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Posted: 15 April 2016 at 3:18pm | IP Logged
you just love stabbing me in my thahaan heart right in the thahaan feels!! OMG CryHeart
oh my KOWSI you made me emotional!! Cry
i just loved it sosososososo much! Heart
*brb cryin*


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Posted: 15 April 2016 at 4:05pm | IP Logged
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Kowsi! What have you done? My heart is beating so damn fast and it is 3:41 am! That was so freaking beautiful, I am grinning with tears in my eyes!

The way she is ready to give herself pain, just to earn his forgivenessCry

The way he leaves and she feels lifeless, broken like the piece of glassCry

The way she gives herself, her body, her soul to himCry

The way he understands her love without a single wordCry

Damn it, I cannot write anything, my tears are blurring my vision and that is not a lie.

ClapAwake till 4 am? Totally worth itWink


Edited by SanyaEterna - 15 April 2016 at 4:15pm

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Posted: 15 April 2016 at 4:40pm | IP Logged
Its worth reading...StarBlushing
Loved it Kowsi...
Do write more will b waiting...Day Dreaming

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Posted: 15 April 2016 at 5:07pm | IP Logged
Very nice! You add so much meaning to every glance, dialogue and smile in the show. Keep writing!

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Posted: 15 April 2016 at 5:47pm | IP Logged
That was just too awesome man! Loved it loved it loved it..
Cant say anything more

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Posted: 15 April 2016 at 5:54pm | IP Logged
kowsi.. it was just too good.. wonderful... u hv brought the emotions too damn well!!

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Posted: 15 April 2016 at 6:45pm | IP Logged
As usual it is up to the mark, treat to read. All emotions, are well explained. Sometimes I wonder how you design the scene with this much ease. You so good writer may god bless you .

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