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And the journey itself is home....

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Posted: 15 April 2016 at 1:36pm | IP Logged
A bleeding heart and onlookers galore
 
But one person stood out...distinct from the crowd
He was the one least expected to...
He had nothing to gain
Everything to lose
His Name...His Repute...
The Family Legacy, included!
 
But he stood there
Silent
Stoic
Her pain was His!
 
As he saw her...
Dismantle
Disintegrate
Desolate
 
As she pushed him aside with all her might...
 
But this time something was different
 
Something had CHANGED!
 
He was no longer the 'baharwala'
She could NOT keep him at bay
As she lay devastated in his arms
With her hopes crumbled
Her spirit crushed
 
But her faith in him had risen
The trust restored
As he wished all her pain away
His truthfulness of intent was hard to miss
Even in her abyss
Sumo responded in the affirmative
As Shravan asked "Kya tumhe mujh par bharosa hai/?"
With that new found authority...
He proclaimed
"Main tumhe kabhi harne nahin doonga, Sumo!"
 
Even in her darkest hour
As Sumo's world crumbled... 
There has been a new beginning
He's ONLY her childhood friend Shravan 
The beauty being
NEITHER has realized it!
 
As Sumo picks up the pieces
Ravaged and Scarred from within
As she is unable to fathom
Which is the greater loss really...
A broken grit
OR
A failed daughter
 
It is that decade old memory
Of her friend, the 'Bhagoda'
Who is still staying put
With outreached hands
 
As Shravan teaches Sumo
The bigger picture...
 
"And the journey itself is home"
 
THANK YOU CVs
THANK YOU Shravan
THANK YOU Sumo
THANK YOU Namik
THANK YOU Nikita
 
EDKV is SPECIAL!
Heart
 
 
Cheers!
DocD
 
 
PS: Nikita was simply OUTSTANDING today...IMO, her best performance in EDKV till date; Namik provided her with the just the right measure of the ROCK-SOLID support she needed for those finer nuances to make the necessary impact in the last 5 minutes today!
Keep up the great work, you both
You guys are truly immortalizing ShraMan
It is a pleasure knowing you!
 
ClapClapClap
 
 
 
 
 


Edited by DocD - 16 April 2016 at 1:13am

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Posted: 15 April 2016 at 1:45pm | IP Logged
Beautifully written, Dyotona. I am blown away by how awesome it is. Big smile

I found the following words of yours (highlighted in blue) magical:

 
He was no longer the 'baharwala'
She could NOT keep him at bay
As she lay devastated in his arms
With her hopes crumbled
Her spirit crushed
 
But her faith in him had risen
The trust restored
As he wished all her pain away
That truthfulness of intent was hard to miss
Even in her abyss
Sumo responded in the affirmative
As Shravan asked "Kya tum mujh par vishwas karti ho?"
With that new found authority...
 
and

It is that decade old memory
Of her friend, the 'Bhagoda'
Who is still staying put
With outreached hands
 
As Shravan teaches Sumo
The bigger picture...
 
"And the journey itself is home"


Once again, marvelous piece of writing, Clap

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Posted: 15 April 2016 at 1:49pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Chaits_04

Good one DocD Clap
 
Thank you, @Chaits for taking time out to read and comment
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Posted: 15 April 2016 at 1:51pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by orion23

Amazing post DocClap
 
Thanks a ton @Orion
 
It is always a pleasure to interact with you...
 
Take care, Dear!Smile
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Posted: 15 April 2016 at 2:00pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by PlainJane

Beautifully written, Dyotona. I am blown away by how awesome it is. Big smile

I found the following words of yours (highlighted in blue) magical:

 
He was no longer the 'baharwala'
She could NOT keep him at bay
As she lay devastated in his arms
With her hopes crumbled
Her spirit crushed
 
But her faith in him had risen
The trust restored
As he wished all her pain away
That truthfulness of intent was hard to miss
Even in her abyss
Sumo responded in the affirmative
As Shravan asked "Kya tum mujh par vishwas karti ho?"
With that new found authority...
 
and

It is that decade old memory
Of her friend, the 'Bhagoda'
Who is still staying put
With outreached hands
 
As Shravan teaches Sumo
The bigger picture...
 
"And the journey itself is home"


Once again, marvelous piece of writing, Clap
 
And my absolutely WONDERFUL, simply AMAZING friend Zin is here!!Big smile
 
I hope you realize what a wide toothy grin you bring to my face, everytime "PlainJane" crops up
And mind it; it's got nothing to do with your effusive words of praise!LOL
 
*A TIGHT BEAR HUG TO YOU*Big smile
 
Now coming to the post
 
Glad you liked it...I also experienced an inexplicable sense of bliss while putting it together
Was almost like ShraMan are teaching me a thing or two, on human relationships
All over again
It's almost surreal !
Day Dreaming
 
Have been actually meaning to write a lot on the progression in ShraMan's dynamic...especially after the absolutely ethereal Wednesday episode
Will try to put something together if I can manage to catch a repeat over the weekend
 
Anyway, you take care, my Dearie
 
Truckloads of Love,
Dyotona

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Posted: 15 April 2016 at 2:14pm | IP Logged
What a surreal beauty to build the relationship journey from being Bhagoda to 'Tum Chaliye Jao Shravan. A new exploration of dynamism in every things and detailing. These two are relationship goals. 
Never ever in my life, I have ever seen such a symbolic classic giving an edge to deeper meaning and hidden agenda!!!!

Thanks for your lovely brilliant post

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Posted: 15 April 2016 at 2:23pm | IP Logged
said it all 
ll just say

"main tumhe harne nahi dunga .. samjhi??"
yes he wont let her loose at the same time he wont even break her trust for him

i dont know what to say about nikita
she has a great future ahead, she has the capacity to bring tears in my eyes
actually u know nikita and namik together is the best thing for the show
both of them together in any scene they make it feel real not acting
one is heart another is its beat of the show

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Posted: 15 April 2016 at 2:30pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by --fero--

Amazing post Day Dreaming
 
Thanku, meri Ferero Rocher wali Cutie Pie!
 
Hug
 
Loads of Love,
DocD

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