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lakham ff ( meri zindagi ha tuu ) last part. updated pg18 (Page 13)

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Posted: 22 April 2016 at 9:01pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Sonu.Ka.Vishal

bishma ur ff is chumeshwari...plz jaldi cont...kr
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bishma aj mujhe update chahiye bsss..

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Originally posted by Sonu.Ka.Vishal

bishma aj mujhe update chahiye bsss..
will update it today Smile
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Hello to allHug. Tum sab log bahut ache ho Aur encouraging bhi thanks to all .
I don't believe its my seventh part which I m gone update , thank u shooo much to all Hug


PART. 7 :
NEXT MORNING :

Poonam is so happy as all the problem will be sought out she wake up smiling but look at the time its 9:30a.m
Poonam : arrey yaar , ham itni der tak kaise so gye , ma ne jagaya bhi nhi.
Ab Poonam , jaldi karo fatafat taiyyar ho jao Lakhan thakur ko bhi phone karna h
And get down from the bed and literally run towards her bathroom , after taking shower she feel relaxed as the yesterday was not good . she dry up her hair and comb them out .
Poonam: ma , apne jagaya kyun nhi , ham aa rahe h nashta karna ,
And move out from her room . she moves toward kitchen .
Poonam : kahan ho ma aap ,
Bhaiya to abhi nhi gye honge , ma , ma kahan ho aap , bhaiya and she looks for rishab but he is also not there , she looks for mohan in the whole house non of them was there she was all alone in the house , poonam became very scared . she doesn't know wat to do . then , she hear that her mobile is ringing .
She ran towards her room and pick up mobile and lakhan name is flashing in the screen her small heart relaxed a bit that he will definitely find out where her family member was ,she quickly pick up the call . she was too panic and anyone can sense that while listening her.
Poonam : lakhannn thakur , kahan h aap jaldi ghar aa jayiye , wo ma , papa bhaiya pataaa n...hii ka...han chale gye h ( and she is crying ) . ha...mmme khuch samjh nhi aa raha h .
Lakhan. : poonam , chup chup ek dam pahle Rona band kijiye ,
Poonam : hamm,kya kare pta nhi kahan h wo log kaisi haaalat mai honge .
Lakhan : sab log bilkul thek h , ek bhi kharoch nhi ayi h unhe aur ayegi bhi nhi
Poonam : aapke pas kaise aye wo log kisne kya kiya h , kya hua h ( poonam is so tensed)
Lakhan : ham leke aye h apne pas , to bas aap wo kariye Jo ham kah rahe h bas
Poonam : to aa...p hame blackmail kar rahe h , apka dimag kharab ho gya h kya , aap ko kya lagta h ki aap Jo kahengey hum wahi karengey
Lakhan: poonam , ham jantey h aap wahi karengi Jo ham kahengey kyunki aap apne parivar se bahut pyar karti h , aur aap ye bilkul nhi chahengi ki aap ki wajah se unko koi nuksaan pahuche
Poonam starts crying
Poonam : aap aap kaise kar saktey h hamare sath aisa
Lakhan : dekhiye Poonam rona band kariye warna hum khuch kar baithengey , rota hua nhi dekh saktey aapko , ab suniye apni cupboard kholiye usme ek packet hoga , use nikaliye aur usmai Jo laal joda h wo pahen kar jaldi se taiyyar ho jayiye , dolt apke ghar kai bahar intezar kar raha h aapka , jaldi se uske sath aa jayiye , hamari shadi h aaj .
Poonam : aap ...
Lakhan : koi optionn nhi h aapke pas sirf ek ganta h aapke pas , aur hain hamare papa ko phone karne kai takleef mat kijiyega , wo Patna gye hue h . ham nhi chahtey h ki aapke gharwalon ko koi bhi takleef de to jaldi aa jayega , warna ... aap janti h ham jhooot nhi boltey .
Poonam : aap ek bar hamari baat..
Lakhan : shhh... Aap yahan aa jayeye phir dekhtey h kya karna h
And cuts the phone , poonam doesn't know wat to do , she calls rishab but he doesn't pick the phone . after few min lakhan again call poonam and tell her to not waste her time by calling her brother , she has no option she has do wat he is saying . she is in the same condition after 15 min she looks at the clock and realize that 15 min have been passed . Poonam quickly get up and open her cupboard she found the packet and take out the dress and wears it . there is a beautiful diamond necklace and ear ring , mangtika in it . and tie up her hair
And comes out of her house . dolt is waiting for her , as soon as dolt see her , he quickly come out of the car , and opens the door for her , Poonam look at him , and quietly sit inside in it . dolt drive out the car and they reach at the temple . lakhan is waiting for them he is in golden sherwani , with white pathani shalwar . Poonam came out of the car , lakhan looks at her , ohhh goddd she was looking damn !! Beautiful in red rose coloured lehanga , she haven't done any makeup , just a red lip balm over her lips which she has put while going to college yet she was looking so gorgeous . lakhan get mesmerized by her beauty lost in her world , dolt disturbe him .
Dolt : bhaiya Ji ..
Lakhan : han han.
Poonam is standing beside dolt .
Lakhan : Poonam chaliye , Saadi ka mandap hamara intezar kar raha h
Poonam : hamari family kahan h
Lakhan : wo sab thek h , aur thek hi rahengey , bas aap wahi kariye Jo kah rahe h
Poonam : aap ye thek nhi kar rahe h , ham aapko kabhi maaf nhi karengey
Lakhan : hmmm, thek h abhi chaliye , eee pandit shuru ho jao jaldi . jayada samay nhi h . ( kya tujhe abye dil from sanam re movie starts in BG)
And pandit starts the mantra . and lakham marriage completed with all the rituals
Poonam : ab bateye sab log kahan h
Lakhan : dolt , pooonam ka mobile do
Dolt gives poonam mobile to him . and he call rishab .
Lakhan : lejiye khud hi baat kar lijiye apne Bhai se
Poonam takes the mobile
Rishab : han , chutki kya hua , kahe bar bar phone kar rahi ho
Poonam : bhaiya aap thek h na , kahan h aap ??
Rishab : arrey , hame kya hona h , hospital mai h , meeting thi jarori to aaj jaldi Jana pada aur tum bar bar phone kahe kar rahi thi
Poonam ( in all shocked state ) meeting??? Aur ma , papa kahan h
Rishab ; are , wo Lucknow gye h , anjana bua ka phone aya tha , khuch emergency thi .
Poonam : ma papa Lucknow gye h hamko kyun nhi bataya apne
Rishab ::hmmm , tumko to tab batate jab tum nind se jagti , kitna udhaye tumko lekin tum , note bhi to choda tha , lekin tum itni laparwah ho padha hi nhi hoga , in between this someone calls him , acha ghar aa ke baat kartey h abhi koi bula raha h
And he cuts the .
Poonam ko abhi bhi khuch samjh nhi aa raha h ki hua kya tha . she looks at lakhan with questioning eyes .
Lakhan take her mobile
Lakhan : chalo bey , sab niklo yahan se , and everybody leaves
Lakhan : aur aap , aap ko kya lga ki ham aapki family ko nuksaan pahucha saktey h , aapse Judi har chez bahut mayne rakhti h hamare liya phir aap to bahut pyar karti h un logo se .
Poonam : aapne ye sab
Lakhan : khuch nhi kiye hum , kisi ko nhi pakde , bas aapki bua Ji ko thoda dara diya to unhone aapke papa ko bula liya , aur rahi baat apke Bhai ki to wo begusarai mai rahta h , aur yahan sab hamare hisab se chalta h .
Poonam : par ham jage kyun nhi , aur wo note aur bua ka pata kaise laga aapko
Lakhan : acha hua ki aap khildki khol kai soti h , warna ham ander aa ke aapko behosh kaise kartey aap puri pagal h apne ghar walon kai bare mai sab bata chuki h aap hame , .bas phir subhah thoda sa jhoot bol diya , aur aapne man liya kyunki aap janti h hum jhoot nhi boltey .
Poonam : to aap ne ye sab natak karke hame ..
Lakhan : bas Jo chatey they wo pa liye , ek baat yaad rakhna aap kabhi kisi ko apni kamjoori mat batana warna log aapko majbor kar dete h , jaise aap ho gyi ..ab bas ghar chaltey
Poonam : ghar , koi ghar nhi ja rahe h ham aapke sath . and untie the not . and starts walking but lakhan hold her hand and pick her up in his strong arms .
Poonam : Lakhan thakur utariye hame ,
Lakhan : han, utar dengey par ghar par .
And put her in the jeep and start the jeep . they reach badi haveli .
Lakhan : ab utar jayeye .
Poonam : hame apne ghar Jana h ( in full angry mode)
Lakhan : han , to ye hamara hi ghar h
But poonam didn't get down , lakhan says okkk if u want this so , I can't help it and again took her in his arm and walk towards haveli .stops at the entrance door and starts calling rekha Poonam is still in his arms .
Lakhan : amma ,amma
Rekha : arrey aa rahe h , rekha is shocked to see Poonam in bridal dress .
Lakhan : arrey dekh ka rahi ho , bahu ko leke aye h tumhari , jao jaldi aarti ka thaal lekar aao jao .
And rekha go inside and guddi also comes they both are shocked . lakhan put down poonam but still holding her hand .
Rekha do the aarti and put the kalash filled with rice .
Rekha : beta , is pe pair ( feet) mar kai ander aao
Poonam didn't do that Lakhan slowly said to her .
Lakhan : dekhiye abhi Jo natak kiya tha , wo sach karna hamare liya aur bhi aasan hoga samjhi , to sari rasme chup chup kar lijiye , Aur is bar ham jhoot nhi bol rahe h . poonam look into his intense eyes . and quietly do all the rituals .
Rekha : guddi bahu ko upar le jao .
Guddi take her to lakhan's room
Rekha : lakhan tumhara dimag kharab ho gya h , us ladki ko tum jabardasti shadi kar laye , tumhare babuji ko pta chalega kal to kya karengey wo tumhara , hame to dar h kahin jaan hi na le le .
Lakhan : amma , khuch nhi hoga tum fikar na karo , acha ham naha kai aatey h .
Guddi : Poonam tum aram karo .
Lakhan take shower and tell rekha that he is going cause he has some important work . gudddi hamare room ka darwaza band kar dena thek h dhayan rakhna unka . and he leaves he comes back at home around 8 pm . rekha ask him to eat the food but he refuses .
Lakhan : guddi ye khana le kar kahan ja rahi ho
Guddi ; wo bhabhi kai liye
Lakhan : rehne do nhi kayengi abhi . bahut ziddi h tum ye juice le jao .
And guddi nodes her head , Lakhan took out something from his pocket and mix in the juice .
Guddi : bhaiya ye kya mila rahe h
Lakhan : pareshan mat ho isse nind a jayegi , bhabhi tumhari sherni h abhi unke samne gye naaas tu cher hi dalengi hame ,
Guddi : par bhaiya , aap ko unka samna to karna padega na . phir aap kya karengey
Lakhan : tum fikr na karo , unke gusse ko kam karne ka intejam hi karne gye they . tum bas ye kisi tarah pila dena bas .
Guddi takes the glass and go to his room lakhan also followed him guddi enter in the room Lakhan has hide behind the door .
Poonam : guddi lakhan thakur aaye , tumne hame band kyun kiya hua tha , ek to hamara mobile bhi nhi h hamare pas ghar par sab pareshan ho rahe honge ( poonam is in mixed angry and tensed mode)
Guddi who is thinking how she will manage to drink her juice gets an idea
Guddi : woo bhaiya bahar gye they aa gye h , unhone juice bheja h
Poonam : guddi ham tumse pahle bhi
bhi kaha h hame khuch nhi khana
Guddi : han jantey h , par bhaiya ne kaha h agar aap ye pura pi lengey to wo aapko aapke ghar le ke jayengey . bahut pareshan h wo ,
Poonam : sachii
Guddi : bhaiya jhoot nhi boltey , aur na hi ham .
Poonam says okkk and drinks the juice . after a min poonam became unconscious .
Lakhan quickly enter in the room .
Lakhan : bahhh !!! Ka baat h tumhare pas to bahut dimag h
Guddi ; chaliye ab aap bhi khuch kha lijiye
Lakhan : hamare bhuk nhi h , tum so jao .
Guddi leaves , Lakhan closes the door and lay down the poonam on bed and cover her with blanket . takes a pillow and set it on the sofa and he lay down on sofa . but how can he sleep , his life his poonam is in front of his eyes . he start to see her and he doesn't know how time has passed and its morning . Poonam wake up , and found him staring at him . she was about to say something before that lakhan stand up and take out a beautiful blue saree ( from one of the saree which he has bought for her yesterday )
Giving to her
Lakhan : lijiye , aur fresh hoke ye pahen lijiyega .
Poonam : gets up from bed
Aapko kya lagta h aap ka Jo man karega wahi karengey ,kal pura din aap kahan they ??? ( she is in sooo dangerous mode )
Lakhan : teasing her said kyun yaad aa rahi thi ...
Poonam : yaad ki aisi ki taisi , sab ghar par kitna pareshan ho rahe honge , ham pura din ghar par nhi they , hamara mobile bhi nhi tha aap ..
In between this lakhan has walked towards her and put his fingers on her lips .
Lakhan : shhh... Khuch khaya nhi h kal se , chillaye mat tabiyat kharab ho jayegi , apke ghar walon ko sab bata diya h , wahi log aa rahe h , to jaldi se taiyyar ho jayeye khuch kha lijiye . nhi to aapko aise dekhengeh to acha to nhi lagega na unko ( in so soft and low tone ) .
Lakhan remove his finger and took her hand and put that saree in her hand
Poonam : aapne sab ..
Lakhan: bathroom udhar h ..
Pahle jayeye , khuch khaiye phir baat karengey .
And poonam leaves ,after taking shower she comes out in the blue saree she was looking gorgeous . she was combing her hair when guddi comes and call her for breakfast .
And poonam come with her and they all take breakfast . after sometimes she saw her whole family is there she become so happy and hug her mom .
Lakhan come and greet them and her family members are very normal to him ,she is shocked due to their behaviour . later her mom tell her that yesterday Lakhan had come to their house and told them everything . he is too guilty for what he did . and there was a fight between Lakhan and rishab also , in that fight lakhan took out his gun , we all are very scared but he put his gun to rishab's hand and said " this will be with u , the day u find that I m not taking good care of ur sister u can kill me , but believe me I luv her so much I will not allow any grief to come towards her, the drama i had done i can do that in real u know that but i haven't done that so think if I can't hurt u how can I hurt her she is my world . if u don't believe me than u can shoot me right know ,no one will do any harm to u dat's my promise " then rishab agrees to give him a chance so we are here today .
Phulan thakur enters and became very angry on lakhan and slaps him as he has ordered him not to do anything but mohan interrupt and cool him down .
After that both family have lunch together and poonam 's family leaves . Poonam noticed that rishab is disturbed by something .
Poonam come back to her room and she is thinking something Lakhan enters she look at Lakhan
Poonam : aap ko kya lagta h , hamari family ne aapko mauka de diya to ham bhi de dengey nhi ham aisa khuch bhi nhi karengey
Lakhan: hmmm , jantey h galti ki h , saza Jo bhi de aap hame manjoor hai , aap bas hamare pas h yahi kafi h hamare liya .
Poonam : aap bas dekhiye ham aapke sath kya kya kartey h , bahut dimag chalta h na aapka , aapne hamari kamjori ko nishna banaya , bas ek bar aapki kamjori pata chal jaye
Lakhan smiles and think hamari sabse badi kamjori to aap hi h poonam

To be continued...

In next part there will be some lakham moments and the entry of priyom .
Jo bhi padhe usko dhanyawad .Hug

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arrey wo  makhkhi priyom b aayega... Ermm

btw nice update Hug
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Bishma tu bahut buri hai itna short kyun likhti hai or jldi update dena mujhe bht pasnd aya Clap
cynduuu meri jaan kinna lamba chahiye tujhe LOL will try to update soon Embarrassed
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