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lakham ff ( meri zindagi ha tuu ) last part. updated pg18 (Page 14)

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Originally posted by ritukumari

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LT itna smart hai na kya kahe...poo ko do basr sula diya,bewkuf bna k shadi kr li,poo ki family ko smjhaya,LT ki golden sher wani nd white pathani salwar uper se poo red me love u yr jldi continue kr...
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thakur k paas bohat bhuddi hai matlab itna bara plan bana dala  ..bohat acheCool
i,m loving kamjori to poonam hi hai looking forward to lakham momentsDay Dreaming
update jaldi r bara walaHug

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thakur k paas bohat bhuddi hai matlab itna bara plan bana dala ..bohat acheCool
i,m loving kamjori to poonam hi hai looking forward to lakham momentsDay Dreaming
update jaldi r bara walaHug
han kartey h jaldi update ,
But lakham moment waise to na milengey jaise rituuu deti h , rituuu gazab h Bhai Embarrassed thank u muski Embarrassed

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ye dono bhai behen itna jhoot bolte hai phr kahte hai hm jhoot nhi bolte... yaar ye pri ki entry karana zaruri hai...or agr karwani hai thn koi or actor ko pri bnao... n ur update to superrr se bhi uperrr hai

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Originally posted by Sonu.Ka.Vishal

ye dono bhai behen itna jhoot bolte hai phr kahte hai hm jhoot nhi bolte...yaar ye pri ki entry karana zaruri hai...or agr karwani hai thn koi or actor ko pri bnao...n ur update to superrr se bhi uperrr hai
haaa jhootey h dono LOL tu kisi aur ki PRI imagine kar le Wink   thank u for liking it sonuuuHug
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Finally read it, it was very nice, waiting for the next updateBig smile

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PART 8. :
AFTER A WEEK FROM LAKHAM MARRIAGE

Poonam is in her room and going to take bath , but she hears that guddi is calling her
Guddi : wo bhabhi , aap se puchna tha ki ... ( and her eyes widened ) haww , bhabhi ye something hit her feet   ahh , ye kya halat bna rakhi h aapne room ki .
Poonam : wo hame samjh nhi aa raha tha ki kya pehne
Guddi : to aapne kamre ko hi dukan bna diya
And guddi starts to collect all the clothes .
Poonam : arrey , chodo ham kar lengey abhi ,
Guddi : nhi bhabhi , agar bhaiya aa gye to bahut gussa karengey , aapko nhi malum unko unka kamra ek dam saaf chahiye hota h warna bahut dant padti h .
Poonam : achaaa , tum rehne do ham saaf kar dengey , tum bolo kyun ayi thi .
Guddi : arrey , ham kyun aye they , bhabhi ham bhul gye , chaliye jab yaad ayega to bata dengey .
Par ab room zaroor saaf kar lijiyega .
Poonam : ham promise kar rahe h , tumhare bhaiya tumhe nhi dantengey okkk , jao
And guddi leaves and poonam also takes shower .
Its 11:30 pm Lakhan haven't come at home , Poonam is waiting for him on the terrace and walking around . after sometime she hear lakhan's jeep horn she literally ran towards the balcony and she sees him he was in black kurta , he looks too tired , he was so busy all the day he haven't come to home for lunch also . lakhan stops the jeep after sometime he realised that someone is looking at him he look upwards and found that poonam is looking at him smilingly his all tiredness removes in a minute as soon as he sees her glowing face . when Poonam sees that he is also watching him . she goes back into the room .
            Lakhan come down from the jeep and walk inside haveli he was happy , and pleased but after sometime he doubt something .
Lakhan : poonam hamko dekh kar kahe muskura rahi thi ,hamse to gussa h phir .
He was lost in his thoughts but what does he say when he was at his room. He stop there guddi comes there
Guddi : bhaiya wo aap khana ...
Ye kya ...bhabhi aap ne kaha tha ki aap room saaf kar dengey par aap ne to iski halat aur kharab kar di .
Guddi looks at lakhan who is surely not in a good mood
Guddi : bhaiya han abhi saaf kar dete h
Lakhan : guddi , nhi zarorat nhi h tum so jao
Guddi : aapne promise kiya tha bhabhi ki aap..
Poonam : han hamne kaha tha ki tumhe tumhare bhaiya se dant nhi padegey aur nhi padi .
Guddi : acha bhaiya aap khana kha lijiye
Lakhan : hmmm (controlling his anger) tum jao ham dikh lengey
Guddi : par bhaiya
Lakhan tap at her cheeks and said that she should sleep as she has to go hospital tomorrow. Guddi leaves .
Lakhan looks at the messy room &then at Poonam who is smiling there .
Lakhan closes the door and starts to collect all the things and placing them at one place on the floor . poonam is thinking that guddi has said that he has anger issues but he is behaivibg so calm .after collecting all the things he take his pillow and blanket and put it on sofa . poonam gives a winning smile and she was about to go to bed when lakhan put all the collecting things on her bed , Poonam is shocked to see that and looks at Lakhan .
Now , its Lakhan turn he stretch his hands
Lakhan : hahhh, bahut nind aa rahi h .and sleep on the sofa
Poonam is also tired but what can she do she has no option besides cleaning her bed , Poonam starts putting all the things at their place . about 12:30 am she finally finished the cleaning and she was about to sleep .but stopped by lakhan's voice
Lakhan : dubara ye galti mat kijiyega , ye saza aapko is liye mili h taki aapko yaad rahe ki dobara hame gussa dilane ki koshish mat kijiyega .kyunki ham apni poonam par gussa nhi karna chahtey . jantey h ham ki bahut gussa aata h hame par kahan kis tarah gussa nikalna h ye bhi pata h hame ,samjhi aap ab so jayiye , raat bahut ho gyi h so jayiye .
And Poonam quietly sleeps .in the morning poonam was sleeping but disturb by lakhan's voice ,
Lakhan : han , malum h , jaldi aa jayengey chalo rakho phone , arrey yaar jaldi se naha le warna late ho jayengey , and enter in bathroom but he realised that he had forgotten towel outside . as soon as lakhan come out of the bathroom poonam rushes toward bathroom and she locks the door .
Lakhan : arrey poonam pahle hamko nahana h , hame der ho jayegi
Poonam : to ham kya kare , ham to Naha kai hi ayengey
Lakhan : arrey yaar , inko bhi na had samay masti hi sujhti rahti h , ab ham ka ...han guest room wala bathroom use kar lete h ,lo hamare kapde bhi bathroom mai hi rah gye , dusre nikalne padengey .
Lakhan takes his clothes and move toward guest room .
On the other side , poonam who is enjoying irritating him realised that she haven't taken her cloths and the clothes she was wearing become wet .
Poonam became tensed now , how will she come out of the bathroom she started walking in the bathroom after 15 min she sneaks through the bathroom door and found that lakhan is not in the room .
Poonam : lagta h lakhan thakur chale gye .
Poonam quietly open the door and seeing here and there she is forwarding towards the cupboard but ahhh her misfortune lakhan thakur enter in the murmuring something .
But lakhan is stunned to see her she was in his dark blue kurta and black jeans .she was looking too cuteee and her wet hair are doing nothing but enhancing her beauty .lakhan starts walking towards her .and poonam stepping back
Poonam : wo ha...mmm jaldi mai apne.eee kapde le Jana bhool gye they , aur hammmra kapde geele hoo
Poonam collide with the wall and lakhan put his both hand around her
and come to close to her that his warm breath can be feel by poonam , poonam heart beat become so fast ,
Poonam : wo is is liye ham. neee apke ham wapas kar dengey
Poonam want to speak but words are not coming out of her mouth .
Lakhan slowly took off his white scraf and start to wrap around her neck in the same style as he used to .
And then lakhan bend towards her ear and in his sooo soft and husky tone he said
Lakhan : ghabraiye mat , Jo hamara h wo aapka hi hai , aapko ye pasand to yahi pahen lijiye and kiss on her left cheek . Poonam become stunned by his action . lakhan with in a second move his lips and move towards the door . stop and turn he said
Lakhan : jaldi aatey h aise hi rahena , ek dam thakurain lag rahi h , hamari poonam lakhan thakur and he leaves
Poonam who is in the same position came back into senses . she sees herself in the mirror ,and start smiling but she realise what he had done
Poonam : touching her cheeks inki himmat bhi kaise hui , ...
Inko to ab ham nhi chodengey, aane do wapas . and goes to bathroom and change her dress and wear a green colour saree .
At lunch time lakhan came back to have lunch after taking lunch he goes into his room.he opens the cupboard and start finding some file .poonam enter in the room in full anger she said
Poonam ; aapki himmat bhi kaise wo harkat karne ki
Lakhan start walking toward her and said
Lakhan : achaa bathroom mai aap gyi , late ham hue , hamare kapde aapne pahne , aur gussa bhi aap kar rahi h bahhh ka baat h , ham ka kiye
Poonam : wo aapne hamare ...
Lakhan : han boliye , sun rahe h ham , ham bhi to Jane kya kiya hamne
Poonam : wo wooo...close her fist hunhhh and turn around to leave but lakhan hold her hand and pull towards himself because of that jerky action poonam collide with him .
Lakhan : rukiye , ham batate h kya kiye they ham and kiss on her right cheek
Poonam looked at him stuuned ,
Poonam :aap ne ...
Lakhan : arrey nhi galti ho gyi idhar nhi udhar
And lakhan again kisses on her left cheek , poonam widened her eyes as she wasn't able to stop him . a huge smile come on lakhan face and he leaves . poonam got lost in his world .

NEXT DAY
Its around 3:00 pm lakhan return at home and take lunch . after taking luch he go to his room but he didn't find poonam there , he calls her but no reply from poonam side , he came down from the stairs and start calling her. He ask rekha but she reply she didn't know where she is .
Lakhan look out for her in the whole house but Poonam was no where Lakhan become too worried as his life , his poonam wasn't near to her an unwanted fear has approached him whether she is alright or not .
Lakhan call her , but she didn't answer his call.Lakhan also called at her home but she wasn't there .
Now its a big trouble for Lakhan where was she ,rekha tell him to calm down
Rekha : beta , shant ho jao , shayad kahin chali gyi ho aa jayegi
Lakhan : arrey , amma !!!! Kahan chali jayegi ..
Never in his life he has scared this was the first time he was scared , he never feelted this type of emotion . a fear of losing her he was calling her but not even a single time she answered the call . he has called her around 30 times. Now , he was about to leave haveli and search her when she entered , the moment he saw her he got so relived . but in the next moment his anger get back rekha was asking her where she was but before she can ans Lakhan hold her hand and drag her too their room rekha stop him but he said that its their matter .
After entering in the room lakhan closes the door in loud voice said
Lakhan : thi kahan aap , aap ko ham kitni baar phone kiye ,par apne uthana zarori nhi samjha aisa kahan gyi thi aap hainnn...
Poonam become so scared as before lakhan didn't behave to her like this he was so angry his eyes are filled with rage .
Lakhan : hame aur gussa mat dilaye Poonam jawab dijiye
Poonam start stumbling and said
Poonam : wooo , najma kii kii ... cal..lll ayi thi ..ki..ki uska accident ho g..yaaa hai isliye ham uske pas gye they aur jall..lldi mai ba ..batana bhul gye
Lakhan hold her from the shoulder and pin her to the wall.
Lakhan : thek h man liya , batana bhul gyi jaldi , par jab aapko phone pe phone kiye ja rahe they to phone kahe nhi uthaya aapne .aapko malum apni zindagi mai pahli bar kitna dar gye they ham ki aapko khuch..par aapko ka ..
Poonam : wo ham...hamara phone silent pe tha
Lakhan : saala ham phone , phone kahan h aapka dijiye hamko Poonam give him her phone and he throw it on the floor .
Lakhan : jab saala kaam kai time kaam na aaye to kis kaam ka aur aap
And turns but Poonam start crying .lakhan closes his eyes and close his fist and hit his hand on wall.
Lakhan : Rona nhi h
And leaves from there , poonam is so upset .
At night guddi calls Lakhan and tell her that poonam is so upset she didn't take good and from the he had leaved she is on the terrace . lakhan said nothing in reply.
Lakhan was about to reach haveli when it start raining heavily lakhan get inside and go to terrace first . he found poonam who was drenching in rain . lakhan come towards her
Lakhan: poonam , ander chaliye , bheeg gyi h aap .
Poonam didn't reply
Lakhan : khuch kah rahe h na aapse chaliye warna thand lag jayegi kafi bheeg gyi h aap
Poonam : in so sad tone hame nhi Jana
Lakhan : Jana to padega and took her up in his   arm . poonam said to took her down but Lakhan didn't listen her they enter in the room through the door which open towards the terrace .
Lakhan put her down and quickly get a towel and said to take it and dry herself poonam doesn't do that .Lakhan takes the towel and start drying her hair
Poonam : hatiye ,
Lakhan : jayiye aur kapde change kar lijiye warna thand lag jayegi
Poonam : hame nhi karna h
Lakhan : dekhiye chup chap change kar lijiye warna ..
Poonam : warna kya hain , phir gussa karengey , ( and again start crying )
Lakhan : arrey nhi karengey gussa , par ja kae change kar lijiye warna bukhar ho jayega .
Poonam : to ho Jane dijiye , ham hamesha aap ki bast kyun mane .
Lakhan : to aap hamari baat nhi manegi . ( putting his both hands on his waist ) to thek h aap pe gussa kar nhi saktey to khuch to karna padega .
And move towards door and closes it from outside and stand in terrace drenching himself in the rain .
Poonam opens the window and said
Poonam : ye aap kya kar rahe h bheeg jayengey .
Lakhan : jab tak aap change nhi karengey ham yahi bheegengey . ab agar aapko bukhar hua to hame bhi hoga
Poonam : to thek h jayiye
About one hour has been passed lakhan is outside . poonam thinks that now , today rain is also not stopping .
Poonam : pls , lakhan thakur ander aa jayiye .
Lakhan (sneezes) aaa. ..chiii nhi ayengey pahle hamari baa.. aaachhhiii maniye .
Poonam : ziddi kahin kai .
Poonam losses and quietly changes her clothes .
Poonam : ab thek h change kar liya hamne , ab aa jayiye
Lakhan : pahle wada kariye ki aap hamara phone ka hamesha jawab dengi
Lakhan : aur aap hamse bahut pyar karti h
Poonam : ha.. ( but realises wat she was going to say ) chup chap ander aa jayeye
Lakhan opens the door and come inside poonam give him towel and his clothes and ask him to change .
Lakhan become very happy seeing her concern towards him .
Lakhan : hamko nhi pta tha ki itna fikr karti h aap hamara , ham bhi kartey h tabhi ..
Poonam : han , pta h tabhi itna gussa kiya ( Poonam starts crying )
Lakhan : arrey arrey nhi nhi ...nhi karengey gussa bas
he hugs her but poonam moves away then , he move towards bathroom .lakhan opens the door of bathroom and look at her and said
Lakhan : hamesha aise hi rahna .
NEXT MORNING
Poonam get up and take shower . after taking shower she sees the time its 8:00 am and lakhan haven't wake up yet as he has a habbit of waking up early . she was thinking that when she realises that lakhan who was sleeping on sofa was about to fall from it . poonam quickly jump there and hold him . and wat she realises after touching him his body was burning he has high fever . Poonam calls him lakhan very difficulty open his eyes , Poonam help him to get up and lay down on the bed . poonan ran down stairs and tell rekha about him . doctor was called . doctor give him injection which help in lowering the temp very much and give him some medicine . after an hour lakhan get back into senses .
Rekha ; ka pagla gye they , malum h na tumko barish mai bheegne se kitni jaldi sardi ho jaata h phir kahe bheege barish mai , dekho to kaisa halat kar liya h . poonam , lao ka dwa di thi doc ne do time ho gya h
Lakhan : dekho amma ab thek h , ye dwa daru ham nhi khayengey
Rekha : arrey aise kaise nhi khaogey
Guddi : bhaiya ye kaisi zid , itni mushkil se aapka bukhar kam hua h
Lakhan : amma janti ho na hame ek bar kah diye ki nhi khana to nhi khana jao ab thek h ham
Poonam : ma , guddi aap log jayiye , ham khila dengey
Rekha : arrey bahut ziddi hai ye
Poonam : aap fikr mat kariye hame pta h kaise khilana h .
Guddi and rekha leaves .
Poonam walk towards the drawer and took out something , his back is at lakhan
Lakhan : ab apne hanth se bhi khilayngi to bhi nhi khayengey , aap ki wajah se hua h hame bukhar ( in so much innocence he said,)
Poonam turn and she has a medicine bottle in her hand .
Poonam : ye kisne kaha aapse ki ham dwa khilayengey aapko . khushfahmi h aapki . ye dwa h aur ye pani ye teeno tablet khani h fatafat .
Lakhan : ab aap ko khushfahmi hui h
Poonam (smilingly ) nhi ham khushfahmi nhi rakhtey , ye Jo bottle hai na hamare hanth mai ismai sari dwa mix kar di hai hamne hamare 5 count karne tak aapne dwa nhi khayi to ham ye pi lengey . 1 2
Lakhan take all the three tablets in one go .
Lakhan : kha liya hamne , aap ko bhi sardi hua h aap bhi kha lijiye
Poonam in full attitude
Poonam : hunhhh, ham apki tarah nazuk nhi ki barish mai bheegne pe sardi ... aaachiii.
Lakhan starts laughing
Lakhan : han dekh liya kitni takatwar h hahaha , chup chap kha lijiye warna ham ye dwa pe lengey .
Poonam taking her one eyebrow up
Poonam : acha thek h , aapki marzi
Lakhan : poonam ham mazak nhi kar rahe 1 2345
And poonam folding her both hands is so relaxed .lakhan drinks that medicine after taking two sip poonam stops him .
Poonam : bas bas , itna kafi h aapki khansi thek ho jayegi
Lakhan confusingly hmmm, khansi
Poonam : han , cough syrup h ye
Lakhan : acha to apne hame bewakoof banaya
Poonam ; kyun wo sirf aapko hi ata h .
Aaram kariye .

At night Lakhan was going to sleep on sofa when poonam calls him and say to sleep on bed .
Lakhan : nhi ham thek h
Poonam : kah rahe h na fever h aapko so jayeye
Lakhan : to kya aap sofa oe so ..nhi aap yahin so jayiye
Poonam : kitne mote h aap hain
Lakhan : ka matlab
Poonam : ye bed itna bada h ki ham dono so saktey h , aap us corner pe ham is corner pe thek h
Lakhan agrees and they both sleep peacefully . in the morning poonam wakes up and and found her head resting on lakhan's hand and her hand over her chest. Poonam look at him , while sleeping he was looking so innocent .poonam check his fever , his temp was normal .
Poonam : abhi kitne masoom lag rahe , par abhi jag jayengey to phir gussa gussa
She was saying this when she realise that Lakhan is waking up she quickly closes her eyes .
Lakhan wake up and found herself so near to him . lakhan quietly look at her face , she was so innocent so beautiful he was lost in her world then a strand of her hair fall on her face . lakhan so slowly remove it as it was hiding her face .then Poonam wake up and ask him wat he was doing . lakhan in panic said wo wo hame khuch kaam h and leaves from there .
Poonam hear that someone's mobile is ringing , she follow that sound and found a new mobile there was a note
Ye aapka nya mobile ,
Poonam picks up the call she was happy , on the other side it was rishab . rishab told her that priyom is in there home and he wanted to meet her .
To be continued .,...
In next part priyom will kidnap poonam
P.s : only two parts left my ff will be complete . Smile

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