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Software Symphony 65 "Playthings" (Page 129)

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Posted: 16 August 2016 at 11:04pm | IP Logged
Chinmayee & Chinna Chinna Aasai

She told Amma Manya was back, Amma just grunted.
Manya was like a yo-yo she swung between India and wherever based on convenience
At times she even went off to live in R&B's Paris abode

II heard about her from Sam from time to time
She didnt spontaneously express a need to know about Manya, R&B sensed that didnt particularly share much

II told Amma about Shravu distancing himself from Nandu
She asked if Athim had something to do with that

Amma's lack of enthusiasm in denial indicated to II, that indeed Athim might have had something to do with it

It broke her heart into million pieces


"Dont speculate too much" Amma warned

"Thats what R&B says too" Ii said

"Ayyoyo, enna karyam panitte dee?" (what the hell did u do?) Amma panicked

II didnt realize what she had blurted out

"Umm Amma" she groaned

"Avan kitta poi, Athimber veshamam panninaar sonneya?" (it was Athim's mischief?)

"He is very unemotional and objective" II claimed
"Then what? Will he show his biases in front of you? U think R&B is so foolish?" Amma shouted

"Amma edo sonnen VIDEN please" (keh diya bas let it go!)

"Podi" Amma was distraught

"U are not worried that Athim thinks differently about my family? for u protecting the Iyer honor is more important?" II was hurt

"Ishita... u dont understand... they live in a joint family, there are many compulsions, sila vishayam apdiye vidanum" (u must let go)

"Paavam Nandu" II was tearful

"He is not misbehaving, dont exaggerate" Amma defended Sgravu

"U dont get it, or in ur love for Shravu u dont want to see it"

"U can think what u want... I dont want to talk any more, Moorthy Mama's wife wants u to sing at Janakpuri Sharada kovil" Amma changed the topic

"I AM 30 I dont want to sing, I am not Chinmayee" II sulked

"U CUD have been, inda pdivadam daan onna kedukarde" (ur stubbornness is ruining u") Amma scolded

"U dont get it ma" "I ve been singing for 10 years, nobody ever notices me, yet you wont let me quit" II wept

"Why are u crying, not every one can become world famous"

"Exactly!! That means I am no good" she said

"U are not... when Balaraman Mama said he knew someone at Harris Jayaraj's studio, nee pidivadama US la Georgia Tech apply pannine" (u didnt want to go to Chennai)

"They all claim to know the big shots, nobody does" "II was angst ridden

"If u wont persevere, and will be so dismissive then u shud just give up hope to sing for a movie" Amma said

"As if  A R Rahman calls tomorrow like he will... u will agree" II smirked

"Appa doesnt like film songs these days, u can do cut an album with Tyagaraja kritis" Amma offered "When u used to sing chinna chinna aasai
Appa will say "nanna paadra po" Amma said with pride about how much
Mr Iyer gushed when a little 9 year old II sang the song without missing a beat or tune.

II secretly harbored a dream of singing for the movies then

"Nobody listens to them... I dont even sing unless I go to paattu mami's house" II said

"See!! Even more reason to continue learning"

"I married someone who doesnt ask me to sing, u said "Oh ur husband will not want u to stop singing Ishita" "Adellam verum kadai... u were BSing... first he doesnt care for Carnatic, second he is never in town"

Amma sighed sadly

"Seri vidu ma" II said

"U dont have half the problems Akka has" Amma was firm on her belief that II had gotten a better deal

"Thats your opinion Amma" she said somberly

Amma was living in denial if she didnt think of R&B's lack of interest in India, his past life, Ranjan's scandal and Manya's wavering
unsettled life, the Manila work fiasco for R&B, her own unsuccessful attempts to quit KMPG. Yes, there was money...but

"Come home tonight" Amma said softly

"No ma... Manya just returned in the morning" II explained

"Avalayum vara sollu" Amma said kindly

"Makarand irukkan"

Amma squirmed "Yes tell him also" she said exhaling

II texted R&B after the call

"Do u want to go to Rohini for dinner?" she asked

"Tonight?" he asked

YOU WISH IT WAS 50 YEARS FROM NOW
BUT YEAH
IT IS TONIGHT

"Hmm" she said
While he crafted a suitable  way to say "I hate your Dad I cant imagine ruining my evening any other way except eat idlis at Rohini"

"Manya ko bhi keh dogey?" she asked

"U shud" he said

Her heart skipped a beat nervously.. as she searched for Manya in her Contact list



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Posted: 16 August 2016 at 11:20pm | IP Logged

Exemplary gems of writing from the update !! Star Just superb Nisha !!!

they live in a joint family, there are many compulsions, sila vishayam apdiye vidanum" (u must let go)...how  very true and how many issues get brushed constantly under the carpet in the bargain !!

"Why are u crying, not every one can become world famous"...
"Exactly!! That means I am no good" she said...II's typcial bullheadedness and amma's beautiful practicality !!!

"Nobody listens to them... I dont even sing unless I go to paattu mami's house" II said
"See!! Even more reason to continue learning"...typically motherlike ...Amma is just superb with her retorts !!

YOU WISH IT WAS 50 YEARS FROM NOW...BUT YEAH...IT IS TONIGHT
While he crafted a suitable  way to say "I hate your Dad I cant imagine ruining my evening any other way except eat idlis at Rohini"

And the best of them all  ..R&B and his eternal predicament with the Iyer household LOLLOL



Edited by VeeIyer - 16 August 2016 at 11:21pm

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Posted: 16 August 2016 at 11:26pm | IP Logged
Lovely update

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Posted: 16 August 2016 at 11:41pm | IP Logged
Thanks Vani

W hen I think of this family words appear naturally


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Posted: 16 August 2016 at 11:46pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Nisha0604

Thanks Vani

W hen I think of this family words appear naturally


And i have this entire household residing in my head ...virtual faces, quirks, mannerisms et all thrown in !!
Brilliant work Nisha !
Please indulge us with the happenings of the other couple playing "hum tum  ek kamre main bandh ho "Embarrassed

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Posted: 17 August 2016 at 12:05am | IP Logged
SUMAITHAANGI
Sila naal Aasai  manam niraithu velli therikkum
Pala naal pota mugamoodi oru naal nazhuvi veezhndhidum
Sila Pala nigazhvugal osai indri kadandhidum
Sila siru asaivugal manam varuthi vaatidum
Sila  idaiurugal malai pola thondridum
Silar padum vedhani idhenna periya vishayama  ena thondrum
Aval padum  thanimai manadhai vaatum
Palar thannai purakanippadhai unarndhu vedhanai manadhai niraipum
Than thaai thanai purivaal ena
Enni varuththai veliida
Amma vin chaadal saatai adipol manadhil vizha
Amma sinam kandu en nilai aval purindhu kolla marukiral enbadharindhu
Kattiya kanavu kotai sidhari thalumbum neerodai
Mugathil aazh kodu ida
Aval nilai , aval vali,  aval thavip, aval thanimai
Aval sumakkum siluvai, irakki vaithida sumaithangi kal avalukillai
 avalin  manavedhanaikku edhu marundhu?



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II and AMAA's convo r always nice to read
But i agree with II here amma is being biased towards bala and shravu for whatever reasons but she is

Calling and asking manya is not good idea
But lets see
Good thought and wonderful writing
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A lengthy review as I'm waiting at the airport for my daughter's arrival ... Yay... Can't wait to see her.

""I told Amma about Shravu distancing himself from Nandu
She asked if Athim had something to do with that"

There she she goes again!! Mullah ki dor Masjid tak! She feels choked by compulsion folks ! She just can't let it be! If Bala wants to pakhao his own kichidi by staying off II's hair and that includes being shravu off limits from MM or Nandu... So be it...

""Ayyayo, enna karyam panitte dee?"(what the hell did u do?) Amma panicked.II didnt realize what she had blurted out
"Avan kitta poi, Athimber veshamam panninaar sonneya?" (it was Athim's mischief?)
Then what? Will he show his biases in front of you? U think R&B is so foolish?" Amma shouted""

On this I am forced to think two ways. My initial thought was c'mon Mrs. Iyer she ofcourse will share it with her husband( not often she does that).
Then I thought if II feels for shravu's and nandu's bond which is recent... then mrs. Iyer must be surely feeling the pangs of the detachment between the relationship of II with vandu and Bala which that has seen so many years... Amma too must be wishing that things are what used to be and there's no change in love between them like how II is wishing it to be between shravu and Nandu.

I feel at times Amma's interference in II's life is a bit much but it's II also who loves pouring it out to her.
Chinmayee and chinna chinna Aasai... just don't give up!! No matter you are 10... 20...30... 40... 50.. Yrs old... HaHa ! MOTHERS!! They just don't give up!!

Now my favourite part of the update...

"Do u want to go to Rohini for dinner?" she asked
"Tonight?" he asked
YOU WISH IT WAS 50 YEARS FROM NOW
BUT YEAH
IT IS TONIGHT
"Hmm" she said
While he crafted a suitable way to say "I hate your Dad I cant imagine ruining my evening any other way except eat idlis at Rohini"

LOL ... Either he wishes it was 50 yrs from now or I am thinking if he was given a choice between going to Rohini for dinner or hike all the way to Paris... I have no doubt that he will prefer hiking all the way to Paris . LOL And manny won't be too far behind ..., she I think will atleast
Half the way to Sydney... LOL . For them it's more like Beganni Shaadi mein Abdullah deewana
LOL LOL .


But this is the problem with II right ... Every word she takes it at FACE VALUE AND BEYOND!!
Over stretching herself to make things work..
No doubt amna would be courteous and polite but she will not sulk if Manny is not there...
But no... Inventing problems is her compulsion...II and her Charm Smile

Awesome update.

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