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Ashlok OS: Scene Reverse

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Scene Reverse


Aastha came to her room and saw all his clothes on bed and she frustrated "Shlok kya hain ye sab kya haalat banaya kamre ki haan."

Shlok turned to her "kya hain yaar tum itna serious kyun ho rahi hain main tumhe tension hote hue nahi dekh sakta hoon dear" and he cupped her face.

Aastha "chodiye Shlok room saaf karni hain."

Shlok "arey kab se doond raha hoon shirt hi nahi mil rahe hain tho kya karu mujhe bohut kaam hain."

Aastha "achcha sirf aap hi ko kaam hain kya mujhe bhi bohut kaam hain ghar main ye sahi nahi hain Shlok."

Shlok "heyy tum kya karogi sirf khana banana kamre saaf karna sirf yehi aata hain main jyaada kaam karta hoon."

 Aastha "ji nahi I do more work than u u cant do our ladies work samje aap."

 Shlok neared her "main jyaada kaam karta hoon tum bhool gayi kya kal raat."

Aastha rounded her mouth "chi Shlok aap na bohut badmaash hogaya tho teek hain ham ek din keliye aap Aastha hogi aur main aapki character karoongi k deal k uske baad aap hi kahiye kaun jyaada kaam karta hain."

Shlok smiled at her "tho teek hain main ab Aastha Shlok Agnihotri tum Shlok Agnihotri k."

 Aastha smiled and rounded her hands on his "bohut buri tarah haarne wala hain aap patidev sochlijiye bohut saare kaam karna hain aap."

Shlok pulled her catching her waist "hmm haalat jo bhi hain tum mujhe Shlok kahke nahi bulana hain aur main tumhe Aatsha kahke nahi boloonga k."

Aastha "yes deal starts from now." Shlok "K."

Aastha brought her hands to his waist and caught him tighter and pulled him "Aastha kya hain yaar aajkal tumhe time hi nahi mil rahe hain mere liye." And she was going to kiss him.

Shlok thought nautanki kahin ke and pushed her slightly "Shlok mujhe bohut kaam hain dekho kya haalat banadiya aap kamre ki." And he went to bed and removed all the clothes on bed and arranged them nicely.

Aastha sat on bed and took laptop and was going through some files. Aastha with stern voice "Aastha mujhe cold coffee chahiye jaldi lao aur office time ho raha hain jao jaldi." And she smiled to herself.

Shlok was stunned how is he supposed to bring cold coffee to her. Shlok "teek hain Shlok main abi aayi." And thought dramebaaz itna drama kar rahi hain hmm main bhi dekhta hoon and he went out.

Aastha saw him through the window and laughed out loudly after he left. Shlok doesn't know wat to do and he got an idea suddenly and brought cold coffee to her he took help of Sojal. Shlok came in shouting "Shlok Shlok ye lo tumhara cold coffee."

And he went near her and placed coffee at her lips. Aastha "Aastha.." and he immersed coffee glass into her mouth "kya hain Shlok aapko tho sirf kaam hi dikhta hain pilo pilo and he made her drink whole coffee."

 Aastha was struggling and was saying "hmm hmmm." In her gulps. Shlok with winning look smiled to himself. At last gulp she split some coffe on her saree. He took away glass. Aastha saw at her saree "Aastha ye kya kardiya tumne jara bhi akal nahi hain dekho kya kiya tumne."

Shlok "Shlok sorry sorry sorry aapne kaha hain jaldi hain isiliye jaldi pilaya aapko." Aastha staring at him angrily. He smiled himself and came down and removed remained coffee on her lips with his. Shlok got another plan. Aastha went to wash room and cleaned it.

Shlok was arranging something in cupboard after Aastha came he said "Shlok aajna sankashti hain kya aap mujhe mandir tak drop kar sakte hain na pls fir aap office jaa sakte." And he had winning look.

 Aastha thought kya main drop karu ise mujhe tho driving hi nahi aate ab kya karu and she thought to ask driver and smiled to herself and went out side to call driver. Shlok knows he knew everything she might think like this so he gave holiday to all drivers.

She came out and called driver but no one was there. She called Saubai and asked her where r drivers. She said Shlok gave holiday to them. Aastha was shocked hmm Shlok bohut jyaada akdu bangaye ab kya karu and she got idea and went out and punctured all the tyres of cars.

Now with winning look she went to room smilingly. Shlok saw her smile y is she smilng. Aastha was thinking agar aap smart hain main aap se bhi bohut smart hoon mujhse panga liya aaap ab dekhte aap public transport main kaise aate hain office ko.

 Aastha "Aastha ye kya hain aaj saare drivers ko chutti kyun di aapne."

Shlok "Shlok tho kya hua aap mujhe drop kar sakte hain na."

Aastha "I m sorry Aastha dekho saare cars punctured hogaya." And she made puppy face. Shlok was shocked ye kya hain omg Aastha tumto nautaki ki maharani bangaye and he had worried face.

Aastha "koi baat nahi Aastha aaj ham auto main jaayenge chalo ab late ho raha hain office keliye."

Shlok hesitatingly went to mandir in auto his plan backfired him. Shlok got down. He thought bohut dramebaaz hogayi nautanki kahin ke. Aastha looked at him emotionally. He too doesn't want her to leave in auto.

Shlok "Shlok aap bhi aayiye na pooja karenge ham dono ao Shlok ap bhi na hamesha kaam karte hain I don't like it." And he pulled her out of the auto. Autodriver was staring at them madly.

Aastha "Aastha kya hain yaar achca teek hain chalo." And she given him fare and both went to mandir and prayed for each other. Both were smiling. Aastha "achca Shlooo..."and she put hand on her mouth to stop wat she said.

Shlok looked at her curiously. Aastha slipped tongue and gave worried expression and suddenly changed "achcha Aastha tum bhi aao na office ko mujhe na office main aapke bina man nahi lag rahe hain."

 Shlok was thinking himself kitna drama kar rahe hain and said "Shlok ghar ka kaam kaun karega main jaati hoon ab k Sasubai daantegi Shlok aap jayiye main aapkeliye wait karoongi bye Shlok." Aastha disappointed ye bhi kuch kam nahi hain dramebaz hogaye.

 Shlok thought ab isse samajmain aayega main kitna kaam karta hoon and he went home. He called Suresh and arranged all the pending files on his desk. Aastha went to office and sat in Shlok's chair and thought hmm bohut achchi hain yaha baitna hain hmm mere patidev isiliye ghar late aate hain iss chair main bait kar sukun milta hain usko and she saw huge pile of files on the desk. Itna saare files kaha se aayi and she thought haan ye sab uski hi chal hain akdu kahin ka and she took one y one file and was completing it.

She saw Shlok's number and cheerfully took it and said "kya hain Shlooolllalllaaalla."and released a huge sigh.

Shlok laughed out loudly "Shlok kya hua achanak kya gaana gaa rahe hain aap."

Aastha "Aastha tum phone kyun kiya ab bohut saare kaam hain."


Shlok "achca Shlok muje na aapka hi yaad aa rahi hain kya kar raha hain mere patidev." and he smiled himself.

Aastha too smiled ye akdu bhi na
"Aastha mujhe bohut kaam hain ab baad main baat karenge bye."

Shlok "Shlok Shlok Shlok." 

Aastha "haan kya."

Shlok "I love u."

Aastha "hmm teek hain bye." And she cut the call and kept it near her heart and smiled a lot but again she saw huge files and took one by one. She was working like a robot and on the top of it Shlok called her several times and irritated her. She was tired bcoz he didn't leave any energy in her the previous night.

Anjali in home shouting "Aastha Aastha.."

Shlok was sleeping after disturbing her n number of times. He himself tired of disturbing her and u can imagine Aastha's condtion. She held pen in her mouth and pencil in her hair fixed as a bun. Anjali rushed to Shlok's room and saw him sleeping. Ye Aastha kaha gayi aur Shlok yaha kya kar raha hain and she called Aastha.

Aastha lifted the call and answered her and she said she was in office and also said Shlok is not fine. She agreed and cut the call. Aastha was exhausted and tired a lot. It was late night 10pm she completed all the files and was thinking to go to home. She has seen lot of msgs in her phone.

She thought ye akdu itna jyaada kaam karte hain main bhi roj inko phone karke tang karti hoon main bhi na and she was going to home. After enetering home she called "Aastha Aastha..."

Shlok in his room listened and smiled to himself hmm madam aagayi aur itni akad ab tak hmm maharani itni aasani se nahi haaregi ab kya karu. Anjali came out and saw her as alien.

Anjali "Aastha tum pagal hogayi kya khud ko bula rahe ho."

Aastha smiled at her and said the whole thing and also asked her help. Anjali "Aastha tum bohut badmaash hogayi itna tang kar rahe hain mere bachche ko haan."

Aastha "Aai pls aaap pls isme help karna hi hain plss."

Anjali "badmaash hogayi tum ab jao."

Aastha smiled and pulled her cheeks widely "thank u aai aap na worlds best sasubai main abi aati hon."

 And she went in "Aastha Aastha.."

Shlok "haan Shlok main yahi hoon." And he came infront of her.

Shlok "tho kaisa hain aajki din bohut jyaada work hain kya."

Aastha smiled and understood wat he meant "Ji nahi Aastha kuch bhi tho nahi actually u know na Ashish i was jus talking with him he was sharing his griefs with me that's all that's y late hogaya."

She was examining his changed expressions. She came to him and brought him closer "kya baat hain aaj mere pyaari si biwi ko bohut pyaar aa raha hain mujhpe kya baat hain Aastha itni calls kyu ki."

Shlok smiled to himself "Shlok kya kar raha hain aap chodiye bohut kaam hain." And she saw the room then totally messed up and rounded her eye. Shlok saw it and smiled. Now here we go Anjali calling Aastha now.

Aastha heard it and said "Aastha jao Mrs Agnihotri bula rahe hain."

Shlok was now out of options ab kya karu ye Mrs Agnihotri bhi na. Shlok slowly went out. Aastha was laughing ab ye Aastha kahke kahega mujhe.

Shlok went down. Anjali saw Shlok "Shlok Aastha ko bulayiye Kalindi ji ko accident hua abi phone aaya."

Shlok "Kya!!!"

Anjali with worried expression "haan Shlok uski phone kaha hain switched off aa raha hain abi Avdoot ji phone kiya bulayiye use aur Jahengir Hospital main admit kiya usko."

Shlok rushed to room and called her "Aastha Aastha kaha ho tum.." and he saw her arranging all the clothes inside and cleaning the room. Aastha was smiling herself.

Shlok "Aastha aayi ko accident hua kaha hain tumhari phone chalo ham jaldi hospital chelte."

Aastha was jus staring at him and laughed out loudly "aap haar gaye aap haar gaye mujhe Aastha kahke bulaya." And she laughed out loudly.

Shlok "Aastha tum pagal hogayi kya aayi ko accide... matlab wo sab jhoot hain." Aastha nodded still laughing.

Shlok released a sigh and shouted "Kya hain yaar kitna dar gaya tha main haan."

Aastha was feared now but came near her "lekin patidev I m sorry lekin jeet aapki bhi hui main kah rahe hoon na aap bhi kaam kuch kam nahi karte hain sach main itna saara kaam kaise kar sakte hain aap haan mere pati worlds best pati hain aur main roj aapko phone karke tang karti hoon I m sorry."

Shlok smiled and pulled her "lekin Aastha mujhe aisa hi achcha lagta main har din tumhari phone keliye hi intezaar karoonga office main aur haan tum office ka kaam bhi kiya aur ab aake ghar ka kaam bhi karte hoo tum bhi to kuch kam nahi hain na."

Aastha "nahi Shlok aap jyaada kaam karta hain."

 Shlok "nahi madam tum bhi jyaada kaam karte hain."

 Aastha "Ji nahi mere patidev hi jyaad..."

Shlok "achcha teek hain ek kaam hain jisme dono jyaada kaam karte hain kya tum ready hain uskeliye han." And he winked at her. Aastha blushed to the core. He doesn't need any signal he lifted her and kissed her on forehead and placed on bed and ...





































































































































































wat r u ppl expecting jus close ur eyes fellas they need some privacy lights off  Blushing

 

 

 

 



Edited by Saibhargav - 15 April 2016 at 10:51pm

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Posted: 15 April 2016 at 10:52pm | IP Logged
nice..
well d concpet was nice..
shlok became astha & remained at home.. but dint do any work..
where as astha did all d work...
thnks 4 d pm..


Edited by coolhi1988 - 16 April 2016 at 5:20am

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Posted: 15 April 2016 at 11:34pm | IP Logged
Haha... Role reversal to understand what they have to go through daily...
Nice one Sai Smile

Keep writing...

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Posted: 16 April 2016 at 12:59am | IP Logged
Nice story

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Good concept really, haha!!

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Unique story...such a sweet osTongue

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unres d above comment

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Hai Sai nice concept yaar
Really enjoyed. Their role reversed waw super concept yaar.
Shlok took his full dress out to search one shirt.
Astha shouting at him and their challenges about work was superb.
Hey Sai really how do u get thus ideas yaar. Really it was funny.
Shlok turned like astha and astha like shlok. Shlok didn't know to make cold coffee and how he done full work in the house. But astha done office work and attended shloks phone. She gets tired and shlok also.
They understand each other job are so much now but ego is not allowing to show it.
Arey Anjali u r also supporting ur bahu.
Atlast astha win. But their love started and romance also.
Anyway nice yaar. Keep writing like this.
Continue another OS Sai. Thanks for ur treat.

Edited by sudhamadhu - 16 April 2016 at 7:45pm

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