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Software Symphony 65 "Playthings" (Page 109)

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Posted: 05 August 2016 at 9:18pm | IP Logged
How does it matter whether MM mein ho ya temple mein, havan hone se matlab hai na? I feel appa in the name of tradition and ritual really tries to throw his weight around. But he has Rb for an adversary who is no less of a fighter. Bechari II kahan phas gayi??? 
And I think for her it's more about who won and who got the last word instead of actually following the ritual, because having it at MM would mean Iyers lost this round and bhallas - NO Manya Bhalla won, which of course would be most unpalatable to dear II IYER-Bhalla. 

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Posted: 05 August 2016 at 9:46pm | IP Logged
"Pehle khana kha lete hain Iyer saab phir asee behes karange" Ranjan reminded smiling gently
He looked longingly towards the back of the house hoping Mahavir would magically appear with "Sir khana laga lein hum?"

As the temp is being cranked up a notch higher and as the Air conditioning gives way to sauna... Ranjan bhalla wishes he had a wand to turn Mavvy in to a Greek God with hundred arms to whip up khana on the table that instant...

As he finds that there's still a lot if steam left in the room .even after some time , Ranjan bhalla decides to take the matter in his own hands and goes charging in to the kitchen . Arrey .. Mavvy ... Don't do this to me beta only to find Mavvy is not a deva but a Manav...
Of all the times... Now Mavvy ? You too Brutus?...
LOL LOL .

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Sex & Sonia

He leaned on her forehead to calm himself for a few seconds when they unlocked their lips. Their proximity was always sexually charged, during times of anger or happiness
It was the overarching theme of their marriage

She reached for his fingers and pried them loose from her waist, he trapped her fingers between her waist and his palm, telling her she can go when he was ready to let her go
He leaned and buried his face in the jasmine strings caressing her bare back. She squirmed  as his chin stroked her upper back and collar bone in swift strokes

He kissed her again as if to remind himself what she tasted like.

She peeled herself off the wall, just in time for Nandu's question "Mami can Shravu come watch with me? and can I have popcorn please"

"U missed school because ur head hurt, and now you want popcorn?" she asked gruffly clearing her throat shedding his taste, as
she shivered goosebumps appearing all over her arm, wrapping her chiffon pallu over her shoulders.

The spot they stood in was littered with jasmine and rose petals, homage to love making

She studiously avoided his gaze weaving her way through the theatre like seating to head out the door
The day bed mocked her as she passed it

YOU CAME TO PICK SHRAVU UP AND HE AMBUSHED YOU RIGHT HERE, DIDNT HE?
SMIRK!
"I am going to Rohini in the evening" she returned to tell him smugly
He leaned on the wall, one foot raised, texting

She held her breath waiting for him to explode, he didnt
Her heart thudded... as she waited

Huh" he grunted looking up at her quietly

PESAVE PESAADE
PAAVI
(Dont ever say anything much)

Sam was coming up with a sleepy Lasya

"He didnt sleep last night because of his cough, then she woke up early morning, when she heard a neighbor cutting down a tree" she complained

II nodded

"Gussa ho?" Sam asked looking at her flushed face

"Umm.. no" II shook her head

"Ladkar aa rahi hoo, phool jhar gaye?" she asked

"Are Amma Appa eating?" she asked primly

"Umm... haan.. suno" Sam called

"U can put her down on my bed if u want" "or Nivi's crib"

"Maharani wont sleep in a crib any more" Sam said with pride

R&B walked out of the theatre ona  French call, Lasya did a athletic leap flying into his arms, she found a rose petal on his Lacoste croc on his tee

Sam did her best to hide a smile

"Lad rahe they dono?" she asked curiously

"I am going down to send Nandu some popcorn up

II left the brother and sister alone

Appa was unhappy, II could tell clearly

Ranjan was also on R&B's side, II didnt know how  else she could help

Nivi slept on Amma's godee
She took her from Amma's arms

"Appa ta sonnen, Sector 3 kovil poo nanna irukkadu nu " (the flowers outside the Sector 3 temple are of poor quality)

II looked at Amma alarmed, wondering just how much had come unstrung

SHITTT

"For us Malai mandir is best" Amma explained to Ranjan

Ranjan refused to looked at II's hair

II walked up the back stair case to find R&B slouched on the couch, twirling his locks and talking on the phone

He extended his arms, asking for his daughter

She vented

"Appa has retired, it has been so hard on him" "U dont care" "Ur ego is the size of Sonia Gandhi's Swiss bank account" she bitched

He hung up... pissed

"Wanting my daughter's birthday here is inconsiderate?" he asked baffled, mocking her

"Ofcourse it is... from a man who hates the house enough never to speak of it as "home" suddenly using it as a bargain chip to win with my Appa" II slammed

"U think my resentment for this house is is al in my head?" he asked getting of the couch

She took a step back... startled

II swallowed trying to come up with a sharp retort

YOU HATE YOUR DAD
U HATE THIS HOUSE

APPARENTLY NOT *TODAY*

PAAVAM APPA!!

"ENOUGH II" he hissed warning her... Sam reappeared at the doorway leading to the bedroom

"Yeh baby ka guard rail raise karo R&B" Sam ordered



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Posted: 05 August 2016 at 11:35pm | IP Logged
Thank you for 2 updates...yeah Smile
Appa never learns...always on R&B's case
Temple is fine... but I think home is better
Sam the mediator is there to try to put out the fire
Maybe this is the spark to get R&B to open up to II

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Posted: 06 August 2016 at 12:44am | IP Logged
1101 updates of Sosy 
So much to congratulate and celebrate

1100 Nisha 
Clap
Party

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Posted: 06 August 2016 at 1:54am | IP Logged
1101
The magical number that saved Sherazade
The moon sightings in a lifetime Iyers celebrate
The updates our own story teller has woven
Spell bound we are, insatiable and pestering
The couple are charged up by each other
The fights and make overs that symbolise their relationship
Well over the tiniest four digit possible
The excuses II cooks up to have her way 
well past the score Nisha has scored by her well crafted tales
We. clamorous of our two tales...
Come up with a thousand pleas and reasons for update
The speed at which we refresh the page
The prayers we chant UPDATE PLEASE the most used phrase on the thread
Mr Iyer seeks a thousand ways to hold his sway over his Princess
Swept off  her balance by the Tall Punjabi rascal
Excuses he invents to lay claim on the grandkid
That shares the genes of his sworn enemy
Addicted to the tales we are adore the leads as though they were ours
A weaver of tales par excellence a dedication to marvel
Good luck Nisha may a few thousands your tales score




Edited by moonwearer - 06 August 2016 at 7:15pm

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Posted: 06 August 2016 at 4:38am | IP Logged
In tamil my homage ... The crushed flowers string their own tale...An attempt crazy ...
( tamizhil en Anjali)

Pookal ...
Udhirndha poo idhazhgal
Oru pesaa kavidhai
Pesiyadhu pala kadhaigal

Avai udhirndha idam
Avargalin viragathirku
Oru malar Anjali

Soodiya Maalai solliyadhu
Adhan kadhaiyai
Viragam parugida thudithana idhazhgal
Idazhodu idhazh padhithaan avan
Izhanthaen en malargalai
En aadaiyai avirthu
Avalaiye aadaiyaga aninthu
Aatkondan avan endru

Avanin vaasam konarndhu
Aval sella, udhirndha poovai naan
Kattilin metthai nagaithadhu ennidam
Unakku mun naan endru
Nee kandaai kaatchi ippozhudhu
Thugil urithu aatkondan andre
Arangeriyadhu kaatchi mudhal
Endhan medaiyil thaan endru

Avalin vaasam ulvangiya en idhazh
Avanin maarbil sattaiyil ippozhudhu
Kandavargal iruvar enai
Pagaithu padharinaal
Kozhandai lasya oru puram
Kadhala alladhu kobama
Ariya munaindha Sam innoru puram

Thodarndathu poo than kadhaiyai...

Iruga kattiya maalaiyai naan vaangum pozhudhu
Kandaal enai naarai siru mani nerathirkul aval thai
Kurai koorinaal ennai vaangiya idam
Sari illai endru than kanavinidam...
Andha thaikku innamum Puriya villai
Avargalin thabathai ulvangiya
Endha maalaiyum naar aagum endru

En kadhai arindhavar Veetin sanjeevi
Paarthar Avar naal oru vannam
Pozhudu oru kaatchi
Kandum kanadhavarai nagarndhar indru
En kolam purindhar periyavar
En kadhai Avargalin kadhaikkul oru
Kilai kadhai endru




Edited by Errantnomad - 06 August 2016 at 4:53am

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Posted: 06 August 2016 at 5:53am | IP Logged
Somewhere it's seen or felt as an unwritten doctrine to assume or stereotype the relationship between a DIL and a MIL as one of rivalry Cos of their need to protect their status as the most important woman to the man in between. So many of us because of our damaged sense of self-worth end up sensitive to the the other woman's criticisms judging the other one negatively .
The dil feels that her every single action on home, her career , her children are judged and the mother in law curses the one single powerful ammunition that the DIL has over her...SEX...

In this story ... A role reversal of gigantic proportions...that woman is caught in the middle with the men warring over asserting their need to be the most influential man though they are both primary relationships... Their hatred... So negatively charged towards each other and Appa cursing dude for the magnetic wield , his son-in - law possession of the most powerful weapon over his kozhandai ...the dude's most positive charge towards his wife..., the couple's combined physical energies and passion which is indeed the overarching theme of their marriage as the author puts it rightly.

Good day and good evening all.


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