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Posted: 29 April 2016 at 3:07am | IP Logged
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Originally posted by ritukumari

wowww awesome bhishu le meri pyar ki jappiii Hug mein sirf tere liye aayi yaha vrna u know na mera aane ka bilkul mood na hai Smile

poo ko us sootli ne kidnap kiyaROFL ab use LT se kaun bchayegaAngry yr tune bat wala seen yaad krwa diya mza aa gyaDay Dreaming

mene comment maar diya ab next part de dhamki hai ye LOL
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Hello everyone Hug sorry for the delay Smile without doing bakar bakar here is the next part .
P.s : I have updated my index
PART 9 :
Poonam is thinking about priyom that she will meet him or not wat will be lakhan's reaction if he will get angry or not cause she know that he love her so much if she wanna meet priyom he will allow that but that possessive part of him . ahhh she was stuck in her thought . when lakhan enters enters she was sitting on bed . lakhan come towards her and sit on the floor taking her hand in his . poonam come out of his thoughts .
Lakhan : kya hua kaun si soch mai itna doobi h aap
Poonam : khuch nhi
Lakhan : arrey batiye
Poonam : wo abhi bhaiya ka phone aya tha , wo wooo
Lakhan : ka baat h ham sun rahe aap aram se boliye
Poonam : wo priyom begusarai aaya h aur hamse milna chahta h
Lakhan : hmm, wo kya chahta h is se hame koi matlb nhi h , aap agar chahti h to aap mil lijiye .
Poonam : ( a bit shocked by his calm behaviour) aapko koi prblm nhi h
Lakhan stand up
Lakhan : huhhh, hamko kahe farq padega and moves towards the cupboard now poonam is facing lakhan back .
Poonam : ye wahi h jisse hamari sagai hui thi
Lakhan: han to
Poonam : matlab aapko koi fark nhi padta
Lakhan is now , smiling
Lakhan : kahe hame kahe fark padega , arrey aapki marzi jis se milna h Milo , ismai hame kya
Poonam : acha ,kyun nhi padega , biwi hai ham aapki
Lakhan turns and raise his eyebrow up
Lakhan : achaaa,
And lakhan start walking towards her ,and become too close to her , that close so that his warm breath us now , heating her face he was about to kiss her when poonam push him . ye ye ky..a kar rahe h , lakhan in so teasing tone kahe patni h na aap hamari , aap hi ne to bola , han boliye
Poonam : wo wo ..
Lakhan : han han , sun rahe h
Poonam run away from there , and take a deep breath and an unknown smile comes on her face .
In the afternoon lakhan come back to home
Lakhan : guddi , pani do yaar , bahut thak gye h aaj
Guddi brings water for him , Lakhan ask guddi whom car is there outside there haveli , is anyone ha
Guddi : wo bhaiya , bhabhi ka Frnd priyom aaya h
Lakhan who was drinking the water stops . and move towards upstairs
Guddi ; arrey bhaiya , glass to de dijiye
But he didn't listen and come to his room they weren't there , he cross the room and come towards the second door and ahh there was she in green saree she was looking lovable , with smily face but oo something disturb her . her smile gone and a sudden discomfort can be felt on her face , lakhan move a little to find out wat was bothering her and the scene his eyes captured wasn't a pleased one , priyom was holding her hand . poonam was about to take off her hand but she realise that someone is watching them , from the corner of her eyes she sees him and as soon as she see him she got an idea to jealous him . she put her over priyom hand . now , this was too much for Lakhan he got too angry and his anger blast on the glass which he was holding , and with in a sec glass convert into pieces and his hand start to wet by his own blood . poonam turn
Poonam : arrey Lakhan thakur , aa gye aap , priyom aao tumhe milate h
And come towards him
Priyom ; achaa , to tum ho lakhan thakur kafi naam chalta h tumhara yahan par
Lakhan :uuu ka h naam nhi raj chalta h hamara , jab tak yahan ho ache se rahna , Poonam khuch khilaya h aapne ki bas batiya hi rahi h
Poonam : han , ham to bhul gye ruko ham khuch late h
Priyom ; nhi poonam , der ho gyi h waise bhi radha ma intezar kar rahi Hongi ham chalteh
Poonam ; chalo ham neeche tak chod kai aatey h
And they both go , poonam after leaving him was thinking arrey lakhan thakur ko to koi fark hi nhi pade hame lga tha ki ham uska hath pakdengey to unko jalan ...and her captured the blood on the floor , she follow it and they were going on the roof , she reach from where it was coming it was lakhan 's hand Poonam quickly ran towards him took his hand
Poonam : ye aapne , kaise lagi chot , hame bataye bhi nhi kitna khoon nikal raha h , ham ham abhi patti le kar aatey , ( she was soo tensed )
This wasn't the first time , she become always so tensed when something hurts Lakhan , she quickly ran into the room and take out the first aid box she returning she found glass pieces near the door . Poonam came back and start bandaging him
Poonam : lag rahi h
Lakhan nodded his head in no .
Poonam : kitna khoon bah gya , lag to nahi rahi h na
Lakhan : nhi poonam
Poonam : aapne glass kyun toda
Lakhan : aap hi to chahti thi na ki ham khuch kare , hame jalan ho to kahe pareshan ho rahi h
Poonam looks at him angrily
Poonam : aap ko lagta h ki ham aapko hurt karke khushi milti h , ham itne bure h ki aapko ...and she start crying
Lakhan :ahhh hh
Poonam : kya hua lagi kya chot mai
Lakhan : han lagi bahut zor se par yahan nhi took her hand and place it on his heart   yahan lagi .
Poonam snatches her hand . lakhan sweep her tear and cups her face .
Lakhan : poonam , is duniya mai koi bhi , koi bhi cheez hame rattti bhar bhi takleef nhi pahucha sakti , par aapke ye ansu ,, ye bahut takleef pahuchate h hame Bahut zayda
Poonam get up and was about to leave but lakhan pull her to himself and arrest her by his hand ( like that hand pump scene of Lakham)
Poonam : hatiye , chodiye hame ,koi baat nhi karni h hame
Lakhan : aapko kahe itni takleef hoti h agar hame chot lagti h to
Poonam: kyun aapko bhi to hoti h na
Lakhan : arrey , hamko to hogi na , jaan basta h hamara aap mai .par aapko kahe
Poonam : han to hamari bhi too...
Lakhan : han kya ,
And poonam didn't get anyway to get out of this situation as lakhan was holding her she tried her best to escape but alas she failed
Lakhan : pahle jawab de dijiye fir Jane dengey aapko
But Lakhan phone rings and his become loose and Poonam quickly get herself free from him and leaves . lakhan smiles and say kabhi na kabhi to aapko manna padega thakurain .

In the night Poonam told Lakhan that she will go to her home tomorrow as her mother had called her .
Lakhan makes faces
Lakhan : arrey , unko bula le na aap yahan
Poonam: arrey kitne din ho gye h ham apne ghar nhi gye , ham bas kal ja rahe , aur waise bhi ham aapse puch nhi rahe , bata rahe h warna aap phir se gussa karengey
Lakhan : acha thek h kal ham chod dengey , phir jab aapko wapas ana ho to hame phone vkar lijiyega
Poonam : arrey nhi ham khud chale jayengey aur aa bhi jayengey
Lakhan : poonam , ... .kabhi koi baat sun bhi liya kijiye . ham le ke jayengey aur leke bhi aa jayengey
Poonam : acha thek h agar bhaiya hue to ham unke sath as jayengey
Lakhan : hmm , thek h par wada kariye akele nhi ayengi
Poonam nodded her head in yes
NEXT DAY
Poonam and lakhan leaves for poonam's house . on the way poonam see a bullet and start gazing that bullet lakhan notice it and ask her wat she is looking at .
Poonam : wo dekhiye bullet , ( very cheerily she said )
Lakhan : han dekha hamne ismai itna khush hone wali kya baat h
Poonam : hame bullet bahuttt pasand h , ham bullet hi Lena chatey they par papa ne scootey dila di hunhhh
Lakhan : to sasur Ji ne ekdam thek kiya , wajan dekha h aapne aapna bullet gir gayi to utha bhi nhi payengi hahaha
Poonam : hmm , so funny and give him a punch , hame bike chalana , guns ye sab bahut pasand
Lakhan : achaa tabhi ham bhi pasand h aapko
Poonam : han nnn , nhiii nhii
Lakham start laughing and they reach at home , both enter in and lakhan greet her mother and he leaves on the outside he see priyom .
Lakhan : suno ,
Priyom: hamse khuch kaha
Lakhan : han , dost ho poonam kai , to sirf dost ban kai hi raho , tumhari sagai hui thi , par shadi hamse hui h , is bar to begusarai aa gye ho dobara aye to wapas nhi ja payogey samjhe , kahan gayab ho jaogey tumhari saat pushtey bhi nhi dhond payengi , to dor raho unse . and he leaves
Its about 5pm poonam look at the time and said she should leave and she will call lakhan , priyom interrupt and said come on I will drop u don't trouble him . poonam said no its okkk and calls lakhan but lakhan didn't ans . priyom said may be he is busy with some work come on we r frnds now , can't u trust me . poonam said no , that's not matter but .. Priyom said no if no but let's go I had bought new car .come see it poonam said okkk and she sit inside the car . priyom start driving but poonam sees that its not the right way .
Poonam : priyom ye rasta nhi hamare ghar ka
Priyom : I know that ham ghar nhi ja rahe h
Poonam : to ham kahan , priyom car ruko , tum and take out her mobile but priyom snatches it and throw it out of the window
And reach at a place
Priyom : bahar aao poonam .
Poonam: tum pagal ho gye ho , tumhe pta h lakhan thakur ko pta chala to tumhara kya karengey
Priyom grab her inside and tie her to a chair
Priyom : tum ko kya LGA , tum kisi se bhi shadi kar logi aur ham tumko aise hi Jane dengey tumhe malum h 2saal se sagai hui h hamari bas those dino mai tumhari padhai puri ho jati phir hamari shadi ho jati , par wo kamina lakhan aa gya hamare beech, tumhe pta h ham tumse kitna pyar kartey h ( he is behaving like a phyco )
Poonam ; par tumne kaha thi ki tum pyar nhi kartey
Priyom : hit his hand at the chair jhot bola tha hamne , bahut pyar kartey h , aur ham ye bhi jantey h ki tum bhi ham se pyar karti ho , tum na Lakhan ki chinta mat karo wo khuch nhi kar payega , usko ham jaan se maar dengey
Poonam: tumhara dimag kharab ho gya h , ham sirf lakhan thakur se pyar kartey h , aur agar tumne unhe hanth bhi lagaya na to ham tumhe zinda nhi chodengey .
Priyom get up and he is murmuring poonam don't love me , she don't love me and take a glass piece and start piercing it in poonam 's hand
Priyom : ab bolo karti ho na hamse pyar , karti ho na
Poonam: ahhh , priyom hame takleef ho rahi h hatao ise tum pagal ho chuke ho
Priyom : aur Jo tum hame takleef de rahi ho uska kya
Poonam thinks that she can't get out of this if she behave like this
Poonam ; han , priyom ham tumse pyar kartey h
Priyom quickly leave that glass
Priyom ; pahle kah deti , faltu hame gussa dilaya , dekho tumhari wajah se Kitna khoon nikal gya
And he take out his hanky and place it over her wound
On the other side lakhan pick his phone and sees poonam miss call and he calls back her , but her phone was switched off . lakhan become tense he quickly get to his jeep and reach at Poonam 's house but he didn't find her radha tell him that she had leaved from about one before with priyom . lakhan called at badi haveli guddi pick up the call lakhan ask him whether poonam is there or not guddi ans him that she is not there . now , become so tensed and ask radha to give him priyom's no radha give him that ,lakhan calls him but he didn't pick up the call .
On the other hand
Poonam : priyom pls hame khol do
Priyom : nhi tum chali gyi to
Poonam : nhi ham kyun jayengey , ham to tumse pyar kartey h na , hame bahut dard ho raha h priyom pls hame khol do .
Priyom opens her, its around 9pm and his phone ring
Priyom : pta nhi kaun h barabar phone kar raha h
Poonam sees the no ye to lakhan thakur ka no h ham kya kare kaise bataye lakhan thakur ko and she sees a nail she quietly take that and Pierce it into her hand like that her wound look like a snake bite
Poonam : ahhh ahhh, priyom hame khuch kata bahut zor se dard ho raha h
Priyom,: dekho hame , ye to
Poonam : wooo wooo priyom hamne abhi saanp ( snake ) ko dekha udhar tha
Priyom : matlb tumko saanp ne kata h
Poonam : priyom hame doc kai pas chalna hoga
Priyom : nhi doc kai pas kaise ja saktey h , us Lakhan ko pta chal jayega
Poonam ; priyom , ham marna nhi chahtey h , hame pls bacha lo , priyom hame chakkar aa raha h khuch thek nhi lag raha
Priyom : ham doc ko leke aatey h
Poonam : jaldi jao
Priyom leaves but he locked the door from the outside but he has forgetten his mobile poonam quickly grab it and call Lakhan lakhan pick up the call
Poonam : lakhan thakur
Lakhan : Poonam kahan ho tum , ham kabse , thek to ho na ham kitna
Poonam: lakhan thakur priyom hame and tells her the whole incident .
Lakhan : us saaleee ko to ham, poonam wahan koi khidki ( window ) h dekh kai batao kahan par ho tum , aas pas kya h
Poonam : han , yahan par construction ka kaam chal raha h , aur ye area begusarai se bahar h
Lakhan : poonam ham samjh gye tum kahan ho bas apna khayal rakhna ham jaldi aa rahe h , aur han hamari call delete kar dena ,aur andar se darwaza band kar lo ham jaldi aa rahe h hain ghabrana nhi bilkul bhi .
Poonam : nhi , ander se lock nhi kar saktey , par ham bilkul thek h .
Lakhan cuts the phone and calls dolt and tells him to come with his men .
Lakhan rushes towards the place ( mujhe Teri zarorat is in BG )
Priyom come back poonam ask him
where is doc priyom ans that he has forgotten his phone and he was about to leave when he hears lakhan's jeep sound .priyom sneak through the window its lakhan outside
Priyom : poonam lakhan aa gya , ise kaise pta chala
Poonam: arrey ab tum kya karogey kya hoga tumhara, ab tum to gye priyom
And give him a cunning smile
Priyom : tumne jhoot bola , thek nhi kiya
He took out his gun and point towards poonam before he can shot the bullet and poonam become hurt Lakhan opens the door in just one kick and shot the bullet at priyom's hand and priyom losses his gun .

Lakhan run towards poonam and hug her and checking her he asked
Lakhan : tum thek ho na
Poonam quickly hide her hand by her saree pallo and nodded head in yes .
Lakhan rage can be seen by his eyes which are all red , he rushes towards him and give him a solid punch on his face and priyom want to Punch him but he grab his hand and give a kick on his stomach , priyom fell down ,lakhan lift up the chair and start beating priyom with it .
Lakhan : saale tumko samjhaye they na ki dor raho unse ,
Lakhan grab his collar and made him stand
Lakhan : saala tumhari himmat bhi kaise hui and give him a punch again priyom starts bleeding from his mouth and nose .
Lakhan took out his gun , roll it out
Lakhan : saala , ab Jo tum galti ki ho uski saza to sirf maut h
Priyom : han , maar do poonam , hame maaf kardo hamne bahut galat kiya hamko maaf kardo by joining his hands ham ko marna nhi h ham dost h na tumhare ,aur mere papa ne kitni help ki h tumhare papa ham jaan gye h ki tum hamse pyar nhi karti hamko maaf kardo ham kabhi laut kar nhi ayengey yahan , hame galatfahmi ho gyi thi ki tum hamse pyar karti ho maaf kardo Poonam hame and start crying
Lakhan ; eee saale, tumne Jo kiya h na
Poonam hold her hand and nodded her head in no
Poonam : priyom tum dost they hamare , us dosti kai liye , aur Jo tumhare papa ne hamari family kai liye kiya h uske liye tumhe maaf kar rahe h par agar dobara tum yahan aye to ham khud tumhe goli mar dengey
Lakhan: par poonam aise kaise chod de isko ham and move towards him but poonam stop him
Poonam : aapne hi kaha tha na ki aap hamare ansu nhi dekh saktey , agar aao isko marengey to thodi so takleef hame bhi hogi pura bachpan sath mile kar guzara h hamne .ise chod dijiye , isko ilaj ki zarorat h , mentally disturbed h ye aap chaliye .
Lakhan took his gun back into his pocket and they both are leaving . priyom look at his gun which wasn't away from him
He took the gun and fire the bullet ,and again he fires ,he shot two bullets

To be continued...
Next part will be the last part
Big smile


Edited by bishmakhan - 30 April 2016 at 7:24am

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Abe awsm ..mera dil ro rha ...kya hua age tune main point pe rok dia

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hey bhaggu Ermm
ab to maha suspensewa hai

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awww i loved this lakhan naughty nd intelligent Day Dreaming mza aa gya aaj to sootli ki pitayi hui omgROFL poo jealous kregi apne hubby ko too gud yrHug
but i must say kmini hai tu ek no.ki serial jaise suspense pe khtm kr diya aisa lg rha ab weekend k baad aayega begusarai lmba wait krwayegi ab ye ldkiROFL

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Awesome yaar, eagerly waiting for the next updateBig smile

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m bitting my nails aage kya hoga Shocked

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