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lakham ff ( meri zindagi ha tuu ) last part. updated pg18 (Page 5)

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Posted: 15 April 2016 at 10:05pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by ritukumari

jaan awesome blossom superb likha hai mein AC bn gyi teri nd thanx FF dene k liye mein yaha nhi aa skti monday tk so cyndu k haath next part de dena jldi likhna next part bht achi writer ho beta le jappiii Hug
rituuu Hug.   Thank uuu
Arrey yaar tum nhi ayegi to acha nhi lagega
Par chalo koi nhi de dengey next part muahhhmuahhh Embarrassed

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Posted: 15 April 2016 at 10:07pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by lakhamcrazy

chatter box vishesh offer hahahahhahahaha i,m enjoyingROFL
it,s cute sweetly written dear update next soon..Tongue
thank u Embarrassed I hope next part bhi enjoyable ho Wink

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Posted: 15 April 2016 at 10:08pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by bishmakhan

Originally posted by ritukumari

jaan awesome blossom superb likha hai mein AC bn gyi teri nd thanx FF dene k liye mein yaha nhi aa skti monday tk so cyndu k haath next part de dena jldi likhna next part bht achi writer ho beta le jappiii Hug
rituuu Hug.   Thank uuu
Arrey yaar tum nhi ayegi to acha nhi lagega
Par chalo koi nhi de dengey next part muahhhmuahhh Embarrassed

comment marne aaugi janu u r too gud likhte jao bsEmbarrassed

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Posted: 15 April 2016 at 10:23pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by ritukumari

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Originally posted by ritukumari

jaan awesome blossom superb likha hai mein AC bn gyi teri nd thanx FF dene k liye mein yaha nhi aa skti monday tk so cyndu k haath next part de dena jldi likhna next part bht achi writer ho beta le jappiii Hug
rituuu Hug.   Thank uuu
Arrey yaar tum nhi ayegi to acha nhi lagega
Par chalo koi nhi de dengey next part muahhhmuahhh Embarrassed

comment marne aaugi janu u r too gud likhte jao bsEmbarrassed
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Posted: 16 April 2016 at 1:47am | IP Logged
who said its bad its fantastic do write mre luv it...

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Posted: 16 April 2016 at 1:59am | IP Logged
Originally posted by crazy_inu

who said its bad its fantastic do write mre luv it...
thanks dear fr liking it Embarrassed
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Posted: 16 April 2016 at 6:09am | IP Logged
Ok thank u everyone for bearing me Hug
Here is the next part
PART 3
Lakhan leaves Poonam to her home she was about to enter but stops and hit her hand on her forehead
Arrey najma se bolna to bhool hi gye ki scootey ghar par de jaye
And Take out her mobile and calls najma
Poonam : hello Najma scootey park kar Jana ghar par sham se pehle warna bhaiya dimag kha jayengey okkk
Najma : han thek h aatey h
And poonam enter her home smiling
Radha : kya baat h poonam bahut khush lag rahi ho phone aa gya kya uska ..
Poonam : kis ka phone ma
Radha : lagta h begusarai khuch jayda hi acha lag gya h tabhi to tum..
Poonam : han han ma hum samjh gye aap kis ki baat kar rahi h nhi aya koi phone
And make her way to the kitchen
Radha : to beta tum hi kar leti busy ho shayad
Poonam : arrey ma acha kar lengey and screams with joy waaahhh palak paneer ma ham jaldi se fresh ho kar aatey h bahut jor se bhuk lagi
Radha : par Poonam .. Ye ladki koi baat nhi sunti
AT BADI HAVELI
Lakhan enters badi haveli
Amma !! Amma !!!
Rekha : arrey ka hua hamr betwaa kahe chilla rahe ho
Lakhan : bahut jor ka bhuk lga h
Rekha : han , to khana lagate h na pehle muh hath to dho lo
Lakhan : hmm aatey h papa kahan han
Rekha : khuch kaam se bahar gye h khuch contract ko lekar h tum jaldi aao
Lakhan goes to his room.
Lakhan is thinking about Poonam
Ek dam hi ajeeb hi ladki hai , khuch bhi bolti h
In the evening at badi haveli
Phulan : lakhan idar aao
Lakhan : Ji papa
Phulan : chuna yadav aaj kal khuch jayda hi puliya kai kaam mai aa raha jara kl milke samjha dena use thek h
Lakhan : ji bilkul papa
Phulan : suno sirf samjhana hi h thek h na ...
Lakhan : Ji papa samjh gye
Next day
Lakhan : amma hm ja rahe h jra kaam se thek h
Rekha : acha khane kai time aa Jana
Lakhan : aa jayengey
Phulab thakur enters lakhan takes his aashirvad and go .
Lakhan while driving thinking only about Poonam and suddenly he stops his jeep and he is shocked to see where he has reached
Lakhan : eee ka saala hum to chuna yadav kai pas ja rahe they college kahe aa gye hunhhh lakhan thakur pagla gye h tum chalo wapas
He was about to leave but stops he sees Poonam who was in black long skirt with red top and black scraf over it .her hair was open and parted form side having a half dozen steel bangles in her right hand and a watch in her left hand she was looking gorgeous beautiful lakhan thakur was mesmerized by his beauty
Lakhan : ab aa hi gye h to puch hi lete h chot kaisi h
And jumps off from the and walk towards poonam who is talking to najma and lakhan was about to interrupt them but he stops cause he hear that they are talking about him
Najma : Poonam hame to abhi bhi yakeen nhi ho raha h tumne lakhan thakur ko bewakuf bna diya , aur wo khud tumhe ghar chod kai aye
Poonam : hamne kaha taapko
" Poonam naam hai hamara khuch bhi kar saktey h , to lakhan thakur kis khait ki muli h "
Lakhan hear this and close his fist in anger and towards his jeep
Lakhan : saalaaa , hame bewakuf bnaya abhi batate h
And get ups from his jeep but stops
Lakhan : bahut eesmart samjhti h khud ko inko to sabak sikhana hi padege taki inko yaad rahe ki hamara naam bhi lakhan thakur h
Lekin kare ka
And an idea strikes his mind
Lakhan :   ye thek rahega and calls a boy and ask him to call Poonam and that boy do as he was ordered
Boy : suniye poonam aapko lakhan thakur bula rahe h
Poonam : acha , kahan h ?
Boy : wo samne h
Poonam : sees lakhan thek h aap jao , Najma dekh tum to kah rahi thi ki kisi se nhi bolte ab dekha , tum ruko ham aatey h
And poonam move towards lakhan
Poonam : ab kya nuksan karne aye h ??
Lakhan : nhi ham to bas puchne aye they ki chot kaisi h aapki
Poonam : hain thek h ab kafi
Najma interrupt Poonam ab ghar chalna chahiye
Lakhan : poonam ham chod dete h aapko ham udhar hi ja rahe they
Poonam : nhi ham khud chale jayengey
Lakhan : ab maaf bhi kar dijiye agar aap hamare sath nhi chali to hame lagega ki aapne hame maaf nhi kiya
He said all this by making so innocent face
Poonam : acha thek h najma tum scootey ghar par chod dena
And poonam sit in the jeep and lakhan is very happy as his plan is working lakhan drives out the jeep
Poonam : arrey ham to kl us rastey se gye they to aap is rasteh se kyun le ja rahe h
Lakhan : aap nyi h na begusarai mai isliye nhi pta ye chota rasta h
Poonam : acha thek h , acha h jaldi pahuch jaye bahut jor se bhuk lagi h
Lakhan in his heart says abhi to bhuk pyas sab lagegi
And poonam as usuall starts his chattering and suddenly lakhan stops the jeep .poonam look around and ask
Yahan kyun ruka ? Kya hua jeep kharab ho gyi kya
Lakhan give her a smrik and said
Lakhan : nhi jeep bilkul thek h , jaise aapka pav bilkul thek h
Poonam is shocked and think how did he come to know that she faking .
Lakhan continue
Lakhan : aap ko ghar Jana h to aapko yahan se ekdam seedha 5 km chalna padega to aapko college milge fir 3 km aur chalengi to aapko aapka ghar mil jayega
Poonam : kya matlab hum yahan se ghar tak paidal jayengey
Lakhan : arrey baahh !!! Aap to bahut ..ka kahte h ..han...intelligent h
To phir isara samjhiye aur neeche utariye
Poonam : lakhan ..
Lakhan : chup neeche
Poonam comes down from the jeep
Poonam : aap aise kaise hame chod kai ...
Lakhan : ye to aapko pehle sochna tha
" ab galti ki h to saza to milegi "
Jab aap dhup mai 8 km chalenge to aapko yaad rahega ki hamara naam lakhan thakur h
And he drives out his jeep
Poonam starts walking ( in BG ye ye phasa tone starts )
After walking around 1 km she found lakhan thakur there
Lakhan : arrey ka hua ( smiling ) thak gyi ka abhi to 7 km baki h
Poonam : lakhan thakur ( sweating and very tired ) paap lagega aapko
And starts walking and turn around and say
Poonam : lakhan thakur hamara ek kaam kareyga hamara aakhiri paigam hamare ghar pahucha dejiyega ki poonam apni family se bahut pyaar karti h aur agar ham maar gye na to police le jayegi jail aapko and turn again
Lakhan : acha suniye
Poonam : kya hua police ka naam sun kar darr gye ( smiling , very cutely she says )
Lakhan : abhi begusarai mai aisa koi officer nhi h jo thakuro Jo pakda sake
Khair , ek optionnn h apke pas
Poonam : kya ??
Lakhan : agar aap hamse maafi mang lengi to ham aapko ghar chod dengey
Poonam : not a big deal. Sorry lakhan thakur and moves towards his jeep
Lakhan : arrey puri baat to sun lijiye
Apne maafi mang li thek h par aap tab tak nhi jeep mai aa sakti jb tk ham aapko maaf na kar de
Poonam : kya ???
Lakhan : thek h to phir ham chaltey h agar aapko dikkat h
Poonam : rukiye ,rukiye
In angry mode poonam says
Lakhan thakur maaf kr dijiye sorry
Lakhan : aap mafi mang rahi h ki dhamki de rahi h
Poonam : okkk acha rukiye this time poonam says smilingly
Lakhan thakur sorry
Lakhan : ab jee ka baat hui aap maafi mang rahi h matlab aap sharminda g pachta rahi h par aap to Hans rahi h aise koi maafi mangta h hum ja rahe h
And starts his jeep
Poonam : pls pls rukiye
Lakhan : ye last chance h aapka
Poonam comes in front of lakhan thakur' s jeep and sit on her knees holding his both ear very innocently she says
Lakhan thakur maaf kar dijiye , ab ham dubara aisi harkat nhi karengey aap to mahan h , shaktishali h , lakhan thakur ki jai jai
Lakhan jo bahut mushkil se aapne aap ko control kar ke baitha hua tha starts laughing so loudly after listining her last line and refer her by his two fingers to sit in the jeep . poonam quickly get up and sit in the jeep . lakhan is still laughing .
Poonam : ab bas bhi kariye , waise aap hastey hue kitne jayda cute lagta h .
And poonam but her hand on her chin and start looking at him .Lakhan stops laughing and sees her and they had a.
eye lock and lakhan break the eye lock and stats the jeep and they both r quite .lakhan broke the silence and said
Lakhan : aap khuch bol nhi rahi
Poonam didn't reply
Lakhan took his mobile and start a recording in which poonam us apologizing him . poonam looked at him shockingly
Poonam : lakhan thakur aap kitne gande h ...hunhhh
Lakhan : arrey ghabraiye mt , ye isliye rakha h taki hamara gussa shan't rahe , aur agar apne dobara khuch soch hame bewakuf banane ka to him ye recording ... Ka naam h aapki dost ka najma usko suna dengey ..
Poonam furiously looks at him but didn't say a word ( in heart poonam is saying " poonam shant ho jao inko to bad mai dekh lengey , inko maza to jarur chakeyge )
They reach at Poonam' s home poonam get down from the jeep and leaves and lakhan is smiling then , suddenly he remember
Lakhan : arrey , lakhan thakur tum pagla gye ho chuna yadav se milna tha aur ham yahan aa gye
And he start the jeep and rushes toward chuna yadav place

AT CHUNA YADAV PLACE
Lakhan enters in chuna yadav place
Chuna : are Lakhan bhaiya aap aaeye aaeye
Lakhan with his full swag pull the chair and sit on it with his both legs on the table
Lakhan : chuna ka baat h aaj kl bahut puliya banane ka shauk Chad raha h
Chuna: wo bhaiya bas ham to ..
Lakhan : dekho eee bas track hame samjh nhi aata h
Ek baat kah rahe dono kaano ko achi tarah se khol kai sun lo puliya kai buijness se door raho samjh gaye
Chuna : par bhaiya ji hum to usme kafi paisa lga chuke h
Lakhan gets up and took him from his collar
Lakhan : saalee papa ne kaha h ki sirf samjhana h isliye abhi batiya rahe h
Abhi to sirf paisa doob raha h , uspar afsoos kar saktey ho .
Agar ham apne traike se samjhaeygey na to saala paise to doobega par uspar afsoos karne ke liye tum nhi hoge
And leaves him and he was about to leave but stops and turn around
Lakhan : aur ek baat achi tarah samjh lo " ek baar ko baar baar bolna hame bilkul acha nhi lagta h aur agar hame acha nhi lagega to tumhare liye bahut bura ho jayega "
And he leaves


Okkk I m stopping here
In next part lakhan will meet with poonam's brother rishab .
Tell me everyone whether I will continue or not Smile

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Posted: 16 April 2016 at 6:42am | IP Logged
jabar update thaClap poonmi ki to watt laga di bailbuddhi ne ROFLROFL...i was reading this for like 10 times

keep updating ... nahi toEvil Smile

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