Ashlok SS: Challenge updated Part 6&7 - Page 3

OMG, Sai, you have really out done yourself with this story line-it is fantastic. Please continue and update daily.

Good morning 😛
Hai Sai, nice update yaar 😉
Feeling sad for astha. 😭
Y Sai u always making her cry 😡
Didn't u know how girls feels touching their motherhood.
Shlok is really a cruel man 😡 😡
Please don't show astha to him so easily.
He wants to find her difficulty yaar.
He wants to realise his mistakes.
He wants to find her and confess his love to her.
Astha don't go to ur home.
Sai please make her stay in her some friends house.
Niranjan is negative henna. And anjali y r u scolding shlok.
Aditi is there. Is she loving shlok. Really it is confussing yaar. Can't wait please sai.
Anyway u made us cry. But enjoyed it.
Thanks for a ss. Continue soon...Edited by sudhamadhu - 8 years ago

Why shlok always behaving like this

Originally posted by: ..optimist..

Nice one Sai... 👏

Poor Aastha...Shlok should find her and  tell her at once that those papers are fake... Or else she will be left broken...

I hope Aditi will help them come together... and Varad too..

Waiting for the next part..

Keep writing 👍🏼

thank u sissy 😳
hmm Aastha already knows those papers r fake but she was thinking he doesnt want children from her how dare he to show those papers to her
hmm Aditi helps for some extent
will  update now 😃
thanks for ur comments 👍🏼

Originally posted by: vaishux

Superb update...

I am feeling sad for Aastha ...

She always have to face all these things😭

thank u 😉
yeah i too am feeling bad for her 😭 😭
but dont cry dont cry ur eyes may betray u 😆

Originally posted by: rd0309

Good update... Shlok should realize his mistake soon

thanks a lot 😳
he will wait and watch hope u will like it

Originally posted by: coolhi1988

nice update..
is astha mad??
doesnt she know that papers r fake?
if she hadnt undergone any test then hw cum reports came...
dont want shlok to get astha soon..
let him rot...
keep astha safe with her sum frnd who wil protect her from shlok until he repents for his doings...
continue soon..
thnks 4 d pm..

thank u didi
aastha isnt mad she knows papers r fake but she is thinking how dare he to say to her like that and she is thinking he directly to her that he doesnt want any children from her she is crying for that
hmm wait and watch wat is gonna happen
hmm Shlok 😡
i have another way hope u will like it
thanks for commenting 😃

Originally posted by: dazzles

Shlok is so cruel Sai...
No give him forgiveness... He don't deserve it... If she walk out of his life... Then I will be happy...
Shlok needs to realize a girl will suffer everything for her love... But not her motherhood and self respect... He don't deserve her...

yes anu he is so cruel
common lets beat him black and blue for behaving such with Aastha
hmm jus read todays update hope u like the way i turned it anyway thanks for commenting

Originally posted by: syvalini

nice update

soo sad for astha...

 always shlok hurt her like this 😡

go n tell every one that was fake papers shlok

where did she go now poor baby doll 

be strong astha...soon  he will know the value of u...

waiting... for next

thank u akkkiii
hmm Shlok 😡 😡
hmm fake papers wait and watch
he knew it could have happened such but he did like that tentatively
hmm he will
thanks for ur comments

Originally posted by: shrithi13

Was nearly in tears :(

Oh my dear friend did u really
i m sorry but hope u like todays part
thank u for commenting