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lakham ff ( meri zindagi ha tuu ) last part. updated pg18 (Page 9)

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PART 5:
Lakhan stare at poonam with full anger and said
Lakhan : samjhaye , they na aapko ki ...( in very loud voice)
And stops because all the people in the restaurant are looking at them .
Lakhan : ka , dhukan khali
And people started leaving from there
Poonam got scared that wat is gonna next happen .lakhan look at najma and said
Lakhan : ka , ab tum ko likhit mai de ka
Najma : lekin wo poonam ,
Lakhan : ek baar mai samjh nhi ata h
In full angry mode , and najma leaves ,Poonam is shivering from inside as there is no one there .
Lakhan : ek baar samjhaya tha na aapko , phir ye kaisi harkat h , dekiye
And point his fingers towards poonam
But poonam interrupt
Poonam : pls , lakhan thakur pahele hamari baat sun lijiye , phir gussa kar lijiyega ham to yahi h .
Wo ham treat de rahe they apni friends ko aur apna purse bhool gye they isliye ...
Lakhan : is liye aapne hamari aisi ki taisi kar di hannn... Boliye
Are apni kisi dost se le leti na ...
Poonam : kyun sirf aapka hi ego h kya hamari bhi koi image h. Wo log kya sochti hamare bare mai ( in anger )
Lakhan is in shock ( in heart he thinks saalaaa ye kaisi ladki h , sab hamare gusse se itna darte h inko dar nhi lag raha h )
Poonam is thinking ( inko kitna gussa ata h hamari to jaan nikli ja rahi h , par ham ye show nhi hone dengey )
Lakhan : galti to ki h na apne ( now his tone becomes soft )
Poonam : to ham kab kah rahe h ki nhi ki ( very innocently she said )
In between this dolt is shocked to see this change lakhan he thinks ( saala ye kya ho raha h galti is ladki ki h aur chilla bhi yahi rahi h , aur bhaiya Ji sun rahe h khuch samjh nhi aa raha h )
Lakhan looks at the table where poonam's scootey key is and grabs it
Lakhan: ye sahi h ,
Poonam : ( in full attitude ) arre arre itna bill nhi aya h , hamari scootey bahut mahengi h , wapaa dijiye ye hamare bhaiya ne hame gift kiya tha
Lakhan : moving his one eyebrow up hmm bhaiya , thek h ham de dengey aapko scootey ki chabi pahle aap aapne Bhai ka no dijiye
Poonam : kyun bhaiya ka no kyun shikayat lagangey aap
Lakhan: us se aap ko mstlb nhi ( while sitting on the chair)
Poonam : dekhiye shikayat karni h to aap papa se mummy se kar sakte h par bhaiya se nhi
Lakhan didn't agree on that
Poonam : acha aap humko phir se paidal chala lijiye
Lakhan: ek aur rasta h hamare pas aap sab ka bill abhi dengi
Aur ham aap ko option nhi de rahe h , nhi to seedha ye baat aap kai Bhai tak pahuch jayegi
Poonam : thek h ham de dengey
Lakhan : to chaliye jeep mai baithiye
And poonam nodes her head and they both leaves first they go to ice cream shop
Manager : arrey bhaiya Ji yahi thi wo
Lakhan: jante h paise dene ayi h
Manager : arre madam aap kaisi h aisa bhi koi karta h kisi ki bhi mangetar ban ...
Lakhan become angry and said
Lakhan : saaleee tumko paise nhi diye they na to ab de rahi h , to chup chap hath nikalo aur paise lo , jabaaan nikalne ko nhi kahe h tumse samjhe
Poonam got impressed with the gesture shown by him .
And shopkeeper quietly takes the money and poonam clears all the bill
And they return to dolt's restaurant as her scootey was there
Lakhan : hmm , apni chabi
Poonam : ek baat puche aapse, aapne khud to bill nhi diya aur ghar par bhi lane ko kaha , hamse bill dilwaya aap kare to thek ham kare to galat
Lakhan : aap bachpan se itni akalmand h yaa...
Poonam : kya matlb h aapka ??
Lakhan : jab baat nhi malum ho to chup rahna sikh lijiye .
Arrey hamne ne bill ghar par bhejne ko kaha tha
Poonam hit her forehead by her hand
Poonam : ham bhi pagal h
And they both smile looking at each other and lost in each other
Dolt interrupts
Bhaiya Ji hame ek baat puchni h
They both come back to reality and look at him
Dolt : aap ne bhaiya Ji ko manggetar hi kyun banaya " Bhai " bna leti
Lakhan and poonam both speak together
Pagal ho kya ????
Lakhan: Bhai kahe baneygi
Poonam : inko ham Bhai baneygey , ???
With shocked expression
Dolt : to phir kya banayegi
Poonam : dost , kyun lakhan thakur dost to ban hi saktey h ham , waise bhi jayada logo ko jantey nhi h yahan par aap se dosti ho jayegi to acha rahega
Lakhan : thek h
And they both shake hand and poonam leaves , but lakhan is still looking at her
Dolt : bhaiya , bhabhi chali gyi
Lakhan: pta h be ki ... Saaleee kya be bhabhi ruko abhi batate h bahut zaban chalne laga h ...
Day passed and poonam and lakhan become good friend whenever Poonam is in problem lakhan solve it out in just few min

AT 12:30 A.M
Lakhan who was sleeping very peaceful was disturbed by the noise , but he didn't get up . again that noise interrupt him this time he get irritated and open his eyes and found out that his mobile is ringing he wasn't in a good mode but as soon as he see the name of the person his irritations turned into concern , he quickly picks up the call
Lakhan: kya hua Poonam , sab thek h na
Poonam : han sab thek h
Lakhan got relaxed
Lakhan: itna raat ko phone kahe ki phir
Poonam: aap se ek baat puchni thi , yahan begusarai mai koi theatre h
Lakhan again lay down on bed
Lakhan : poonam , pagal ho ka itna raat ko ye puchne kai liye phone kiya , arrey kahe nhi hoga har jagah hota h
Poonam: arrey , aap kai paas to dimag hi nhi h hame pata h ki har jagah hota h , par hame koi aisi jagah Jana h jahan bahut kam log hote ho , thoda space mil sake hame
Lakhan: kahe ( in full tension) aise jagah kahe Jana h kis kai sath Jana h
Poonam : began to laugh , lakhan thakur aap bhi na , fikr mt kariye aap kai aur najma kai sath Jana h , date pe nhi
Wo actually hame project mila h theatre kai upar to ham wahan ja kar check karengey kai wo log kaise kaam kartey h , aur aap ko hamare ye kaam karna h
Lakhan: hmm , acha thek h ek do din mai chaltey h
Poonam : nhiii, nhiii kal hi chalna h , next week deposit bhi karna h hamko
Lakhan: kal to bahut kaam h , bijiii han thoda
Poonam : ham khuch nhi jante ham kl hi jayengey warna jayiye dosti khatam
Lakhan: acha, aisi baat h ,...
Thek h kal 3 baje apne college kai piche wale road par milyega
Poonam : kahan ?? Hame samjh nhi aya
Lakhan : wahin jahan paidal chalne ko kaha tha yaad aya
Poonam : han , ab se uska badla bhi to Lena h
Lakhan : starts laughing , aisa karengi to leke nhi jayengey
Poonam : nhi nhi , ham to mazak kar rahe they
Lakhan: hmm , to phir thek h , chaliye ab phone rakhiye
And poonam cuts the phone
IN MORNING
Lakhan leaved the badi haveli in rush he haven't taken the breakfast . on the way he get a call
Lakhan : han , chuna ham raste mai hai aa rahe h , Abe aisa ka kaam pad gya tha tumko
Chuna : bhaiya , khuch baat karni h bijiness ki
Lakhan : han pahuch rahe h
After driving about two hour Lakhan reach the place
Lakhan : han kaa baat karni thi
And sit in the chair
Chuna : wo bhaiya ham balu ka kaam shuru karne ja rahe h , ganga kai daiyn ( right ) taraf kai hisse se balu nikalegey aap ko koi dikkat to nhi h
Lakhan : arrey , nhi nikalo hamko koi dikkat nhi h
Chuna ,: ee eee bhaiya kai liye thanda le kar aao
Lakhan: nhi thanda garam khuch nhi chahiye ham chaltey h
Chuna : acha bhaiya lassi to pi lijiye
Lakhan : arrey bole na khuch nhi chahiye
Chuna: bhaiya abhi tak naraj h , maaf kar dijiye na
Lakhan : Abe ka tumne hamko koi ladki samjh rakha h Jo tumse naraj hote phirengey , aur bahut kaam h hamare pas
And took our his mobile and sees the time
Lakhan : arrey ek baaj gya
And he was about to go but Chuna interrupt
Chuna : nhi bhaiya lassi to pi kai hi Jana padege
Lakhan become irritated and he says okk as he was getting late
Chuna yadav mix something in glass and give it to Lakhan and lakhan finishes it and leaves from there .
A cunning smile is on chuna yadav
Chuna : aaj to ho gya iska swahaaa
Haaahaaa

Lakhan is about to reach the place where he called poonam but he feel uneasiness and his vision getting distorted , and he feels that something is coming out of his mouth he take his hand and touches his mouth and he found that he is bleeding and watching this his vision betrayed him and he loss his balance , his jeep collides to a tree and his forehead hit the steering and bloods comes out from his forehead and he is in the state of subconscious .
               On the other hand poonam and najma are waiting for him .
Najma': Poonam 3:20 ho gya ab chalo lakhan thakur nhi ayengey
Poonam : najma tumhara dimag kharab ho gya h , unhone kaha hai ki wo ayengey to wo zarur ayengey
Ek to pta nhi kyun phone nhi udha rahe h
Poonam is worked up
Najma: tum itna pareshan kyun ho rahi ho ho Sakta h kaam mai phas gye ho.
Poonam : najma , ho sakta h ham hi galat jagah khade h , chalo thoda aage chal kar dekhtey h
And they sit on the scootey and move
As soon as poonam sees lakhan jeep she stop her jeep and move toward him but wat her eyes has captured her heart beat start beating too fast and tears automatically startes rolling down from her eyes lakhan thakur who meant everything , her world is bleeding very badly and upper part his green kurta has been turned into black Poonam ran towards him
Poonam : lakh. ... Lakhan thakur aap ...
Najma ma... Hamari madad karo
And they both manage to shift him to the next sit and poonam quickly jump into jeep
Poonam : najma tummm...badi haveli jao jaldi hammm... Hospital leke ja rahe h lakhan thakur ko
Najma go and poonam tear a part of cloth from his scarf and bandage his head and starts the jeep
Poonam : lakhan thakur , ankh kholiye dekhiye idar lakhannn thakur
Lakhan opens his eyes which eyeleds are wetted with the blood . he look at her and smile
Poonam: lakhan thakur , khuch nhi hone dengey aapko , aap hans rahe h
Lakhan : jantey h aap aa gyi h ab hamko khuch nhi hoga
Poonam stops the jeep as they had reach the hospital , poonam seeks for help and ward boy help her .
Poonam : doctor , dekhiye inhe khuch nhi hona chahiye samjhe aap
Doctor: arrey ye to Lakhan thakur h , inka to kafi khoon bah gya h inko jaldi I.C.U mai shift karo , aap yahin
Rukiye .
Poonam stops there and she is weeping too much as her world has ended .
Phulan thakur , najma and guddi reaches there .
Poonam cloths and hand is all red with the blood .
She want to control herself but her tears are not helping her ...


To be continued ...
In next part phulan thakur will go to poonam's house for marriage proposal of lakhan and poonam then , there will be a twist .
I know ki ye wala filler tha Ouch pls marna mt koi

Edited by bishmakhan - 20 April 2016 at 1:56am

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Bishma mai sirf tera ff padhne ayi hun ...exams hote hue ...or tune itna jra sa likha is bar bht lamba likhna m waiting fr ur update ...




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Posted: 20 April 2016 at 4:32am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Lakhanchamach

Bishma mai sirf tera ff padhne ayi hun ...exams hote hue ...or tune itna jra sa likha is bar bht lamba likhna m waiting fr ur update ...




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awww cynduu Hug dat's shooo sweet of u thank u shooo much Hug tere liye I will try to update it tomorrow Embarrassed
Lakhan wala hug tere liye Hug muahhh

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i wanna kill chuna Angry saala kameena Ermm


abey ka twist aayega...  jaldi update kar

please laakhan n poonmi ki shaadi karwadena pleej pleej Ermm 

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Again awesome updateEmbarrassed,waiting for the next 

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Originally posted by ..DRoadSoFar..

i wanna kill chunaAngrysaala kameena Ermm


abey ka twist aayega... jaldi update kar

please laakhan n poonmi ki shaadi karwadena pleej pleej Ermm
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Originally posted by Tanika_11

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="3" color="#ff0000">Again awesome updateEmbarrassed,waiting for the next</font>
thank u Hug hame LGA tha this one is not good Confused but u liked it Embarrassed

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ek dum wowiee likha dearClap
poonam bhi na kuch bhi bolti hai kuch bhi karti hai ROFL
dono k expressions on bhai ROFL
loving it update soon ..r shadi karwa dena dono ki jaldi Day Dreaming

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