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Tamanna

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Posted: 8 years ago

part 1

chakor aditya playing in garden

They throwing something on each other...flowers...

Chakor :are adi tum humko nahin pakad sakte

Adi :pata hai tum 501 jo thehri Chakor :hmmm

Aditya:par humara naam bhi adity rawat hai...humne bhi koi kachchi goliyaan nahin kheli ...hum tumko pakad lar hi rahege She throws all flowers along with the basket on him

Aditya :uff... chakor...ruko ...tum abhi batate hain ...

he sees varmala in his neck ... Adi :ye kya ...?varmala...?

Aditya runs behind chakor

Aditya takes out varmala and puts it in the basket ...and runs along with basket to find chakor

He sees chakor running suddenly he throws the varmala from his hand to chakor Chakor gets scared and catches it

Chakor :ye kya...varmaala...???

Aditya :he comes towards her pointing finger at her Tumhari wajah se mummy hum dono ko yahaan chhod gayi... Mummy ko late ho rahi thi aur ek tum ho ki

she steps backward

Aur ye varmala jo tumne humko di usko aaj jinhone ek dusre ko pehnaani thi ...unka kya haan ...????

He hold her shoulders and asks her

ab kya karenge bolo ?

She looks into her eyes and says idea !

Chakor :phone ...

Aditya :phone? ?? Chakor runs towards phone

aditya :kya hua hai ise ab...main kuch bol raha hoon ye kuch keh rahi hai ..

????

Chakor finds phone :she calls abha

Adi comes there running :chakor kiske phone kar rahi ho Chakor signals him to be silent

aditya sees chakor intensely in anger

Chakor :mausi ap shaadi roko hum aur aditya raste mein hain

abha :chakor tum?

Chakor :hum baad mein baat karat hain mausi Raste mein hain

Aditya pulls chakor arm from back and makes her turn towards him

Chakor tumne mummy se jhoot kyon bola Chakor holds aditya hand and says :abhi chalo ...varmaala se pehle pahunchna hai Aditya :hn chalo

They run holding each other hands

in wedding place aditya bade papa badi maa anniversery set up

Abha:kahaan reh gayi chakor Dadima :aa jayegi beta tu chinta mat kar Dadaji :wo 501 runner hai aasha karte hain varmaale ke same yahaan pahuch jayegi

hope its good friends...must give ur feedback...😊😊

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Edited by 34DAYA56 - 8 years ago

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snehaHCAPK

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Posted: 8 years ago

Wow really liked it n seems very interesting n refreshing. Yill aadi enters d show again ye ffs hi hamra sahara h.

Plz keep writing. Waiting for d next part.

I m eager to know d back story very good start.

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: snehaHCAPK
Wow really liked it n seems very interesting n refreshing. Yill aadi enters d show again ye ffs hi hamra sahara h.
Plz keep writing. Waiting for d next part.
I m eager to know d back story very good start.

thank u dear so much for ur precious feedback...⭐️

keep loving and giving ur feedback:😊😳

will update back story soon dear⭐️

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Abhiya

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Posted: 8 years ago

yeh dhono bhi naa abhi bhi bachaekae bachae hii hain:D
its interesting,hope v get these type of light hearted scenes in show also:)

nyc chavi update the nxt part aur ha humra vivaan ko bhi kahi na kahi ghusaana(main vivaankae naam kae bina shayaad koyi bhi comment nahi kar poungii lol)

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: abhiya_12
yeh dhono bhi naa abhi bhi bachaekae bachae hii hain:D
its interesting,hope v get these type of light hearted scenes in show also:)

nyc chavi update the nxt part aur ha humra vivaan ko bhi kahi na kahi ghusaana(main vivaankae naam kae bina shayaad koyi bhi comment nahi kar poungii lol)

Vivaan entry with shock next part
I have written it half
Will post it tommorow for all vikor fans and u dear
😊
Till then read and enjoy my destiny ff on chakor aditya vivaan
U will get many vikor scenes too in it
Posted 15 parts of it
Vivaan chakor lovestory and adi chakor friendship
Edited by creationschhavi - 8 years ago

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: abhiya_12
yeh dhono bhi naa abhi bhi bachaekae bachae hii hain:D
its interesting,hope v get these type of light hearted scenes in show also:)

nyc chavi update the nxt part aur ha humra vivaan ko bhi kahi na kahi ghusaana(main vivaankae naam kae bina shayaad koyi bhi comment nahi kar poungii lol)

chakor aditya always like kids even now too
And chatvaan too cute best friends fun coming soon ...so keep enjoying dear ... 😊Edited by creationschhavi - 8 years ago

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Abhiya

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Posted: 8 years ago

am waiting fr the nxt part...chatvaan r always b lyk bacha at their heart

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1032748

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Posted: 8 years ago

going to post vivaan entry now...in part 2 😊😳

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Posted: 8 years ago

Part-2 (VIVAAN ENTRY) 😊⭐️ITS A BIT SHORT ONE

Chakor aditya enters the hall

At the last moment

They see around them All in angry looks giving glare to them

Aditya gets tensed but he tries to act happily

Adi:bade papa...badi mummy ... happy anniversary

Bade papa :bohot bohot dhanyawaad aditya aur chakor apka...time dekha hai apne! !!

Abha :uff ye to gaye ab! !!

Oops its dadaji dadi

Aditya sees time on his mobile

10 baj gaye!shit!!

Dadaji sorry humko maaf kar deejiye

ye late in madam 501 ki waja se hui hai He irritatingly sees chakor and signs at her

just then voice comes from behind

A boy enters and says :khabar daar jo humri 501 ko kuch kaha !

Chakor turns shockedly Seeing him a broad smile spread on aditya and chakor face

Aditya:madam 501? Kaisa laga surprise?

Chakor:surprise?

Adi:haan ye humari mummy ka plan tha vivaan ko yahaan par bulaane ka Chakor :ohhh...achchha ab samjhe all laughs

Vivaan :par chakor tumhe aane mein itni der kaise ho gayi

Chakor :wo...ee bijli ke dabbe ke karan ...

She dont tells the main reason that abha has locked them as they were fighting like kids

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snehaHCAPK

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Posted: 8 years ago

very nice chhavi. So finally vivaan has entered. I love chatvaan bond.

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