Software Symphony 65 "Playthings" - Page 54

Created

Last reply

Replies

1156

Views

357902

Users

53

Likes

7787

Frequent Posters

Nisha0604 thumbnail
Anniversary 9 Thumbnail Group Promotion 6 Thumbnail Engager 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 7 years ago



I HAVE to do a foochar part

Party & Politicians

I have to do a foochar part, every few days... its an addiction


"Umm... u dont have to tell Daddee" Nivi whispered, awkward and nervous

"Apdeena? I shud hide it?" II demanded, Sahana squirmed like a ball of jello in her arms
II smacked her butt

"Stoppp!!" she warned

"Amma I didnt mean to" Nivi was almost in tears

"they look up to you, they worship you, they follow you from room to room, this is not done kanna" II said sadly

Nivi had invited, Macy, Greg and a "bunch" of kids from her class to spend the summer day playing outside in the sprinkler, 
and then play tennis and then have lunch, she had picked a day when the twins were at Rohini

It just broke II's heart

"You are so big now, your brothers cramp your lifetsyle?" II asked choking
She imagined the soft cheeks and those bigg eyes and how they would react to seeing the soaked lawn and the slip and slide drying out in the sun
The crushed ice maker brought out to the front porch
They wud know there was a party and they werent invited

Nivi sat in a corner hugely upset twirling her straw nervously
James and Chuck whimpered by her feet

Ranjan paced the kitchen afraid

sahana moaned in II's arms wanting freedom, II handed Ranjan the fat blob

"Chhadd gudiya" he whispered

"I DID... I let her have her party, the friends came at 8 and played until 6" Ii said firmly

"she feels bad betaji, safai karwayin gudiya" he said

"No Dad... not until the boys see what they missed" Ii whispered

Nivi cried as she imagined her brothers' shocked faces

"Amma they are always talking gibberish, and they dont give us privacy" Nivi mumbled

"ENNADI privacy, u are TEN" Ii warned

R&B returned from meetings, he had no idea what had happened

sahana lay on Ranjan's shoulder and sucked her thumb

R&B walked over to II, she looked hassled, in her wrap around tie and dye skirt and sleeveless spaghetti blouse
She looked like a tall stick
He hugged her shamelessly in front of his Dad

Sahana growled

"whats going on II?" he asked pushing his hair back as it fell on his forehead teasing her bare shoulder

"She partied all day, after sending the twins to Rohini" II began to cry

He was confused...

He looked at Nivi, she was crying too

"Sabko vaqeel banna haiga... bachi nu rulaake tuannu ki milega?" he shouted
Walking over to Nivi

"What happened?" R&B asked

"Arey kuch bhi nahi baat ka patangar banaya hoya isne, she had a party, the twins are not home" Ranjan said

"I said I am sorry, but Amma wont clean up the party mess she wants Sid and Ved to see what they missed" Nivi sobbed

"II" R&B turned to her stunned

"Paavam da rendum, Mimika mimika pinnalaye pohum, looks like she is all grown and doesnt want her immature brothers" II cried (the twins adore Nivi)
Amma thats not true" Nivi shouted

sahana growled at II

James cocked his ears... "this baby is seriously evil" he told Chuck

"To you!! Not to me!" Chuck said smugly

"Podi" II warned her baby

"That was not very nice was it?" R&B whispered to Nivi

She shook her head and let herself be picked up

"they dont let us play, they keep asking questions, they dont even know scrabble" Nivi said

"Good point" R&B agreed

"Thats horrible" Ii said

"Its true though" R&B said

"Hey Bhagwaan... kee karan main... dimaag kharab kar ditta see" he shouted seeing them fight again

"U are teaching her to shun her brothers?" Ii shouted

"SHHH" ranjan warned "amma abhi aa rahey hongey... chup kar ja gudiya... shaadi nu kinne saal hue?" he mocked

"Too many" Ii said disgusted

"She is allowed to want to hang with her friends" R&B said

"Allowed to be sly? and devious? And and trick them?" II asked horrified

Amma followed the twins

They jumped up and hugged her

Sahana kicked her feet and spazzed, on Ranjan's arms she adored her brothers
Chuck and James, scampered to the backyard

"We get a chance to flee every week... yet we stay, for the comfort & the food...  what does that make us?" James asked
"Good politicians" Chuck said


Amma was supposed to bring them at 5 and it was 6:30 and the front yard was a mess and it was

"Amma do me ham a pawtee?" Sid asked

"We HAD one" Ii said garing at Nivi

Amma looked on confused

Ranjan looked  on embarrassed




taramira thumbnail
Anniversary 10 Thumbnail Group Promotion 3 Thumbnail
Posted: 7 years ago
Nisha, it's a good addiction and one that needs to be encouraged. You always leave your updates at a point  which has us hankering for more . Ab is future ka part 2 chahiye naa, what will their reaction be, will they forgive their mimika in their sweet innocent way? And fatso use kitne maze liye honge MM ke temporary water park mein. And the most important RB and II kis Tarah ek track par challenge is mudde ko le kar? 
sonalgupta2004 thumbnail
Anniversary 9 Thumbnail Visit Streak 180 0 Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 7 years ago
Well yes a great addiction...
Benefit is ours only !!!!!

How u get these ideas Nisha
Nivi ignoring or feeling ashamed of terror twins
So thoughtful of u
It happens between siblings all the time...

👏
SushSathisha thumbnail
Posted: 7 years ago
Nisha Di so thoughtful
Yes true both have their views correct
Let's see what happens
Nisha0604 thumbnail
Anniversary 9 Thumbnail Group Promotion 6 Thumbnail Engager 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 7 years ago
To Grow up and hate...

"pawtee" "Pawtee" Sid danced like a crazy kid

"Patti is here" she kissed their soft cheeks trying to hold two wiggly creatures in her arms
They wore vibhuti on their forehead Amma smeared some after she lit the evening diya, before driving them back

Amma was shocked to see Nivi crying

"Amma did they behave in the back seat?" she asked muffled, buried into Ved's cheeks

"They are such good boys" Amma claimed

She looked at Ved probingly "Is paati right?'

"Me ment to a biggg tore" "BIGGG TORE" Sid said stretching his arms out

Amma grabbed Sahana from Ranjan
Ranjan grabbed Ved from her

"See there is one for everyone" II chuckled

R&B wasnt too happy that she mocked herself


"Baithen aap" Ranjan pulled the tall chair at the breakfast area

"That is to tall" amma said

He walked over to the wall and pulled a more formal chair

Amma sat down with Sahana, she sucked on Amma's chain

"Shall we go up?" R&B asked Nivi softly, she slid down

"what happened? Is she hurt?" Amma asked

"More like WHO did she hurt?" II said

R&B turned to glare at her

II esxplained everything to Amma to Nivi's humiliation

Amma squirmed

"Tch tch tch" Amma expressed despair

"Bachi hai Mrs Iyer she wants to enjoy with her friends"

Chuck and James returned and nibbled on Amma's feet
Amma was terrified

"Dey" II scolded them

The boys slid down and began chasing the dogs around the kitchen

Sahana crawled furiously and grabbed Chuck's tail... he stumbled and splattered on the floor like he was a cat run over by a car
The slippery floor not helping his cause

He turned and barked at her

She reached for his face

"Onakku avala kanda nadukkam, idula avala paathu perisa sound kudukareya?"( u are terrified of Sahana yet u dare her?") II mocked Chuck
Amma laughed

R&B walked with his daughter in the front yard

The boys had already stripped off their tees and lay on the now dry slide
Mahavir turned on the water the boys didnt care if they were invited to a pawtee or not, she started to slip and slide
The dogs slid and crashed, sprawling on the wet grass, face down

Nivi smiled gently
Ved pulled her arm "Mimika com... Mimika" he begged
She looked at R&B

He raised his eyebrows "Will Amma let u change again?" he whispered

"Will u ask?" she whispered

"I can try" he made a face,  afraid

"II" he wandered back in to ask, II was making coffee for Amma

"Pesaade" she whispered
"Umm.. will it be OK if she changes and goes back into the water?" he asked

"Edukku? she wants to crash their party now?" she hissed

"Let it go... she is apologetic" he whispered back

"I dont know YOU are incharge, because all day long I listened to 10 screeching 10 year olds" Ii said

"Was Greg here too?" he asked suddenly bristly

"No... I told him Nivi's Dad is jealous of him so he is not welcome" II giggled

Amma watched the young couple jostle and flirt

Turning away and going out to the front lawn

"Twerp!" R&B cursed

"thats what they all say... but to Nivi he looks like umm..." II mentioned the name of 2027's rock star

R&B cursed

"its her first crush" II said in awe

She is too little" he barked

"At this rate u wont even let her date at 16" II accused

"Maybe at 46" he said smugly

"I wish Appa had said something" she said

He bend down and kissed her... and groaned


"4 monsters and a devil" she said

Sahana came in soaked carrying Chuck by his tail
He yelped protesting strongly

"YENNN DEEE" Ii shouted

Nivi came in "amma?" "Umm... can I play with my brothers?" she asked politely

II smiled weakly

"Please dont hurt them kanna... they worship u... they have no idea you dont like them" II said

Nivi nodded somberly

"I think they are cute" she said shyly

"Like Amma?" Ii smiled

R&B threw his head back and laughed at her openly shallow comment

Nivi smiled at her Dad

"U shud just agree" he winked at his daughter

"Ive had 4 kids now... but I used to be cute" II said defensively, all hot and bothered

Sahana and Chuck shared cookie crumbs under the table

Both naked except for diaper ofcourse... and soaked.. well the dog was wholly naked
She spoke kindly to the dog, he cooed back to her

"I keep tellin him, he has nothin to fear.." Chuck said boldly

"the faster James runs the more I want to grab him" she told Chuck

"Wimp" Chuck nodded

"U over reacted" R&B accused

"U can say whatever u want, when they grow up and cant stand each other or ste (steal from each other)" she paused "then u will agree with me" she said thoughtfully

He held her close... and they both sighed

Ranjan brought in a bruised screaming Ved  "Sid PUSSED me" he said his nose dripping with snot

"And the angels reappear" he said laughing under his breath grabbing his son from his Dad



sonalgupta2004 thumbnail
Anniversary 9 Thumbnail Visit Streak 180 0 Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 7 years ago
Hav I read it correct... Sahana was talking to puppy,,, really
It's unimaginative nisha just awesome

Kids r so cute
Nivi is so adorable just perfect!!!!

And dude has become more shameless with time I think now he is flirting and kissing in front of Ranjan and now amma...
😳
😉
Tuc_Mob thumbnail
Anniversary 8 Thumbnail Visit Streak 90 0 Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 7 years ago
"Party & Politicians "

 "To Grow up and hate..."

Both updates are amazing, II's kids are adorable.
It looks like II really grew up(Its true she is adorable). 
Love each and every character including Chuck and James.
loveishraru thumbnail
Group Promotion 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 7 years ago
Guys Indradanush updated...👏
Errantnomad thumbnail
Posted: 7 years ago
"Sahana crawled furiously and grabbed Chuck's tail... he stumbled and splattered on the floor like he was a cat run over by a car
The slippery floor not helping his cause

He turned and barked at her

She reached for his face

"Onakku avala kanda nadukkam, idula avala paathu perisa sound kudukareya?"( u are terrified of Sahana yet u dare her?") II mocked Chuck.

Sahana and Chuck shared cookie crumbs under the table

Both naked except for diaper ofcourse... and soaked.. well the dog was wholly naked
She spoke kindly to the dog, he cooed back to her

"I keep tellin him, he has nothin to fear.." Chuck said boldly

"the faster James runs the more I want to grab him" she told Chuck

"Wimp" Chuck nodded"


You could do a spin off on this and title it " Sahana Chronicles". Absolutely delightful to read.
👏
nadira26islam thumbnail
Anniversary 9 Thumbnail Group Promotion 2 Thumbnail
Posted: 7 years ago
Edited by nadira26islam - 7 years ago