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MiHar SS : Soul-mates


Hey guys I am starting a new SS , I didn't get any other and better title!Wink

Started this coz many people wanted a fic on MiHar.Star

First part is written and I'll post it soon!! Next up , I'll be sending pms to those who are my buddies. Rest please comment here so that I can buddy you :)

Apart from this , I will try and be regular with this story but can't promise as I have many other pending works in other forums and also college. So bear with the late updates in advanceTongue

Umm next post is index and then I'll post the first chapter!Embarrassed

Maybe you will find the chapter small , but believe me if I get nice response I'll post next one in a day or two! 

Hope you will like my story and support me. 

Oh and a every big thank you for supporting my OS on MiHar!Big smile (Pikachu you still haven't read it :P)

Love AayushiHug


Edited by Aayu27 - 14 April 2016 at 2:25am

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Chapter 1 : The News and the resolution


"Mikhail baby ka accident ho gaya hai." Amar's voice echoed in the rehearsal hall. He turned around , his eyes had no reaction but his heart was crying , he wanted to cry and yelp in pain.


"Mikhail uski daadi bimaar thi , usne tumse koi jhoot nahi kaha and ab jab wo wapis aa rahi thi toh uska.." sonam started sobbing and by the end she was wailing , Amar hugged her wanting to comfort her.


"Mikhail in fact , Sonam aur amar ne toh mujhe pehle hi bta diya tha ki baby ne koi jhoot nahi bola , I discussed with Harry and we didn't tell you kyunki hum nahi chahte the tum distract ho jao." Diya told further , guilty.


Everyone was in shock , Harry , Diya , Tara but who was dead inside was Mikhail , he felt like a corpse. He asked them to leave him alone.


Diya went forward and kept a comforting hand on his shoulder , he spoke in a meek voice ,"Diya please..I want to be alone!" 


All left and as soon as he heard the bang of the door , the shackles on his heart broke and his eyes spilled tears , tears of remorse , of regret , of a broken heart.


He sank down to the floor and went over all the events of the past. Netra lied to him , used him , even Harry and diya lied to him , hid the truth from him and the one who never lied to him , Baby he blamed her all this while.


His own words came to haunt him back 


'I wish woh kabhi dance na kar paye.' 

'Jao aur mujhe apni ye shakal mat dikhana'

'Baby jaisi selfish ladki maine aaj tak nahi dekhi'


"Ahhh!!!" he shouted loud enough for God to hear , he was so wrong , so bloody wrong in judging a pure soul like her. She had always been truthful to him , the only one truthful to him in his life.


His eyes were bloodshot red. There were tears in his eyes , the news he had just received had stung his heart , he didn't think he could heal.


Taking out a bottle of alcohol , he drank it in a go and passed off to sleep , where he won't have any guilt or remorse , where he would hopefully be at peace.


As the sunrays disturbed his sleep the next morning , he got up shielding his face , the past night came running back to him , karma was chasing him.


Spluttering his way to the music console , he switched it on and decided to take his feelings out , take out his pain , his heart was hurting so much that his vision was blurring.



(Song: Counting Stars , Band: One republic)

Lately I've been, I've been losing sleep
Dreaming about the things that we could be


He caught hold of his head as the song started , he almost wanted to laugh at the situation and the song. How apt was it that he was dancing here and that girl was fighting for her life , no it was injustice , a cruel injustice.


But, baby I've been, I've been praying hard
Said no more counting dollars, we'll be counting stars
Yeah, we'll be counting stars


As he heard the word baby , he threw a glass on the floor , it shattered in pieces , much like his life had broken and fallen apart in the past few hours.


I see this life like a swinging vine,
Swing my heart across the line
In my face is flashing signs,
Seek it out and ye shall find.


As the music picked up , something , a force overtook him , he danced with so much vigour that he had never showcased in his dances before.


Old but I'm not that old
Young but I'm not that bold
And I don't think the world is sold
I'm just doing what we're told


Everytime he danced alone , it was peaceful , he looked for solitude but today , he seeked her , just her and her comforting arms around him.


And I I I I feel something so right by doing the wrong thing
And I I I I feel something so wrong by doing the right thing


Hearing these lines he stopped in his tracks, he was all along doing the wrong thing , calling her names , wanting her to be miserable and now that she was suffering , he was suffering along. It didn't seem the right thing anymore , it all felt terribly wrong.


I could lie, couldn't I, couldn't I?
Every thing that kills me makes me feel alive.


Never had he felt these feelings in his life , such pain , such passion , such hatred , such love , they were all mixed emotions but one fact was true , he was slowly dying from inside.


Lately I've been, I've been losing sleep
Dreaming about the things that we could be
But, baby I've been, I've been praying hard
Said no more counting dollars, we'll be counting stars
Lately I've been, I've been losing sleep
Dreaming about the things that we could be
But, baby I've been, I've been praying hard
Said no more counting dollars, we'll be-we'll be counting stars.


Suddenly his phone vibrated , there was a message written there ,"Mikhail , Baby is fine now but she can never dance."


A smile lit up on his face , she was fine , what if she couldn't dance , he would make her dance , coz one thing was sure , she was born to dance!


Edited by Aayu27 - 18 April 2016 at 5:18am

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Posted: 14 April 2016 at 2:04am | IP Logged
amazing start i really liked it i hope in show also we get such intense scene waiting for next part now

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Aayu aayu aayuuu..
U r such a sweet darling Hug
Tune hamari wish puri kar di of a ss/ff on MIHARHeart
Love u for dis aayuuuSmileSmile
Coming to d update..
It was an awesome start ..
D way u have defined mike's feelings..
D way u penned it down ..
Is just fabulous Clap
N dance scene where he is in pain..
He removing his pain n frustration by dancing was just awesomeee aayu ..
N d dialogue u used at d end was just superb "baby is born to dance" n he ll make her dance EmbarrassedEmbarrassed
Superb superb aayuuuSmile
D title of d ss is truely perfect Thumbs Up
Eagerlyyy waiting for next part..
Plz try to update soonnn..
N do pm meSmile


Edited by ekyyy - 14 April 2016 at 2:52am

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Posted: 14 April 2016 at 3:12am | IP Logged
Oh wow tht ws really good !!!SmileClap

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Originally posted by Natrajankalyani

amazing start i really liked it i hope in show also we get such intense scene waiting for next part now

Thank you , I am glad u liked it!Smile I'll update soon..
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Originally posted by ekyyy

Aayu aayu aayuuu..
U r such a sweet darling Hug
Tune hamari wish puri kar di of a ss/ff on MIHARHeart
Love u for dis aayuuuSmileSmile
Coming to d update..
It was an awesome start ..
D way u have defined mike's feelings..
D way u penned it down ..
Is just fabulous Clap
N dance scene where he is in pain..
He removing his pain n frustration by dancing was just awesomeee aayu ..
N d dialogue u used at d end was just superb "baby is born to dance" n he ll make her dance EmbarrassedEmbarrassed
Superb superb aayuuuSmile
D title of d ss is truely perfect Thumbs Up
Eagerlyyy waiting for next part..
Plz try to update soonnn..
N do pm meSmile

Ekky ,love you too. I wanted to write on MiHar and thought this will be the best thing to writeEmbarrassed

Thank you , I am happy u found the start nice and the feelings too..Smile

Dance scene was the reason I wrote this , I wanted to write itWink

Thanks I m happy u found it good.!! I'll try updating soon and pm u as well Hug

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