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In this thread I am posting my One shots... written for Guzre Pal thread... 


If I get good response I may continue thisbig grin smiley










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Adi.. is his short name.. He is Aditya Mehra.. an upcoming writer... He gave stories and script for two daily shows earlier.. and now he is all set to write his third story...

 

Adi has a habit of going to a far away place and write... Nature is his inspiration... he always goes to deserted places and writes his scripts... he faces problems also.. but he never stops himself...

 

And now ADI is in a hill station... he booked a cottage for himself far away from the town and rested for a day and one fine morning he sat to start his script...

 

ADi - This time I will write a passionate love story... Umm... Male lead ka naam ... Armaan... naaa... yeh bohut baar suna hai... ummm.. Manav... nahi yeh bohut purana naam hai... Adi aise nahi.. pehle characterization karr... phir naam apne aap soojega...

 

Adi wrote down main attributes of his male lead...

 

Name ... later

 

Attributes... Handsome face ... Brown eyes... sharp nose... lips like stretched M... long fingers... hands and legs... Broad Chest... Six pack Abs... in simple words... GREEK GOD

 

Adi - yeh hogaye physical attributes.. ab... how should he be... mujhe apana hero normal nahi chahiye... he should be different... ot goody goody types... sab ko help karne wala... bado ki baat manne wala... khud se pehle sab ka dhyan rakne wala... yeh sab nahi chahiye... He should be ... Arrogant... Rich...as he is owner of XYZ company... Full of attitude... Hates the name of female also... doesn't believe in love... hates  beautiful girls the most... believes Girls are always behind MONEY... and he is very proud of his every thing... Angry young Man....

 

Adi - Wow this is shaping very well... so ab.. naam sochoo... He again read what he wrote and thought.. he is very proud... yes... I will name him Maan...  HE is my Hero...

 

 Adi - Yes this is the name... MAAN Singh Khurana... in shortMSK or MK...

 

Adi heard some one say... Thank you... he looked around... but couldn't find any one... so he continued to write...

 

Adi - Male lead toh hogaya... ab Female lead ki baari... Umm... Kya likhun... Girl hai.. woh bhi heroine.. toh Fair and Beautifil toh honi chahiye... Round face... Big blue eyes... then he thought... yeh hindi soap hai.. not a Disney animation film...  jaha heroine ki eyes blue hogi... toh... haa... honey colored eyes... that will be apt... Big honey coloured eyes... cute nose.. lovely lips... and a body like an apsara... aur aisi ladki ka kya naam hona chahiye... Apsara... na...  Yeh bakwas hai... koi acha sa naam hona chahiye... and Adi remembered his fav character in recently released film... Yes... that would be apt... My Heroine is GEET... what a lovely name...

 

Adi - chalo... an Hero heroine hogaye... ab back drop...kaise hobi chahiye... Marathi... Gujrati...Bihari... Tamil... Kerala...  Nahi... yeh sab nahi... jaise jaise story aage badhega... tab sochunga... abhi pehla scene likta hoon...

 




Scene 1 - Hero.. Heroine intro scene...

 

A girl is running continuously... She is sweating... She is fully soaked in her sweat...Her face is red.. due to constant crying and the Mid day Sun ... She ran to everyone who came in her way asking for help.. but nobody is ready to help her... as the goons following her have weapons and nobody wanted to face them...

 

 Geet ran and entered a mela... She looked round.. and it is full of people...she thought she can easily escape... but her bad luck... the goons were  right behind her... she had no other go... but to beg for help... Just then she dashed into him...

 

He is wearing a black sleeveless jacket and having his drink... she immediately held his jacket and begged him for help... Meri madad karo... woh log mujhe maar daalenge...

 

 

The person looked at the girl begging for help... he could see she is beautiful... but that is the thing which made him look otherwise... Beautiful girls only trap men for money... they use them for their pleasures and then after getting what they want... they dump tha Man... this is the opinion the guy had on girls... His life taught him these things... he looked at her one more time... The girl is pleading and she is looking at the other direction many times...

 

He took her hand from his jacket and harshly pushed her away... she looked shocked and stumbled back...  

 

The girl thought that the person will help her .. as he is watching her cry... but she didn't get what she wanted... the person... pulled her hands harshly and threw her away from him... she stumbled a little  looked horrified... even before she can think or react she then heard the goons and ran away from there for her life...

 

The man also left from there sipping his drink... not at all bothering for the innocent girls life...

 


Adi closed the file ... and thought... this is a rough scene.. I need to work on it ... he was in his thoughts when he again heard a male voice .. Thank you... I like it...

 

Adi looked around... but he couldn't see any one...

 

He left the file aside.. and poured his tea from his flask... he started sipping his tea and he suddenly heard a huffing sound... and a girl appeared in front of him...

 

Girl still huffing- Oye... mujhe itna bhaga ke tu aaraam se baith ke chai pee raha hai...

 

Adi looked around... but no one was there... Excuse me... kya aap mujse baat karr rahe hain...

 

Girl - andha kahika.. koi aur hai kya yaha...

 

Adi nodded in no...

 

Girl - nahin na... toh ... main tumse hi baat karr rahi hoon... mujhe mele mein itna bhagaya... main tak gayi hoon... mere liye kuch thanda peene ka intezaam karr... and she sat on the available chair fanning herself with the file...

 

Adi gaped at her... Who are you... and how come you are here...

 

Girl - pehchana nahi... Fair and Beautifil... Round face... Big honey coloured eyes... cute nose.. lovely lips... and a body like an apsara...

 

Adi couldn't get what she is saying...

 

Girl - samjhe nahi...

 

Adi nodded a no... Girl showed his papers which are kept in the file ... Geet... that's me... lag rahi hoon na main apsara... she said making an apsara pose...

 



Adi  dropped his coffee and his eyes widened... he said...k..kkkyyy...kkkyyyaaa...

 

Geet - Ha...

 

She stood up and said... Hi.. myself Geet... from your imagination...

 


Adi looked at her and then the file and fell down unconscious...

 

Geet thought... Arrey yaar... tu hum serial walon se bhi zyada drame baaz hai... itne mein hi behosh hogaya....

 

She took some water and sprinkled on his face... Adi slowly gained his conscious...

 

Adi, as soon as he saw Geet... he moved back... Plz.. stay away from me...

 

Geet murmured Dramebaaz... Chal theek hain... I will stay away... and she moved a little away from him... yeh doori theek hai... Adi nodded...

 

Adi - Tum bahar kaise aayi... aur woh dress kaha se aaya.. white wala...

 

Geet sighed...  arrey main teri imagination hoona... tu jaise i aaoongi na... tune kaha apsara... toh main aosara banke dikhi tujhe... agar tu mujhe modern get up main imagine karega waise hi aaoongi na...


Geet - aur Aana hi pada... kya karti... tumne mujhe majboor kiya...

 

Adi - Maine...

 

Geet - Haa... aur nahi toh kya... Intro scene mein aisa koi karta hai... tumne mere peeche gunde laga diye... Kabhi nahi dekha kya.. Heroine ki intro kaisi hoti hai... Pehle uski halki si jhalak... Uski payal... uske kangan.. uske jhumke.. uski muskaan... aisi hoti hain heroine ki intro... tumhe kya kiya... Gunde peeche laga diya... woh bhi tini dhoop mein... aur koi madad bhi nahi hai... aur tumhara woh hero... bekar ka hai... yeh kaisa hero ko tayyar kiya tune... Bekar ka hai tera hero...

 

ADi was still in shock .. how come a character from his story can come in front of him... and he heard another voice... This time a male voice... which he heard already

 

Voice - Hero toh usne acha hi banaya... bas heroine ko thoda samajhdaar banata toh acha hota...

 

Both adi and geet turned and there stood Adi's Handsome Hero ... Maan.. with the same attire he imagined and with drink in his hand.. smirking at Geet...

 

Geet stod up and said -Isse kyun bulaya... Bhaga isse... mujhe yeh apna hero ke liye nahi chahiye... mujhe ek acha wala hero chahiye... Shant... hamesha muskurata... lamba chauda...hatta khatta... aur naram dil wala aur meetha bolne wala... She said with a dreamy expression

 

Maan - Haa.. Adi... mujhe bhi apne liye yeh nahi chahiye... mujhe bhi Achi wali heroine chahiye.. jo muskuraati ho...sexy ho... modern ho... aur Khoobsurat bhi... aur sabse zyada important baat... woh modern honi chahiye... Goan ki Gawar nahi...

 

Geet pushed Adi aside who is staring at them forgetting everything.. and stood in front of Maan...

 

Adi was a mute spectator ... he is still in shock seeing his Hero and Heroin in front of him.. that too in life...

 

Geet - Samjahta kya hai apne aap ko... Bada hero...

 

Maan - Haa main hoon bada hero... Dekhlena mere ek jhalak paate hi ladkiyan pagal hojayengi... meri deewani banjayengi ... Har taraf mere hi charche honge.

 

Geet - ha ha... Tu aur hero... bilkul bhi nahi... jo ek musibat mein phasi hui ladki ko bacha nahi sakta woh hero kaise hosakta hai... woh toh zero hai zero... aur itne dole.. shole banake kya karega... ek ladki ko nahi bacha saka... bekar ka hero...  aur ladkiya itni bhi pagal nahi hai ki tere upar mare....

 

Maan - aur woh ladki hi kya jo apne aapko museebat se bacha nahi saki...  aur tumhe kya laga.. har ladka tumhari help karne ke liye khada hojayega... tum itni bhi khub surat nahi ho ki har ladka tumhare ishare se hi tum pe mar jaaye...

 

Geet - Geet ko ishara karne ke bhi zaroorat nahi hogi.. uski halki si muskurahat hi kaafi hai...

 

Maan - haa... correct... usse heart attack aane ke liye .. tumhari ek muskurahat hi kaafi hai

 

Geet - Tum... tumm... main tumhe chodungu nahi...

 

Maan stopped her... Stop there.. right there... Mere jacket ko haath bhi lagaya toh dekh lena... pehle hi iska bura haal hai... tumhari wajah se... scene mein itni zor se kheechne ki kya zaroorat hai... waise bhi costumes mein kanjoosi karte hain... agar kuch hogaya toh... mujhe phata jacket hi pehenna padegga... aut tumhra koi bharosa nahi... kahi meri pant ko bhi phaad diya toh... mujhe undersize ke pants denge... nahiii... mujhe tight pants nahi chahiye... isliye tum door hi raho...

 

Geet - mujhe chuna bhi nahi hai tumhara ganda jacket.. dekho kitni cheap lagrahi hai... ek baar haath lagaya toh phat jayega... aur maine jaan boojh ke nahi cheena... woh scene ki wajah se kiya... ab tumhare jaise moti chamdi wale ko kya samajh aayega... acting kya hoti hai...

 

Maan - Moti chamdi... main ... tum jo karr rahi thi woh acting nahi... usse over acting kehte hain... shakal dekh ke hi pata chal raha hai... Overacting ki dukaan... aur aankehn aise hai ki ullu bhi Sharma jaaye...

 

And in all this Adi got mad... he was seeing them like seeing a tennis match following the ball...

 

Adi - Aap dono.. chup raho...

 

Geet & Maan - pehle usse kaho chup rehne ke liye....

 

Geet - pehle main aayi hoon... isliye tum chup rahi... mujhe aadi se apni baat kehne do....

 

Maan - tum pehle aayi aur mere aane se pehle hi apni bakwas batadi... ab mujhe batana hai... and he turned to adi and was about to say some thing... Geet pulled his hand... and Said... Suno Adi pehle meri baat suno...

 

Adi got irritred... chup... bilkul chup... main tum dono ki koi baat nahi sununga... ek hinscene mein pagal kardiya mujhe... ab kisis ki baat nahi sununga... ab tum dono jao... yaha se...

 

Geet and Maan - hum nahi jaayenge... tumhe hamari baat sunni hi hogi... hamari maange poori nahi karoge.. hum nahi jaayenge

 

Adi - mujhe pata hai tum dono ko kaise bhagana hai ...

 

He picked up the scene paper and tore it into pieces...as he tore the paper into pieces... Geet and Maan vanished in the air... Adi sighed in relief...  Baapre re ek scene kya karsiya hai mera Haal... aage ka kya hoga... aise hi yeh dono bahar aake ladte rahenge toh...

 

Adi placed his hand on his ears and shouted... Nahiii... and again he fell down unconscious... LOL

 


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Congrats on the thread, read this on Guzre Pal! bt really enjoyed reading again! superb interesting different update n concept! loved it! Adi is a writer n then the characters cannot him! Maan n Geet argue! superb pics! wonderfully written! do continue!!! Smile

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Posted: 15 April 2016 at 6:34am | IP Logged
woow ...amzng concept ..
first part takkar
was fabulous & hilarious
bechara adi
ek scene mei hi pagal kar diya usse hero & heroine ne LOL

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