband I enquired) Thatha said through squished lips

"Avan Paris poraan thatha" (hes goingt o Paris) II said bitterly

The kids sat on the floor playing with thatha's beetel leaf container trying to open in Nivi forgeting abt II

"Aval payasama?" "good good" (did u bring poha kheer?) Thatha asked joyously

"AYYYO ILLE THATHA" II shook her head realizing Thatha was as deaf as Kamakshi Athai now

Paati smiled, amused... Ii let her self out somberly walking down the steps texting Akka

"thanks ka" she said tears blurring her eyes, biting into a laddoo pati just gave

"Po dee" Akka scolded her for being formal

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Nisha0604 IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 28 August 2016 at 2:43pm | IP Logged
Our fairs have a petting zoo where u can feed farm animals
I live in a farming town, so agriculture is big around here

There was even a stall with a 1000 lb hog (pig) called betty

And a 24 inch HORSE called Calvin
The stall owner was charging a $1 each to see it, it was hidden behind curtains

there was boards al over the petting zoo in Eng & Spanish about how kids shud realize  food does NOt come from a freezer, it comes from farms and animals

I am like "Really?" what will they teach the kids next

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Errantnomad IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 28 August 2016 at 2:46pm | IP Logged
I was just about to key in my review for 'choice ' and it see there's another one Smile . Thank you.

I'm bk from the temple and I'll take the liberty to curse...and I have a 'choice' few words for dude.
Krishna pls forgive me!! Nivi paavam! She should have taken her to Sam's. He's giving her hell now.

Allright... He is seriously f*****g annoying with his behavior and he needs to get his S**t together and till the time he realizes that II needs to pul back... There !! I said it!! Fat chance though of it happenning.
He's in no mood for forward propulsion only...
Thatha and paati in spite of their fading faculties have always exhibited so much affection for II.

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Cookieg Goldie

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Posted: 28 August 2016 at 2:53pm | IP Logged
Lovely update
Dude is annoying right now

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Errantnomad IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 28 August 2016 at 2:56pm | IP Logged
Nouf, your cute oru minute ippo varam to your hubs was adorable!!
I have a wicked thought to tease you but I'll save it for a pm sometime... I'm saving you being embarrassed ! Your oru minute ippo varam might not be favorable patience in all 'places' LOL LOL
Sorry for teasing you but I like teasing you! So sorry but no sorry. LOL LOL .

Wishing you the best to join him soon. Love you sweetheart! Be blessed!

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taramira Goldie

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Posted: 28 August 2016 at 2:59pm | IP Logged
Seriously??? He's testing her to the limit . I will say ENOUGH RB!! What are you trying to prove? And this time II needs to give him some very serious silent treatment. 
But I don't want Appa getting involved . Appa has this uncanny habit of invariably getting involved in all of II's affairs and since this has to do with her singing and him taking off to Paris who knows he might again shoot some unpleasant ones adding another layer to the already layered jhagra. 
I guess he still doesn't know she has an offer to die for does he? Wow, wonder where this is leading. But I do have a feeling that he'll go check on NiVI behind II's back, yeh Sab to dikhawa hai. 

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Errantnomad IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 28 August 2016 at 3:04pm | IP Logged
Nisha I want to try the fried peaches... Sounds yum.

Jas, right... There's a huge load of movement our town...
With Toyota shifting 60000 jobs next yr this side and schools being a major draw real estate prices hv hit the roof now. And you here.. Ha ha. Gladly!More the company more the merrier!

Shruthi... No chances of II singing the song now after this update !!
But what's this Yaar.. Hope they find a way out soon.

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