Twinj ff: Bundles of Joy! Ch 2 pg 11 &note on pg 14 - Page 8

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: rinku95

Really nice
Continue soon


Thanks 
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Komal1298

Haye kitna mazedaar tha aise hi plsss just like dis keep.writing..👏


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Will try to keep writing like this.
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: tikit

The first chapter was so nice. Especially twinj scene. Even maya scene was nice. Continue writing more and update fast please.


Glad you liked it.
Will write more.
Sorry for the late reply and update busy in preparations for function
Will update hopefully today.
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: countingstarz

I'm a sucker for Twinj baby stories and your first chapter was great. Looking forward to your next update ! x


Thanks glad you enjoyed the first chapter.
I also enjoy reading twinj baby stories didn't find any hence wrote one.
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: hailly

Awesome update. Loved it.
Liked Twinkle and Maya bonding. Kunj and maya scene was cute.
Do continue soon plz.


Thank you!! Glad you loved it.
I also loved writing twinkle and Maya bonding
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: amlavs

Wonderful start..

From the opening scene itself its rocking...
Ah s am excited... Plz update next part soon...


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Am. Ot that good but glad you liked it.
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Sherni_Jerry

superb updates Sayli. loved it. pls continue soon

 
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Posted: 8 years ago
Hi all soo sorry for the late update! Have been super busy with all the preps and I was at my nani's house all these days helping and came home late around dinner time so had to help my mum in preparing dinner so couldn't reply nor could I even type the update. This isn't proofread so sorry for gramatic and spelling mistakes. Hope you like it! Leave your comments. Now I'm off toy Nani's place and I will be applying mehendi today so won't be able to reply! Sorry for that! Anyway enough of my nonsense here is your update!
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Part 2
Sarna Mansion
Dining Area

Twinkle had a smile on her face as she watched the family bonding and love her family members had for each other as she made her way around the table serving everyone seconds when suddenly she started feeling very dizzy. The glass bowl slipped out of her hands, smashing into a thousand pieces before she fainted on the ground.

The moment Kunj heard the glass shattering he immediately looked at Twinkle and saw her hand reach towards her forehead as her body swayed. He immediately rushed to stop her from falling but he was only able to break her fall and cradle her body so that she didn't fall on the glass pieces and injure herself.

"Twinkle!" Kunj shouted and place her head on his lap.

All the family members were surprised and worried on the sound of the glass breaking and Kunj shouting out Twinkle's name worried them even more. All rushed towards where Twinkle lay in Kunj's lap.

"Bhaiya jaldi se bhabhi ko apke room mai leke jao." Yuvi said with concern.

"Haa Bhai Yuvi sahi keh rah hai tum bhabhi ko leke upar jao mai doctor ko phone karke bula leta hu." Cherry said supporting Yuvi and assuring Kunj that all will be fine.

Kunj just nodded and gathered Twinkle in his arms and lifted her carrying her birdal style toward his room with Yuvi, Maya and  Mahi following close behind.

"Hello Doctor Sharma please can you come to Sarna Mansion it's urgent. What! How can you do this! Here my bhabhi is ill and you are saying that you can't come. Good for nothing hai bhai tu to! I want you here within the next 15 minutes. Fine if your sending your wife she has to be here immediately understood." Cherry was shouting on his phone at the doctor cursing him to be a good for nothing person!(lol! I just had to add this part here! Cherry ka good for nothing line is one of my favorite lines! lol!)

Twinj bedroom

Here Kunj was desperately trying to wake Twinkle up. He started rubbing her hands while Mahi and Maya rubbed her legs. He then sprinkled water on her face but nothing happened. 
Kunj kept muttering  Twinkle's name asking her to get up.
"Twinkle uth jaa naa please baby! Please get up you are scaring me!" But Twinkle didn't get up.

Yuvi put a reassuring hand on Kunj's shoulder. 

Just at that moment Cherry reached there with the doctors wife.

She ushered everybody out stating that she needed to conduct a complete examination of Twinkle and made Cherry and Yuvi forcefully drag Kunj out when he refused to budge from there(you all know na how Kunj is lol!)

She completed her examination and stepped out smiling. As she stepped out she was bombarded with questions most of them from a very hyper Kunj.

"Doctor kaisi hai meri Twinkle ab? Usse kya hua hai? Usse konsi davai deni hogi? Usse khanne mai kya du liquid, kam spicy ya aur kuch? Usse hosh kab tak aayega? Arre aap muskura kyu rahi hai? Kuch to boliye?" said Kunj getting even more hyper by the second.

The doctor just laughed seeing Kunj get so hyper!

Finally not understanding why the doctor was laughing Mahi asked "Kya hua hai di ko? Why are you smiling? Please kuch toh bolo!"

"Offo Mrs Sarna your sister is completely fine she. She has now gained consciousness. I can't disclose anything more than this as you sister said that she wanted to tell this to all of you herself. She needs proper care and well murished food. And yes do visit the doctor I have suggested to your sister. And yaa there's nothing to be worried about so Mr. Kunj please calm down and don't ask too many questions stressing out her as she can't take stress in such a delicate condition. I'll take your leave now. Please do take care of her. And I would suggest that first only her husband visit her and then the others. Ok so bye." Mrs. Sharma said with a smile playing on her lips. 

Cherry took the bag from her and escorted her towards the door. While Kunj slowly stepped inside their room.

"Twinkle baby kaisi hai tu? Kya hua hai baby tuzhe? Ye lo pani piyo. Aaj se naa tu koi kaam nahi karegi. Samjhi!" Kunj said again getting hyper!

"Offo Kunj shaant ho jao aur ab ye lo tum bhi paani piyo." Twinkle said handing him a glass of water with a cute smile on her face. "Pi liya aur ab shaant ho gaye ho to ab mai kuch bolu?"

"Haa bol" Kunj said not very happy that she is taking things soo lightly!

Twinkle taking Kunj's hand placed it on her abdomen and said "Baby, hamare ghar ab ek naya guest aane wala hai 9 mahine baad. Kya tum ye guest ane ke liye permission de do ge?"

Hearing this Kunj couldn't believe his ears and asked Twinkle, "Kya tu sach keh rahiye?! Mai Papa aur tum Maa banne wali ho? Ohh Twinkle I'm soo soo soo happy! Permission mangne ki zarurat bhi nahi hai! I love you Twinkle! I love you soo much!" 

Saying this a  kissed her. The kiss grew passionate.

Meanwhile outside Maya and Mahi understood what the doctor said and after Kunj went inside his room the hugged each other and started laughing! 

Yuvi seeing them got confused and finally pulled Mahi and asked her "Jaan Twinkle bhabhi bimar hai aur tum dono yaha haas haas ke galle lag rahe ho! Ab mujhe kuch samjh nahi aa raha hai. Jaldi se mujhe samjhao tum dono ithne khush kyu ho!"

"Offo Yuvi bhaiya, bhabhi bimar nahi hai balki ye khushi ki baat hai," Maya said confusing him even more!

"Offo Yuvraj di Maa banne wali hai aur jiju Papa!" Mahi said finally making Yuvraj realize the reason of happiness!

"Kya wow ye sachi mai khushi ki hi baat hai! Chalo ab hum andar chalte hai!" Yuvi said getting very happy!

As Yuhi and Maya entered they saw twinj kissing each other passionately and hence they turned around and Mahi cleared her throat.

"Di agar aap dono ka ho gaya ho toh hum bhi aapko badhayi de sakte hai?" Mahi said giggling!

Blushing twinj broke apart. All of them had smiling faces and were very happy and awaited for the new beginning.

Edited by SweetSau - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
^ Hi Sayli, this is an amazing update. absolutely loved it. very well written. thank u so much :)
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Posted: 8 years ago
How sweet was that.. 
So cute.. 
Love u fr this