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TanShi FF : Jazbaton Ki Jung (Chapter 2ND pg 3) (Page 2)

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Posted: 15 April 2016 at 8:30am | IP Logged
nice Character sketch
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Posted: 17 April 2016 at 12:48am | IP Logged
... Chapter 1st...



Two boys coming out of the car..
1st: Finally new session is starting from today..
2nd: yeah!! new students.. New teachers.. N the same boring lectures..
1st: Oyee m not talking about studies.. I mean new friends.. N we see sizzling n hot girls..
Day Dreaming
2nd: C'mon yr Sam.. Stop that silly talkings.. You know i don't like that things..
Sameer: How boring
Unhappy... Grow up Mr. Rishi Singh Bedi..
Rishi: M already grown up buddy.. But you are acting like a child..
Sameer: Yeah whatever...
Both enter into the college..
Rishi: Hey sam! See there.. I think Abhey is troubling someone new in the college.. We should help her..
Sameer: M not going... You know na how mean is he!!! i dun wanna spoil my day of college by interacting with him..
D'oh
Rishi: Sam lets go there..
Rishi holds sam's hand n take him there...
On that place...
Abhey: Its the rule of college.. You have to do it...   C'mon Lets dance.. Everyone is waiting to see your dance..
Evil Smile
That Girl: No i can't... Please let me go..
That girl is in tears...

Rishi: Just stop this nonsense abhey.. Its not the way to treat any girl.. Angry
Abhey: Oh! So you are here Mr. Rishi.. You know what?? m not here to follow your orders.. So just stay away from me..
Abhey moves towards that girl n twist his hand tightly n said... You have to dance.. Otherwise i'll not let you go from here.
That girl : plz leave my hand.. Its paining.. Plz..
Cry
That girl starts crying..
Rishi stops abhey n pushes him..
Rishi: Don't even dare abhey.. Its not your college.. If your dad is Co-Owner of this college.. It doesn't mean that everyone have to follow your orders.. She will not dance..
Rishi holds that girl's hand.. Lets go from here..
Rishi, Sameer N that girl left...
Abhey become angry.. I will not leave her so easily.. I m Abhey.. Abhey Desai.. How dare he to talk me like that.. You have to pay for it Mr. Bedi.. Now just wait n watch..

A girl comes in canteen where Rishi, Sameer, n that girl are standing..
Hey Tanu.. You are here n m waiting for you in the class.. One second.. Why are you crying?? what happened..
Tanu didn't answer..
Sameer tells her the whole story..
Girl: How mean he is... Tanu don't worry.. He is like that yaar... Don't bother about him.. Lets go the classroom.. Lecture will be start in few minutes..
Tanu: Yeah!! Let's go Priya
Sameer : oh hlo pri... Atleast introduce your friend with us..
Priya: Oh sorry sam.. Tanu meet my friends.. Rishi n Sameer.. Guys she is Tanu.. My childhood friend.. She has just joined our college..
Rishi: Hi tanu.. M rishi.. Rishi singh bedi..
Tanu: Hi.. N thank you for helping me there..
Rishi: Mine pleasure..
Sameer : Hi tanu.. M sameer.. Sameer yadav..
Tanu: Hlo...
Priya: lets leave for the lecture guys.. Otherwise teacher will scold us..
Sameer : yes yes.. Otherwise we hv to attend the first lecture outside the classroom..
All smiles
Smilen moves to the class..

Precap: Tanu is going towards her desk n Abhey throws a pen in her way.. She slips...
Shocked

Edited by _Kamal_ - 19 April 2016 at 1:04am

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Posted: 17 April 2016 at 1:54am | IP Logged
Nice update 
Uff first day in college & tanu crying day start
I just want to kill that jerk abhey he is so disgusting 
Thank god rishi came on time to save tanu from that jerk abhey 
Continue plz

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Posted: 17 April 2016 at 3:55am | IP Logged
Originally posted by cuteariya

Nice update
Uff first day in college & tanu crying day start
I just want to kill that jerk abhey he is so disgusting
Thank god rishi came on time to save tanu from that jerk abhey
Continue plz
M glad you like it... Smile
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Posted: 17 April 2016 at 9:14am | IP Logged
you are a great writer, my dear.
Smile
Keep it up, we are all waiting for more additions to the story.Clap

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Posted: 17 April 2016 at 9:33am | IP Logged
Awesome !!

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Posted: 17 April 2016 at 10:21am | IP Logged
Originally posted by mena_k

you are a great writer, my dear.
Smile

Keep it up, we are all waiting for more additions to the story.Clap

Thnxx dear... Smile
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Posted: 17 April 2016 at 10:23am | IP Logged
Originally posted by saaniakh


Awesome !!

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