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Ashlok SS: Challenge updated Part 6&7

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Posted: 14 April 2016 at 4:30am | IP Logged

Friends I thought it to be an OS but kya karu it bcame SS dont think SS means Short Story it is Seven Shots LOL so each day each shot whole week k hope u like it and here is part 1

Part 1


Aastha "Hmm Shlok lagta hain aap khush hain ye divorce inkaar karne keliye hmm job hi hain aaj se ham pati patni hain main jaanta hoon aap bhi mujhse pyaar karte hain lekin..."

Shlok stopped her continuing and said "tumhe kya lagta hain main ne divorce isiliye inkaar kiya kyun ki tumse pyaar karta hoon never tum jaisi insaan pyaar tho kya friendship nahi karna chahta hain sirf baba keliye haan kahna pada."

Aastha "achcha tho aap hi batayiye aap mujhse poora jindagi jihna hain aap bhool gaye kya agar aapko mujhpe pyaar nahi hain tho ye rishta kaise nibhana chahte hain ab aap maanlijiye aap mujhse pyaar karte hain." And she rounded her hands around his neck.

Shlok mocked at her "ye tumhari sapne main bhi nahi hoga Shlok aur Aastha kabhi nahi milsakte chahe kuch bhi hojaye."

Aastha smiled at him "oy buddhu aapko pata nahi aap mujhse pyaar karna shuru kiya achcha teek hain tho it's a challenge then I will prove that u love me can u prove that u hate me haan." And she flew her eye brows up and down.

Shlok carelessly removed her hands from his shoulders and smiled himself and came closer to her "hahahaha ye koi challenge hain tho teek hain tum sach main buri tarah haarne vaala hoon kyun ki main tumse bilkul pyaar nahi karta balki nafrat karta hoon I know that so how can u prove which is not present haan."

Aastha "arey aap challenge tho lagayiye."

Shlok "K then it's a challenge tho ham sharat bhi lagayenge agay tum jeetega tho hmm uski chance bhi nahi hain lekin if I win then tum khan pakadke nak ragad ke mere baba ki pair chuke sorry kahna hain har din aur har raat."

Aastha was jus staring at his evilness her tear was going to slip. Aastha "Wat if I win."

Shlok "Kaha na uski chance hi nahi kyun ki main tumse pyaar nahi karta hoon."

Aastha "Wat if I prove u love me then u have to kuch nahi u have to say I love u to me where u said I hate u k."

Shlok now looked at her seriously. Shlok "tho teek hain lag gayi sharat lekin ye sab sirf saath din main hona hain kyun ki main abi bhi kah raha hoon main tumse nafrat karta hoon its ur time to prove that I love u k haan bohut buri tarah haarna hain tum."

Aastha "arey bhi aap saath din rukhiye I love u kahne ki."

Shlok "Hmm I like ur spirit tum bhi baba ko sorry kahne ki tayar ho jao tho challenge starts from right now."

Aastha "Tho teek hain ye mat bhooliye aap bhi mujhe prove karna hain ki aap mujhse nafrat kar raha hain sirf baate nahi mujhe ehsaas hona hain aap sach main mujhse nafrat karte hain lekin mujhe ab tak aisa nahi hua tho challenge is on I should accept that u hate me then only u win and also I will win if u accept that u love me k now."

They were looking each other into their eyes. Shlok laughed out loudly and said "jao pagli main tumhe I love u hahahaha in ur dreams bohut buri tarah haarna hain hmm Aastha Kirlo.. oh sorry ab tum Aastha Shlok Agnihotri right common I like ur spirit lets have a deal then." Aastha too smiled at him and he went away.


Aastha kept smiling and was thinking MR Akdu jaanta hoon aap mujhse pyaar karte hain hmm ab dekhna kaise apne jaal main pasate hoon. Shlok too went to work and was thinking ye sach main pagal hua isko abi bhi samaj main nahi aa rahi hain ki main usse nafrat karta hoon hmm ab pata chelega na kyun ki main unse pyaar karta hi nahi get ready Aastha saath din ke baad mera badla poora hojayega tum mere Baba se khan pakadke naak ragadke pair pakadkar sorry kahna hain sirf iss pal keiye main intezaar kar raha hoon job hi karke tum mehsoos dilaata hoon ki main tumse nafrat karta hoon aur karne ki kya jaroorat hain main vaise bhi tumse nafrat karta hoon lekin tume mehsoos dilaana hoga tum aise nahi maanoge ab dekhna kaise tumhe firse mere jaal main pasata hoon pagal and he smiled and continued to work. Kavya came running to Aastha.


Aastha "arey Kavya gir jaogi haramse." And they played so cutely. Here Aditi was waiting for a chance to finish her.

Shlok was thinking wat to do wat to do. Suddenly he got an idea a bloody idea he was reluctant to implement that but yes y cant he he doesn't love her right then wat stops him he jus took the car keys and rushed to hospital he was thinking is it k to do like this wat if she over reacts hmm Aastha u r going to lose within one day and he smiled to himself. Here Aastha too was thinking but nothing is coming to her head how to make him confess oh god wat if she fails lekin

Shlok sach main mujhse pyaar karte main ne unki aankho main dekha phir kyun nahi maanthe ye jid kyun nahi chodthe hain kya baaki hain kya karna chahte hain mujhse agar divorce nahi chahiye tho iska matlab pyaar hi tho hain pchchc ye akdu bhi na kya karega ab hmm main bhi dekhloongi kaise I love u nahi kahega. Shlok went to hospital and took the papers and again went back to work and went through those papers again and again he was thinking kya hain karna sahi hoga and he thought about challenge again how dare her to challenge u r going to taste Shlok Agnihotri Mrs Aastha Shlok Agnihotri let it be then and he waiting for this time for her to say sorry to his Baba.

After his work he took those papers and smiled and took them with him. Aastha was sitting idle she was tensed already ek din hogaye ab kya karna hain hmm ye akdu bhi na kai ye sach main mujhse abi bhi nafrat karte hain kya nahi nahi akdu mujhse pyaar karta hain and then he stepped in. Aastha suddenly saw him. Shlok came in with winning smile. Aastha was confused ye has kyun rahe kai ye I love u kahne keliye tho nahi and she felt nervous. Shlok neared her more.

Shlok took her hand and put those papers in her hand and said "YE lo Mrs Aastha Shlok Agnihotri ab kaho ki main tumse pyaar karta hoon shayad ye dekhne ke baad tum maanjaogi ki tum haar gayi hmm dekho dekho."

Aastha saw him and said "Shlok ye kya hain." And she started reading those papers.

Shlok "Hmm ab kaho ki tum haar gayi bolo ab main tumse pyaar karta hoon Shlok Agnihotri kabhi Aastha Shlok Agnihotri se pyaar nahi karta hain sirf aur sirf nafrat karta hain."

Aastha tears started after reading all those and jus took a back step in shock and put her hands at her mouth and sobbed uncontinuously. Shlok was smiling hardly.

Aastha "Ye ye ye." Shlok "Haan Mrs Aastha Shlok Agnihotri ye papers main ne hi banvaaya ye lo ye sirf photo copied hain original mere paas hain haan haan ye sab galat hain jhoot hain lekin ye dekhne ke baad shayad tumhe samajogi ki main tumse kitna nafrat karta hoon..."

She didn't let him complete the sentence she beat him on his cheek in her tears. Aastha shouted loudly "chii insaan hain kya aap ehvaan aap itni neeche kaise gir sakte aisa kaise kar sakte aap mere saath hawww." And she again kept her hands on her mouth and cried harder.

Aastha caught his collar "Aap kya soch rahe ho mere bare main kyun kar raha hain ye sab kya galat kiya main ne aisa karne se kya aata aapko u killed my motherhood Shlok is it wat u want to prove better if u had killed me chii aap jaise insaan ko main aaj tak nahi dekha I hate u Shlok Agnihotri I hate u mujhe sharm aa rahe hain aapki patni kahne ki ek aadmi itna neeche kaise gir sakte hain do u even know wat u did talk to me u bloody bas***d." And she cried harder.

Shlok angrily caught her arms and tightened grip "sach tho ye hain ki main tumse nafrat karta hoon ab kya kahogi chalo tum haar gayi ab ye saare papers sab ko dedoonga aur kahoonga ki main tumhe nahi chodne wala hoon aur main tumse bohut pyaar karta hoon haal ab tum kaho ki main tumse nafrat karta hoon." Aastha never saw him that evil.

She pushed him away "aap ye sab karne ki kya jaroorat hain bas mujhe maar dete Shlok pls Shlok ab mujhe sehne ki kshamta khatam hogayi pls I cant take it anymore mujhe pata nahi main ne kya galat kiya aaj tak main ne koi galat nahi kiya sirf ek sirf ek galat kiya ek galat insaan se pyaar karke baitha jo pyaar sirf aur sirf takleef hi deta rahta hain" and she collapsed down infront of his eyes and took that papers and cried harder.

Shlok just stared at her with loss of words he shouldn't have done that he is thinking now bechari bohut jyaada pareshaan ho rahi hain "aabb.. jao Baba ko sorry kaho aur Aditi ko bhi tum haar gayi."

Aastha again thought lekin ye saare papers mujhe sirf harane ki hain tho Baba ka case ki file bhi isne mujhe sirf darane keliye liya kya ye bhi sirf mujhe harane ki hain tho kya ye saare papers sirf main aisa sochna hain ki ye mujhse nafrat karta hain sirf iskeliye hain tho and she recalled how he hugged her after saving her from horse ye mujhse pyaar karta hain Shlok aisa nahi kar sakte ye saare papers kisi ko nahi dikhaenge sirf mujhe hjarane ki koshish hain lekin itni aasani se aise kaise kar sakte hain and she cried again. Shlok with fearfully doesnt know how he was standing there he was rooted there not able to move and fcourse not able to see her like that "ab chalo kya dekh rahe ho tum haar gayi.."

Aastha angrily stood and said at his face "I didn't lose I still don't believe u hate me." Shlok was shocked.

Shlok "Kya kaha tumne ye sab hone ke baad bhi tum soch rahe ho ki main tumse pyaar karta hoon."

Aastha angrily "Haan Mr Shlok Agnihotri aur 6 din hain main haar nahi maanne vaala hoon agar aap sach main mujhse nafrat karte tho ye papers abi isi vakt apni Baba ko dikhao ye sab tabi main maanti hoon ki aap mujhse nafrat karte hain chalo Shlok aap aise kyun dekh rahe hain jao ye dikhao apni Baba ko."

This angered him even more. Shlok "haan how dare u wat r u trying to prove I still love u even after showing this to u wat r u thinking how can u win this challenge I don't understand."

Aastha "kyun ki mujhe mere pyaar pe bharosa hain lekin aaj aap vahi bharosa ko thod diya mujhe ab lagta hain ki aap mujhse pyaar karta hain lekin main ye nahi socha ki aap itni neeche gir sakte hain mujhe harane ki ye saare kaagaj mujhe nahi haarega chahe kuch bhi karle aap I hate u Shlok Agnihotri I hate u chii." And she cried harder.

Shlok was stunned. She was crying louder. Now tears started in his eyes he cant face her anymore wat did he jus witness. Shlok jus went away he thought it would happen like this does he want this oh god he is really messed up now damn u Aastha ye kya bakvaas challenge hain but he was shocked yet is affecting him he thought he hate her.

Part 2

Part 3

Part 4

Part 5

Part 6&7



Edited by Saibhargav - 19 April 2016 at 2:52am

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Posted: 14 April 2016 at 4:51am | IP Logged
Hai Sai gud evening. Nice update.
Hai challenge between ashlok and Aditi with them.
Really I want to know one thing u want to say the truth.
Y u always makes astha so much crying Angry Angry.
Sai ur story is nice but make astha win please..
Keep writing more

Edited by sudhamadhu - 14 April 2016 at 4:53am

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Posted: 14 April 2016 at 5:05am | IP Logged
hai sai,
new ss thank u soo much for ur SS,
nice challenge, but always u make astha cry,
i want to see her happiness n chirpy yar,
anyways continue...

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Posted: 14 April 2016 at 5:48am | IP Logged
Wow...full of colors.
Nice update...seems to be an interesting story..
Thank youClap

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Posted: 14 April 2016 at 6:12am | IP Logged
Hey Sai... Nice start! 
7-day challenge to prove or disprove love... Interesting! Hope Shlok realises it soon and doesn't hurt Aastha any more...
Poor Aastha is heart-broken after seeing the fake medical report... 

Waiting to see what Aastha does now...

PS : What a colourful update Wink

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Posted: 14 April 2016 at 9:52am | IP Logged
Wow sai Interesting story again
Thank for keeping this fourm active
Waiting for more stories

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Posted: 14 April 2016 at 11:25pm | IP Logged
awesome...
thnks 4 d pm..

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Posted: 15 April 2016 at 3:55am | IP Logged
Originally posted by sudhamadhu

Hai Sai gud evening. Nice update.
Hai challenge between ashlok and Aditi with them.
Really I want to know one thing u want to say the truth.
Y u always makes astha so much crying Angry Angry.
Sai ur story is nice but make astha win please..
Keep writing more

thank u checiEmbarrassed
hmm Aastha win i cant say it now but it will be a win win situation thanks for supporting have trust in me

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