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lakham ff ( meri zindagi ha tuu ) last part. updated pg18 (Page 18)

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Posted: 30 April 2016 at 3:52pm | IP Logged
ohhh wht a update must say ek dum hat k jabar Thumbs Up
priyom phycho lol bt us ne poonam ko mara kaise me dar gaeOuch
i love naughty lovly and angry lakhan thakurEmbarrassed
itna suspenswa create kar diya tu neShockedab last update jaldi r lenghty de full detail meWinkakhir me raat k 2 baje beth kar tera update parh rahi hu inaam to milna chahiya naHug

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Posted: 30 April 2016 at 10:26pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by ritukumari

awww i loved this lakhan naughty nd intelligent Day Dreaming mza aa gya aaj to sootli ki pitayi hui omgROFL poo jealous kregi apne hubby ko too gud yrHug
but i must say kmini hai tu ek no.ki serial jaise suspense pe khtm kr diya aisa lg rha ab weekend k baad aayega begusarai lmba wait krwayegi ab ye ldkiROFL
rituu mai kamini ROFL LOL nhi jayda wait nhi karengey jaldi de dengey update LOL
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Posted: 30 April 2016 at 10:28pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by lakhamcrazy

ohhh wht a update must say ek dum hat k jabarThumbs Up
priyom phycho lol bt us ne poonam ko mara kaise me dar gaeOuch
i love naughty lovly and angry lakhan thakurEmbarrassed
itna suspenswa create kar diya tu neShockedab last update jaldi r lenghty de full detail meWinkakhir me raat k 2 baje beth kar tera update parh rahi hu inaam to milna chahiya naHug
priyom to villain h Angry
Tu jayda khuch expect na kariyo , tujhe kausi detail chahiye LOL awww how sweet tune raat kai 2 baje padha Hug

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Posted: 30 April 2016 at 10:32pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Lakhanchamach

Abe awsm ..mera dil ro rha ...kya hua age tune main point pe rok dia
thank u cynduu Hug. Tu ro mat warna mai bhi ro dungi   Cry , last update tha thoda suspense to banta h LOL
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Posted: 30 April 2016 at 10:34pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by crazy_inu

m bitting my nails aage kya hoga Shocked
   LOL bitting ur nails LOL
Thanks yaar , Hug
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Posted: 30 April 2016 at 10:36pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by ..DRoadSoFar..

hey bhaggu Ermm
ab to maha suspensewa hai
last updates tha thoda suspense banane de Smile , iskai baad Maine khuch kahan likhna h Ouch
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Posted: 04 May 2016 at 7:46am | IP Logged
Hello my frnds Hug thanks to all who encouraged me to write so that I m able to complete my sooo first ff , hmm so its my last update Smile so I wanna thank everyone who ever have commented on my ff and all the viewers too .Hugthis the first and last time I had written anything thank to all .
Okkk so much bakar bakar here is the last part


LAST PART:
Lakhan and poonam are leaving but before they leave priyom took the gun and load it , lakhan hears that sound and turn back , lakhan sees that priyom was pointing the gun at poonam before priyom can fire the bullet and poonam become lifeless , lakhan push poonam , poonam fell down and bullet Pierce through Lakhan chest very near about his heart , priyom again shot and this time bullet embedded at the right side below his ribs , poonam screams with her full strength " lakhan thakur "
Priyom doesn't stop here, he goes for third bullet but dolt reach there with his men , priyom quickly elope from there . lakhan fell down on ground poonam ran towards him . poonam took his head in her lap .
Poonam ( started crying ) nhi , nhi Lakhan thakur khuch nhi hoga , aapko dolt jaldi aao , khuch nhi iii hoga aapko and creases his face .
Lakhan sweep his tears and said
Lakhan : shhh.. poonam , Rona mat aapke anso , hamko bahut takleef dete h he hardly open his eyes thakurain Rona nhi and he faints .
Poonam and dolt take him to the hospital , doctors take him to the operation theater dolt call at badi haveli . phulan , rekha and guddi reach there . rekha is crying like hell , guddi is also crying phulan is very tensed .
But not even a single drop of tear come out from poonam's eyes .
Guddi comes near to her , but she is murmuring only one thing .
Poonam : ham hamm bilkul nhi royngey Lakhan thakur , aapko bahut dard hota h na ham bilkul nhi royengey ,
Guddi : bhabhi , sambhalo khud ko and guddi is crying
Poonam: guddi tum pagal ho , ro kyin rahi ho khuch nhi hoga Lakhan thakur ko , unhone kaha tha hamse ki unki jaan ham mai basti h to...phir agar ham zinda h tooo too ..unko kaise khuch ho sakta h khuch nhi hoga unko samjhi tum
But guddi is still crying , poonam stand up and speak loudly
Poonam : tumhe samjh nhi aa raha , ham kabse kah rahe h ki khuch nhi hoga Lakhan thakur ko tumhe samjh kyun nhi aata h , Rona band karo
Guddi hugs her and dolt also comes towards them
Dolt : bhabhi sambhiye khud ko
Poonam : ham thek h , dolt suno hame priyom chahiye wo bhi zinda , lakhan thakur kai hosh aane se pahle wo hame chahiye , warna ham tumhe mar dengey , samjhe tum jao dhondo use jao ( poonam is too angry )
Dolt : bhabhi aap fikr mat kariye ham dhond lengey use
And dolt leaves poonam sit on the floor ( judai song of badlapur is on BG) poonam talks to herself
Poonam: ye acha nhi kiya aapne lakhan thakur agar aap ko khuch ho gya to ham jee kai kya karengey aapke bina zindagi kis kaam ki lekin pahle us priyom ko marengey phir khud ko
Doctor come out from operation theater poonam comes towards him and rest also they ask doc how he is now , doc says that they are trying their best .
Its around 5:00 am poonam is all mum she haven't taken a single drop of water nor utter a single word , she is all quite as she has lost her senses , dolt comes there and calls her but she didn't look at her , she is constantly looking at I.C.U and looking like some one has taken out her soul only body is there , dolt again calls and said that he had got priyom . poonam look at him
Dolt : bhabhi pakad liya ham , saala bhag raha tha hamare bhaiya Ji ki mar kai , bahar h hamare admiyon ne mar mar kai halat kharab kar di h
Poonam stand up and go out of the hospital , and she sees priyom two men's are holding him from his arm and he is on his knees that priyom cause of which her love of life is fighting to his life , cause of which she has the fear of loosing him , she got too angry , her face is all red .
She moves towards priyom and grab his collar , priyom is not in good condition , he is bleeding from his nose , mouth , poonam slap him
Poonam: tumhari wajah se aaj hamare lakhan thakur yahan h , and again slaps him , ek baat bahut ache se sun lo priyom agar lakhan thakur ko khuch hua na...
to ham tumhe itni buri maut dengey ki tumhari ruhh tak kanp jayegi , marna to tumhe hai hi , lekin agar unko khuch hua to ham tumhara kya karengey , iska andaza bhi tum nhi lga sakte , Dolt
Dolt : Ji bhabhi Ji
Poonam : isko le jao aur haveli kai peeche wale godown mai dal do , ek katra pani ka bhi nhi milna chahiye ise par jab tak ham na kahe ise zinda rakhna kaise bhi kyunki isko to ham khud apne hantho se marengey ,
Looks at priyom and said , bas yahi manao ki Lakhan thakur ko khuch na ho to hi tumhare liye acha hoga
Dolt : Ji bhabhi zinda rahega ye aap fikr mat kariye
.
Next day its about 10:00 am doctor come and tells them that lakhan us out of danger , he will gain consciousness after an hour then they can meet him . poonam listen this and she become so relaxed as some one has taken back her life , after an hour Lakhan became conscious and he look around him rekha , guddi phulan all are there , but poonam is missing he quickly get he become tensed
Lakhan : amma , poonam kahan h thek to h na ,yahan..
Rekha : beta , wo bilkul thek h bahar h , tum pagal ho khuch ho jata kisi ko bata kai nhi ja saktey they ..and starts crying
Lakhan : ka amma , thek h ham arrey kaun si jayda chot ayi h itna ghabraya mat karo .
Rekha : acha tum aram karo
And they all leave lakhan is thinking why Poonam is not there , poonam is outside the room , guddi comes to her and ask her to meet lakhan , why she is not meeting him , he us so worried for her poonam node her head and move towards the room .she slowly opens the door lakhan is sitting on bed , Lakhan look at her with complaining eyes , and turn his head .
Poonan come towards his bed and stands there
Lakhan : aap ko hamari bikul bhi fikar nhi h , sab milkai chale gye , ab aapko fursat mili h jayieye aap ko bahutt,...
Poonam hugs him very tightly and starts crying , lakhan also hugs her and he is trying to calm down her but she is crying so much that she got hiccups , lakhan ran her fingers into her hair and consoling her , lakhan breaks the hug and said
Lakhan : poonam , ab aap hame pareshan kar rahi h ham thek h na , ab chup ho jayiye . khuch nhi hua h hame chup .
Poonam again hugs him and said
Poonam : sab ...sa..b hamari wajah se hua ...na ham aapko ...roktey na hi aap ki ye halat hoti ..sa ..b hammmari hi galti h ..
Lakhan cups her face and kiss on her forehead , nhi aapki koi galti nhi h
Poonam move his hand
Poonam : hame apse koi baat nhi karni h , aap kyun beech mai aye usne hame marna chaha tha , hame yahan par hona chahiye tha aapko nhi..
Lakhan put his finger in her lips
Lakhan :shhh hamare jetey Ji aapko koi hamse kaise chin Sakta h , jab tak ham hai khuch nhi hone dengey aapko , aapko khuch hi jaata to to ham aise hi marrr..
Poonam put her hand on lakhan's mouth ( Jo tu mera hamdard h of ek villian is in BG)
Poonam : dobara phir aapne aisi baat ki to ham aapki jaan le lengey ,
Lakhan : hame nhi malum tha ki aap itna pyar karti h hamse
Poonam : koi pyar nhi kartey h aapse
Just then nurse enter and tells her leave so that he can take rest .poonam leaves and lakhan give a deadly look to nurse , after two days he got discharge from the hospital , poonam is taking to much care of him , poonam goes down to bring soup for lakhan , lakhan move from bed and start walking poonam comes there
Poonam : arrey aap se kaha h ki koi kaam ho to hame boliye to phir bed se kyun uthe mna kiya h na hamne
Lakhan is looking at her lovingly
Poonam ; kya h chaliye chup chap baithe jayiye
Lakhan : agar ham mar jatey to aap kya karti
Poonam look at him furiously and said
Poonam : aapko kya lagta h , ham priyom se shadi kar lete aur kya ..
And she was about to leave but lakhan hold her hand and pull towards himself
Lakhan : achaaa , aisa baat h , aapko malum h jab aap nhi mil rahi thi to ham kitna ghabra gye
Poonam : ( literally crying) aye jab aap hospital mai they tab hamari kya halat thi pta h aapko khuch , ham ek anso bhi nhi roye they kyunki aapns mna kiya tha , par aapko kya aapko to sirf khud se matlab h ek bar bhi hamare bare mai nhi socha ki aapko khuch ho gya to ham kya karengey , agar aapko khuch ho jata to ham khud ko khatm ..
Lakhan : shhh...
And lift her up to his height and hug her
Lakhan : aur aap kahti h ki aap pyar nhi karti hamse , puri pagal h aap
And put her down and kiss on her forehead .

In the night about 2 am poonam phone ring and she wake up and pick up the call , lakhan also wake up but he is laying on the bed
Poonam : acha ruko ham aa rahe h
She gets up slowly cause she doesn't want to disturb lakhan , she moves towards the drawer and open it she took out the gun from it move out of the room . lakhan get up and follow her , Poonam reaches the backside godown of badi haveli where priyom is kept dolt is also there Lakhan hide behind the door to see what is happening
Poonam : lagta h bahut dil se dua ki thi tumne ki Lakhan thakur ko khuch na ho , khushkismat ho Bach gye.
Priyom ; to tum hame Jane dogi
Poonam : tumhara dimag kharab h
Yahan koi film nhi chal rahi , aur na hi ham koi heroine h ki tumhe maaf kar de , tumne hamare lakhan thakur ko hamse chinne ki koshish ki , tumko mna kiye they ki unko khuch mat karna , hamne kaha tha ki marna to tumhe hai hi , par ab Lakhan thakur thek h tk tumhe asan si maut dete h ,
Bas ek goli tumhare mathe ( forehead) pe marengey aur tumhari aatma bahar
And poonam load the gun and pull the trigger put lakhan interrupt and raise her hand , Poonam shockingly look at him .
Poonam ; lakhan thakur aap ne ise kyin bachaya aap jantey h na ki isne ..
Lakhan : han Poonam , pta h isko bachane nhi aye h aur isko kaise maaf kar sakte h isne aap ko Marne ka koshish kiya ,
Poonam : to phir aap ne hamara hanth upar kyun kiya ??
Lakhan : isko itni asan maut who dengey , isko to zinda rahna h , bahut pagalpanti swar thi ise , to iskai liye ek dam sahi jagah dhonde h ham han yahi sahi rahega ,dolt isko pagalkhane (mental asylum) bhejne ka intejam karo samjh gye , ab jab tak ye zinda h wahin rahega , bahut pagal panti swar thi sab thek ho jayegi .
Dolt : Ji bhaiya Ji ho jayega
Lakhan : Chalo ab ghar jao bahut raat ho gya h poonam aap bhi chaliye aur han darwaza jata thek se band kar dena
Dolt locks the door and poonam and lakhan comes back to their room .
Lakhan ; hamko nhi malum tha ki thakurain ko itna gussa bhi aata h , hamko lagta tha ki sirf hamko hi gussa ata h ,
Poonam: hunhhh , to agar aap Lakhan thakur h , to ham bhi Poonam lakhan thakur h
Lakhan raise his eyebrow acha and move towards her and pin her to the wall and put his both hands around her
Lakhan : poonam lakhan thakur to aap ko sach mai dar nhi lagta and start getting close to her . Poonam become nervous .
Poonam : n .. nhi
Lakhan come more close to her , this time poonam put her both hand at lakhan's neck and stand up on her toe and kiss on his forehead , lakhan stunned and lost in her action closes his eyes , poonam then , kisses on his cheek , and quietly get down on her feet and move from there leaving him in that position , she get into bed and lay down ,
Poonam : arrey , itni raat ho gyi h so jayiye
Lakhan who was lost in her world come back into senses and found her smiling on bed . he also smiles and sneak into bed and hug her from back and kiss on her cheek .
Lakhan : hmm , so jayiye
And they both sleep in that position .

AFTER ONE WEEK
Lakhan is now all fit and fine totally , he had gone to his tehka , in the afternoon around 3pm he call poonam
Poonam : hello
Lakhan : Poonam , jaldi se yahan par as jao wait kar rahe h jaldi aana
Poonam : par hua kya h
Lakhan : ( in anger ) ek bar mai baat samjh nhi aati h jaldi se yahan aa jayiye and cuts the phone , poonam had no idea why he had called her , she reaches the place .
Poonam: aapne itni hadbadi mai yahan kyun bulaya h , kya hua h
Lakhan: jeep mai baithiye
Poonam : par ...
Lakhan look at her , poonam quitely get into the jeep and lakhan start driving it .
Poonam : ab to bata dijiye kya hua h
Lakhan : ek dam chup ek awaz nhi chahiye hamko ekdam chup .
Poonam didn't know wat had happened , why he is soo angry cause he never treated her like that , Poonam become so tensed .finally jeep stops at a house , the same house where Lakhan bring her before marriage , where he injure his hands . lakhan come down and poonam too come down , lakhan took out a packet from the jeep and pass it to poonam , poonan take it
Lakhan : ander jayiye , aur ye pahen kar ayiye
Poonam : par ismai kya h aur hamm..
Lakhan : hmm , sawal bahut karti h aap , Jo kaha h wo kijiye
Poonam quietly goes inside the house , and she is stunned to watch wat was inside , all the walls of the room are filled by her photos , and there is a one big photo of both of them in the center of the front wall , poonam become too happy but she was still in confusion , poonam open the packet she found a T-shirt of white colour , a black leather jacket , a deep blue jeans , a goggle ,and long boots she didn't understand wat was going on , she wears that as it was his order she can't deny ,she come out of the house lakhan who was waiting for her outside sees her she was looking too beautiful , hairs parted by side with goggle hooked in her T-shirt , he moves towards her , poonam get nervous as she didn't know why he was doing all this .lakhan come towards her and lift her in his arms , poonam got stunned by his action .Lakhan is only looking at her , poonam is not able to look into his intense eyes , she look where they are going , lakhan moves towards the backside of the house and she found something was covered by a black cloth , lakhan put her down
Lakhan : is kapde ko hataiye
Poonam does that and the thing she found made her too happy and she scream with joy and hug cum jump over lakhan , lakhan pull her up and smiles . on the same position Lakhan ask her
Lakhan : acha lga aapko , ab se aapki hi h ,and put her down
Poonam : aap bahut ache h , acha hame bahut pasand aya , aapko kaise pta ki hame bullet bahut pasand
Lakhan : aapne hi bataya tha , hame nhi malum tha ki aapko ye itna pasand h warna bahut pahle le dete
Poonam : Lakhan thakur lekin aap bahut bure h aapne hame kitna DRA diya tha , and give him a punch
Lakhan : ka kartey , bta dete to itna khush nhi hoti aap , chaliye ham aapko sikhtey h kaise chalti h
Poonam : nhi hamko aati h , chaliye ham chalatey h aap hamare peeche baith jayiye
Lakhan : pakka na gir to nhi jayengi
Poonam : arrey gir kaise jayengey aap h na , phir aap sath h to kya gam h and winks Lakhan smiles and sit behind her , poonam was driving well .
Lakhan : arrey , aap to sach mai achi chala leti h
Poonam: han to , aapko kya lga aisa koi kaam nhi h is duniya mai Jo poonam nhi kar sakti .. Ham bahut achi bullet chalatey h chahe khuch bhi ho hamara balance nhi bigadta ( very proudly she says )
Lakhan : achaaa
Lakhan thinks abhi inko batatey h and put his both hand on her waist and put his head on her shoulder . he was to close to her , poonam become nervous , and losses her balance . they were about to fall but lakhan manages to balance it and poonam stops the bullet. Lakhan get down and poonam also . Lakhan give a smrik and ask her
Lakhan : arrey , aap ne to kaha tha ki aap ka balance nhi bigadta phir ka hua
Poonam looks at him angrily .
Lakhan : kaa , aise ka dekh rahi h , bas kariye ghor ghor kai khatm hi kar dengey ka hame , hunhhh ham bahut achi bike chaltey h dekh liye ham kitni achi chalati h .
Poonam : apne cheating ki , apne hame disturb kiya
Lakhan : arrey hamne ka kiya Bhai ab itna tez chalyega to pakadna to padega na nhi to ham gir jatey .( very innocently he says )
Poonam : acha , to phir aap chalayiye , dekhtey h kitna balance kar patey h
Lakhan : achaa , aisa baat h took her goggle plus his black kurta with green scarf he was looking dapper with full swag he sit on the bullet and poonam to sit .
Now its poonam turn , poonam put her both hand around her chest but he didn't loose the balance .
Lakhan laughs and say
Lakhan : sahi h aise bathiyega to kabhi bhi balance kharab nhi hoga .
Finally they reach at a place both if them get down from the bullet ,the scenario was too beautiful , sunset is about to done , it was a valley , there were so many trees with beautiful flowers on them , poonam open her both hand and closes his eyes to cherish the moment , lakhan hug her from behind and said " meri zindagi h aap , aap ki bina ham apna jivan soch bhi nhi saktey , adhoore h aapke bina , aap kabhi chod kai nhi jayengi na hame , aap pahli aur aakhri ladki h Jo hamari zindagi mai aayi " Poonam turn and said " aap bhi hamari zindagi h , aapke bina jeena bikar h , aap duniya h hamari ham kabhi nhi chod kai jayengey aapko , aur agar mar bhi gye to bhi bhoot ban kar aapke sath hi rahengey " and both smiles and hug each other . Poonam thinks life is soo beautiful with him , she had never think she will get a life partner who loves her soo much without any condition .


Mera ronaa bhi tu ,
Hasna bhi tuuu,
Tu hi sukooonnn,
Meri har khushi h tuuu,
Tuuu, tuuu
Meri zindagiii h tuuuooo

     mera jeena bhi tuuu
Marna bhi tuuu
Ishq hai tuuu
Meri har khushi ha tuuuooo
Meri zindagi h tuuuooo
Tuooo
                   Smile THE END Smile
Bhai ab kaisa bhi tha khatm ho gya sabka dhanyawad Wink Hug

Edited by bishmakhan - 04 May 2016 at 8:22am

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bishma...

i am giving you an order Ermm


do write next FF...warna kabhi baat  nahi karungi Ermm ... n i mean it



last part was jabar Hug 

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