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Software Symphony 65 "Playthings" (Page 107)

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Posted: 04 August 2016 at 9:34am | IP Logged
As  we await 

What she spoke in Tamizh he understood when they dated

Her silence he decoded in its entirety

The prattle and gibberish of the twins he smiled at

The animated arguments and whispered threats made sense

A decade and 4 babies later Mr Iyers frustration and snide remarks were as simple as French to him

Subbu was amazed at his understanding on the week of their marriage

Its Amma's turn now and quickly she jumps to her husband's defense

The girl who didn't want kids sought a fortune cookie to carry the tidings

She sulked and lied the years after Nivi

The twins she adored to the core

She was taken by surprise by the youngest and each had a special place in their heart

Wishing they hadn't arrived hurt her deeply and definitely

Mindful she was that they were tiny terrors yet they were hers to adore and admire

Each of their kids triggered in them a wide smile and each with unique antics

Triggered in them the possessive streak and they were their world so what if they were scary

 

 

 

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Posted: 04 August 2016 at 9:56am | IP Logged
Hey Nams welcome back ...the story gets a new hue with your review.

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Brownie on a page

Shravu and Nandu were playing tennis on the side of the house

II tended to her veg garden, Ranjan dozed on the swing with Nivi excitedly running between one side of the house to the other

After the Shravu love note scandal blew over it was tense in every Iyer home
Amma tread carefully not wanting to preach too much to II
II generally didnt state her opinion any more about what she thought Shravu could do

Bala was moody and sulking depending on what the weather was like that day, or so it seemed like to II

Nivi's first Bday was a few weeks away

Amma wanted to book the Sankara Temple

Ranjan insisted the havan should be in MM

Manya did her best to fan the flames

Sam agreed it should be at MM also

R&B took off for two weeks in the meanwhile to Manila to a "job he hates" he declared

There was calm and unease all at the same time at MM

Ranjan and him chatted the night before he left

"Waha Wahi ka kaam hai saara Manila mein, usko keh" Ranjan said

R&B smirked shaking his head

Ranjan's wealthy buddies couldnt help Argent
It wasnt a financial or manpower issue it was basically a bad judgement call that required someone to be decisive

"I am OK" "thanks" R&B muttered, feeding Nivi squished paneer

She made a face as soon as she felt the spice hit her

And coughed and smacked her lips And her whole body shook

II, R&B and Ranjan watched her mesmerized

And then... she reached for R&B's hand so he could feed her the next one!!!

ADI PAAVI" II cursed

"Punjaban hai meri poti" Ranjan said dutifully

"Bohot teekha hai Dad..." II said licking her finger after dipping in R&B's sabzi

"Koch vee nai" he said smugly

"Ha ha ha ha" II exclaimed running to get water

Nivi was on her 6th matar

"NO wonder u want to nurse" II muttered thinking she the taste of milk soothed her burning palate

Last weekedn though was HELL for II, trying to wean her, II hadnt cried so much in her life
R&B was furious with her... for doing this to Nivi

Ranjan was out of town, they had the house to themselves and so II attempted to do it

Nivi cried the better part of both weekend nights, begging her and moaning like a new born

"This is ridiculous" he hissed

"I cant feed her until she is 2" II said wearily

"Well... shes not even ONE" he said getting off the bed, grabbing his crying daughter

Nivi lost it at that point, flinging herself on his shoulder and sobbing, gaging

II finally gave in and fed her and they all had a good Sat night "sunday morning"

She almost wouldnt eat all day Sunday fearing it would mean she wont get to nurse

II went on Plan B after talking with  Sam and Akka, to stagger the inevitable

She said Shubhang really didnt care when she stopped at 6 months

Lasya had cried one night and then given up

II was a mess

"I am never having another child again" she warned R&B

He chuckled derisively

"U are telling ME?" he said angrily

"Any one that makes ur daughter cry is the devil, in your eyes" she mocked, folding laundry, and yawning frequently

"Shes 11 months and a few days old... shes cried herself hoarse, 4 times in two days" he challenged

"I AM A BAD MOTHER I KNOW" II shouted
"She will give it up on her own maybe?" he speculated

II nodded relieved

II noticed Nivi needed the feed only at night, and early morning
Mostly during the day she was just fine

"Amma says I shud try every weekend, and not weeknights"

"thats going to confuse her... umm... no" he said

"Dont go on biz trips any time soon" she said categorically

"I cant choose my trips" he was acidic

"I bet *I* can" she said


"Enough II" he warned

"I didnt start it" she said flinging his BR tee back in the basket

"What is it about?" he asked

"Nothing" she shrugged

Manya's interference and demands were pissing her off but telling him would lead him to take a side and that side may not be "her" side

"I think u shud hold off until her Birthday" he said

"Seriously?"

MANYA WILL BE IN TOWN
YOU WANT ME TO PARADE TOP NAKED, IN PAIN, WEEPING AND HOWLING?
NICE!!

"Yeah, I am serious" he said

"The house will be filled with people, so what if the event is not here"

"The event IS here" he said firmly

"Did Manya get to u too?" she smirked

"Nivi is mine I want it here" he said coldly

Stuffing his ears with his buds, picking up his daughter who sat on the floor chewing on the edge of one of his books

"Atleast you all have the same opinion for one" she slammed
GETTING ALONG WITH RANJAN, ARE YOU?
MANYA, U, SAM AND DAD...
ALL ON THE SAME PAGE?
NICE

"Just trying to get brownie points from you" he shot back sarcastically leaving her fuming


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Posted: 04 August 2016 at 10:33pm | IP Logged
Thank u for the lovely update
I love this crazy couple LOL

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Posted: 04 August 2016 at 10:42pm | IP Logged
Nice update!!
Nivi's first birthday.
Waiting for next one.

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Posted: 05 August 2016 at 7:24am | IP Logged
Good morning all... First cup of tea this morning at  home after a back breaking journey across the world! The deathly silence is kind of creeping me out Although I can't say that it's not a welcome change after all the madness and cacophony of india. It was indeed a superb trip but even among  All the visiting relatives, going for dinners, meeting friends, visiting busy markets and beautiful malls ID and SOSY were steadfast in my thoughts. Nisha your stories have entered my blood stream And they travel with me everywhere! 
Brownies... The IYER Bhalla divide seems to get deeper. It seems like a twain that will never meet. In my opinion they should have a big ceremony at Mm and a smaller one at the temple to ho our both sides. And am absolutely waiting to see some real sparks fly between manya darling and our IYER kudi. 

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While all these functions, rituals, ceremonies remain a celebration that makes people feel good about it, it's not without stress and tension arising out of conflicts.
For Manny it's more about power play and she has never been able to bite her tongue off from proclaiming to II that she and her Dimpal were and are a unit and now with Nivi it's no more subtle or underplayed. While for manny it's more of a play , for dude and II it's more of a pride ... Suddenly protective and defensive of their turfs... And the game of 'sides' is all the time there only to rear it's ugly head at the most inconvenient time.
She is mine and so it's got to be Here is dude's yap... And here is MM then , so if A= B and B=c then A should also be equal to C... But then is MM dude's?...

Those brownies have got to be more yummy now. And II is certainly not the one to let go of such opportunities to exercise her vocal chords and derides 'so on this all you guys are on one page ' and
Dude not the one to hold bk responds with brownies retort. awesome awesome title that brownies on a page. Kudos on that.

But everyone here is not blind to the fact that II is one of the most fortunate brides to have had a free hand in most of the things at MM. She should count her blessings actually to have not many to look over her shoulder.
Ranjan bhalla and Sam have always been so gracious about it. They have many times on multiple occasions gone out to make each and every celebration at DII like their own with their grace , poise, presence and help more than Any of those relatives of Iyers could ever claim to. God bless them all. But Nivi is their pride and blessing and their happiness to new beginnings... So it becomes more than a primeval need which I feel is ingrained in us humans to stake their turf ... No one's an exception to those things ingrained in us.

And marraiges involving more cultures than one , these things to crop to blight is but normal... And when manny comes ... ... Let's see her and II dramatically unfold ...

Edited by Errantnomad - 05 August 2016 at 1:55pm

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Posted: 05 August 2016 at 9:13am | IP Logged
Originally posted by taramira

Good morning all... First cup of tea this morning at home after a back breaking journey across the world! The deathly silence is kind of creeping me out Although I can't say that it's not a welcome change after all the madness and cacophony of india. It was indeed a superb trip but even among All the visiting relatives, going for dinners, meeting friends, visiting busy markets and beautiful malls ID and SOSY were steadfast in my thoughts. Nisha your stories have entered my blood stream And they travel with me everywhere!
Brownies... The IYER Bhalla divide seems to get deeper. It seems like a twain that will never meet. In my opinion they should have a big ceremony at Mm and a smaller one at the temple to ho our both sides. And am absolutely waiting to see some real sparks fly between manya darling and our IYER kudi.


True that these stories have entered our blood stream and we carry it in us like platelets...
So my platelets became erratic when a thought entered in me that is she trying to wean us off her by giving one in two nights now... I know it's a crazy analogy just like II is trying to wean off Nivi
And I'm on the same page with Dude on this by exclaiming much like him it's been only a little more than a year... LOL

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