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TS: Just you and me by Sammy

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Posted: 15 April 2016 at 5:15pm | IP Logged
SO I don't usually write sequential pieces but because a lot of people were asking for it, I have decided to try. This is a sneak peek of my TS. 
Warning- this might be ridiculous. 
 JUST YOU AND ME

The joyous drops bounced off her figure. Dressed in the white saree she was no less than an angel. It hugged her in scintillating ways, every pattern, every fold entrapping his heartbeats. She looked at him, her eyes shining louder than her silver earrings. Her eyes admired him.

 

In that rain soaked moment, as the two figures looked at each other, their gazes, admiring, touching each other's essence, words weren't spoken. They weren't needed.

 

A soft smile appeared on his face even as tears did. He laughed, a long throaty laugh of freedom. His frustration, sorrow, his overwhelming happiness and most importantly his love for her. Everything was released in that laugh.

 

He was light, so light he could fly. In that small moment that they had shared he felt released. Their feelings were their freedom.

 

"Sumo.." His name froze on her lips.

 

Across the ground, she smiled, he spoke her name like a deep lover's embrace. Softly but it held such immensity and depth that it brought tears to her eyes.

 

"I know." What they felt for each other had been brought to light just by their presence here.


This might have been absolutely horrible or brilliant. Sadly, being the writer my judgement is reserved. But your comments will tell me to either continue or discard. SO LET ME KNOW!!

 



Edited by Mananlover2312 - 15 April 2016 at 5:16pm

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I'll go with the 2nd option. It's brilliant. Do continue...
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Yes continue
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Do continue.. this was awesome !
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It's good. Do continue
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