lakham ff ( meri zindagi ha tuu ) last part. updated pg18 - Page 5

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Posted: 8 years ago
poor poonam🤣bt lakhan me to bohat bhuddi hai bhaiii😎🤣
update next soon dear😛
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Posted: 8 years ago
Originally posted by: lakhamcrazy

poor poonam🤣bt lakhan me to bohat bhuddi hai bhaiii😎🤣

update next soon dear😛

mera lakhan bail h par buddhi bhi h uske pas 😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
Originally posted by: Sonu.Ka.Vishal

one word 'shaandaar'

Awww thank u 🤗
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Posted: 8 years ago
U r a writter yar damn gud bishma ...par ek bat kahe deti hun tu mregi mere hatho jldi update de wrna 😡
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Posted: 8 years ago
Originally posted by: Lakhanchamach

U r a writter yar damn gud bishma ...par ek bat kahe deti hun tu mregi mere hatho jldi update de wrna 😡

thank u cynduu 🤗. Bhill try 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
aj raat tk update de dena sharafat se...
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Posted: 8 years ago
too gud meri jaan pdh k mzaaa aa gya pehle mene nind me pdhi thi fir fresh ho k pdhi bht mst storry hai LT ne Poo ki lga di bht mza aaya jldi aage likh🤗
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Posted: 8 years ago
Originally posted by: ritukumari

too gud meri jaan pdh k mzaaa aa gya pehle mene nind me pdhi thi fir fresh ho k pdhi bht mst storry hai LT ne Poo ki lga di bht mza aaya jldi aage likh🤗

thank u rituuu 🤗
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Posted: 8 years ago
Originally posted by: ..DRoadSoFar..

jabar update tha👏poonmi ki to watt laga di bailbuddhi ne🤣🤣...i was reading this for like 10 times

keep updating ... nahi to😈

finally tera reserve khula
Thank u 🤗 mera lakhan esstyle se badla leta h 😉
Bhilll try to update today 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
Meri pyarrri behnooo aap sab ka koti koti dhanyawad meri 3 part padhane kai liye 🤗
Now next part
PART 4 :
After a week from that incident .
AT BADI HAVELI
Guddi is screaming with joy and calling everyone .
Guddi : bhaiya, maa , papa , dadi sab kahan h jaldi aayiye
Rekha : arrey ka baat h Bhai pura ghar sar par kahe udha rakha h
Guddi hugs and say that she is very happy .
Lakhan : arrey ka ho gya h kahe chilla rahi ho
Phulan thakur enters and guddi run towards him and hug him
Guddi : papa , hame internship mil gyi h , wo bhi swaaroop hospital mai ham bahut khush h aaj .
Phulan : ye to bahut achi baat h .
Rekha : arrey wahhh , aaj sham ko ham tumhara man pasand khana banyaengey thek h
And phulan thakur leaves ,
Guddi : bhaiya , aap kya soch rahe h
Lakhan : ham soch rahe h ki bechare un logo ka kya hoga Jo tumhare pas ilaj kai liye ayengey , unka to bhagwan hi bhala kar sakta h
Guddi : bhaiya ( in full anger ) , ab ham aapko nhi chodeygey
And lakhan runs and guddi runs behind him .
AT POONAM'S HOME
Rishab enter in the house calling poonam
Rishab : chutki , chutki kahan ho tum
Poonam : kya h ?? Bhaiya padh rahe h
Rishab hugs her and say
Rishab : aaj meri taraf se tumhari treat
Poonam : kis khushi mai , aap to itne kanjoos h
Mohan and radha enters
Radha : kis khushi mai treat di ja rahi h
Rishab : ma , hame internship mil gyi h , wo bhi swaroop hospital mai ham bahut bahut khush h , isliye aaj sab log bahar dinner karengey .
Poonam : ( with full joy ) wahhh bhaiya , kamaal kat diya aapne to , aakhir Bhai kiske h
Rishab : han han sara credit tum hi me jao , ma jaldi se tayyar ho jayiye
Radha : nhi beta tum dono jao
Poonam : arrey ma , chaliye na
Mohan : arrey beta tum dono jao , enjoy karo
Rishab : thek h papa , chutki chal aaj tujhe apni bike pe le jate h
And they both leaves on the way poonam ask
Poonam : bhaiya ham kahan ja rahe h
Rishab : ek dhaba hai , suna h wahan palak paneer bahut acha milta h
Poonam : bhaiya , aap kitne ache
And they are going , and they have just reached the dhaba but rishab being busy in talking to poonam doesn't realize that a bike is coming from the front and they collide with each other and the other man' s ( name is dheeru )bike headlight got damage . he get down from his bike and rishab ,poonam also get down
Dheeru : saaleee , andhe ho ka , hamari nyi bike tod di , saale ladki ko baitale ho to khuch bhi karoge
Rishab : eee hamse baat karo , galti tumhari bhi to h tumhe dekh raha tha to tumhe rok lete .
And dheeru becomes angry and grab rishab's collar poonam shout "bhaiya" then , suddenly a voice
Dheeru and dheeru looks at him
He is none other than lakhan thakur ,
Lakhan : chodo , aur do ungli se ishara karta h use Jane ka
Dheeru leaves rishab and lakhan get down from the jeep and dheeru comes towards him and touches his feet and say bhaiya Ji iska galti h
Lakhan : ham kahe na niklo abhi bad mai batiyate h
Dheeru : Ji bhaiya

And rishab and poonam enter the dhaba but all the tables are full and lakhan thakur also enter in the dhaba and manager comes
Manager : arrey lakhan bhaiya ayiye ,
And some chamchas of lakhan thakur leaves their table
Chamchas : ayiye bhaiya Ji , yahan bathiye
And lakhan walk toward that table .
Poonam become disappointed and
Chaliye bhaiya ham kahin aur chaltey h
Rishab : ruk ,
Rishab walk toward lakhan and thanks him for helping him and ask
Rishab : kya ham aur hamari bahen yahan baith saktey h , kyunki koi aur table khali nhi h
Lakhan : ( thinks in mind acha to ye inka Bhai h ) han thek h baith jao
Rishab calls poonam and they both sit with lakhan , lakhan look at poonam and his one of the chammach come and ask him to give him his mobile as he has to call someone
Lakhan : kahe be , esmart phone lene ka to bahut shauk balance kaun dalwayega be ham kahe de apna phone .
Chammach : nhi bhaiya Ji , balance to hai hamare pas par dolt ( the best friend cum like younger brother of lakhan ) hamara phone nhi udha raha h , aur aapka phone jarur udhaiyga
Lakhan looks at him and give him his phone
Lakhan : saaleee , dolt ko hi milana kahin aur na lga dena samjhe nhi to bahut sutainyegey .
Chammach says yes and leaves from there and in between this manager comes
Manager : ye lijiye bhaiya aap ka pasandida litti chokha
Manager then ask rishab wat they will have and takes their order . all of them eating food and rishab is speaking non stop and telling Lakhan about them
Lakhan : ( in heart thinks ) dono Bhai bahen ek jaise hi han
And between this chammach comes running toward lakhan
Chammach : bhaiya Ji , bade thakur
As soon as lakhan hear this he stands up and pick up the call with that hand from which he has having food
Lakhan : Ji papa abhi aatey h
Lakhan : arrey yaar phone kharab ho gya hamara
Chammach : dijiye bhaiya Ji ham saaf kar dete h
And took his phone and clean it by his t- shirt
Lakhan : kaka, kitna hua jaldi bataiye hame nikalna h
Manager : bhaiya ab aap se paise lenge kya , aapne to pura khaya bhi nhi
Lakhan : acha ham abhi bahut jaldi mai h ghar bhej dena
And he leaves
Poonam : bhaiya , ye to sahi , inko to bill bhi nhi dena pada aur to aur ghar par bhi manga liya .inke to maze h , kitna acha ho na ki ham logo ko bhi bill na dena pade
Rishab : looks at her smilingly and say
Apne chote se dimaag par itna jor na dalo khana kho , ghar bhi chalna h
NEXT DAY
Poonam is very happy and she decide to give treat to her friend because she is so much happy for her brother
So poonam ,najma and some other friends of her go to that restaurant where they had gone the previous night . they reach and had a meal and when waiter comes with a bill poonam take out her bag and start to search her purse but she doesn't found purse in her bag poonam got tense
Najma : poonam kya hua ??
Poonam : najma lagta h hum apna purse ghar par hi bhool gye h
Najma : koi baat nhi bill ham se dete h
Poonam : nhi... Tum kyun dogi hamari treat h ham hi dengey
And poonam start to think just then manager come to her and sad
Manager : arrey beta , aap to kal lakhan thakur kai sath ayi thi aur ek aur ladka tha na aapke sath
Poonam : han ham wahi h
Manager : acha beta , aap Lakhan thakur ko kaise janti h
And here comes the idea , poonam got the idea how to deal with this situation
Poonam : smilingly says Ji wo ham lakhan thakur ko isliye jante h ,
Kyunki wo hamare " manggetar " h
Manager : sach , bulaya nhi kisiko sagai mai
Poonam : han bas ghar kai hi log they , acha aapka kitna bill hua
Manager : arrey nhi thakurain , aapse kaise paise le saktey h
Poonam : arrey bataye , looking towards the waiter she said dekho hame kitna bill aya h
Manager : nhi nhi , aap se paise nhi le saktey , aap samjhti kyun nhi , ye sab bade thakur ka hi to hai
Poonam : acha phir thek h ham chaltey h
And she and her friends leaves from there
Najma: poonam tumhara dimag , to kharab nhi ho gya h lakhan thakur ko pta chaleyga to socha h kya karogi
Poonam : najma tum kitna darti ho , kaise pta chalega lakhan thakur ko
And she sees a ice - cream parlour
Poonam : aao , tum sab ko ice cream bhi khilatey h
And they all enter into the parlour
Aur bade maze se sab ice cream kahtey h aur jab bill ata h to poonam bade attitude kai sath bolti h
Poonam : tum hamse bill loge itna him at ho gya tumhara
Waiter : ab aap ne khaya h to bill bhi aap hi dengi na and manager also comes there
Manager : kya hua h ??
Waiter : ye madam Ji , bill nhi se rahi h
Manager : dekhiye , bill to aapko dena padega
Poonam stand up and ask to manager
Poonam : tum jantey ho lakhan thakur kaun h
Manager : unko to bura begusarai janta h par aao kyun...
Poonam : tum jantey ho ki ham kaun h
Managet looks at her confusingly
Poonam : ham unki hone wali dharampatni h , tum hamse bill loge , ruko abhi ham lakhan thakur ko phone lagatey h wahi achi tarah se bill dengey tumhe
Manager : arrey maaf kar dijiye , hame nhi malum tha pls bhaiya Ji ko mat bulayega nhi to wo hamara pta nhi kya karengey
Poonam : thek h maaf kartey h , taking her one eyebrow upward said aage se dhayan rakhna
And they all leaves poonam is very happy

AT NIGHT
Lakhan and dolt are going somewhere
Dolt : bhaiyyya jiii , ham log kahan ja rahe h
Lakhan : arrey , wo guddi h ice cream khana h use to usi kai liye ice cream lene ja rahe h
Dolt : to bhaiya Ji peeche se le lete na do dhukan nikal gyi ab tak
Lakhan : nhi be usko uske college kai paas wali dhukan se hi chahiye
Dolt : acha , bhaiya hi ham aapko bataye they na ham ek restaurant kholne ja rahe h
Lakhan : han to
Dolt : to uska sab kaam pura ho gya h kl se chalu kar dengey bhaiya Ji aap se udghatan karengey
Lakhan : nhi be , kal to Patna ja rahe papa kai kaam se
Dolt : bhaiya Ji , and become sad
Lakhan : acha itna muhhh banane ki jarurat nhi h 2 baje tak aa jayengey
And dolt become happy and they had reached the parlour
Lakhan and dolts enter in
Manager : arrey bhaiya ayaiye
Lakhan : hmm , suno Jo sabse bhaiya wali ho wo do tho pack kar do thek
Manager : Ji bhaiya Ji
After waiter comes up with the packet
Lakhan : han bolo , kitna
Manager : arrey aap se kaise paise lenge bhaiya
Lakhan : saaleee do lappad lagayengey jaldi batao
Manager : tells him the cost and said lagta h thakurain ko bahut pasand ayi hamari ice cream tabhi to phir se mangaya h
Lakhan : phir se ??? Guddi ayi thi ka
Manager : nhi bhaiya hi choti thakurain nhi ham bhabhiji ki baat kar rahe h
Lakhan : abbey kiski bhabhi be ,, kisi baat kar rahe ho
Manager : bhaiya Ji , aapki hone wali dharampatni ki
Lakhan becomes irritated and grabs him from his collar
Lakhan : pagla gye ho ka , hamari hone wali dharampatni aur hamko hi malum nhi
Manager : bhaiya Ji ham sach kah rahe h
And tells him that incident lakhan becomes angry and he leaves
Dolt : bhaiya Ji kaun hwo ladki hame to bta dijiye
Lakhan give him a slap
Lakhan : saaleee , koi ladki hamare naam pe chuna lga rahi h sab ko aur tumhe masti soojh rahi h
Dolt : bhaiya Ji , to kiska itna himmat gya

Lakhan thinks kahin ye poonam to nhi , nhi wo kahe karengi aisa ham bhi na ...

Next day :
Poonam : yaar najma , bahut bhuk lag rahi h chalo na khuch khatey h aaj to nashta bhi nhi kiya tha jaldi jaldi mai
Najma : han par aaj to paise hai na tumhare pas
Poonam : tum pagal ho gyi ho kya , jab free mai khana mil raha h to paise kaun dega .
Waise bhi free kai khane is alag hi swad hota h
Najma : nhi Poonam tum samjhti kyun nhi ho agar Lakhan...
Poonam : chup raho ham dekh lengey
And looks at dolt's restaurant and said
Poonam : ye dekho ek dam nya h ,chalo yahan chaltey h .lakhan thakur yahan thodi aatey hongey
And they both enter and repeat the same process
Waiter to dolt
Bhaiya ye bill nhi de rahi h
Dolt : kahe nhi dengi aap bill
Poonam : tum jantey ho ham kaun h , ham manggetar h lakhan thakur ki ( very proudly she said ) tum hamse paise loge
Dolt : ( in heart acha to ye ladki h )
Arrey maaf kar dijiye hame nhi malum tha arrey suno gulab jamun bhi do inhe ache se khatir karo thakurain h hamari
Najma: nhi Poonam , chaltey h
Dolt : arrey pls yahan ka gulab jamun bahut acha h kha kai jayeye
Poonam : najma pls ruk jao ,tum janti ho na gulab jamun kitna pasand h hame
And she manages to stop najma
Dolt calls lakhan
Dolt : bhaiya Ji kahan h aap
Lakhan : Abe ham ka koi ladki , h jisse Milne kai liye itna tadpe ja rahe ho
Pahuch gye h bas do min mai aatey h
Dolt : ladki hi to hai
Lakhan : ka matlab be
Dolt : bhaiya Ji , wo ladki Jo aapki manggetar bani hui h hamare restaurant mai h ,
Lakhan stops the jeep
Lakhan : rok ke rakh ham ate h
Dolt : han , jaldi ayieye
Dolt : lejiye aapke gulab jamun
Poonam : han layieye
Lakhan enter in.the restaurant
Lakhan : acha to aap h hamari hone wali dharampatni aur hamko hi nhi pta
Poonam looks at him
Poonam to herself beta poonam ab to tu gyi Lakhan. Thakur is very angry


Okkk okkk I know khuch zayda hi lengthy ho gya
Sorry to everyone
Now in next part Poonam will be punished by Lakhan thakur in his own essstyle .Jo bhi padhe usko bada wala thank uuu🤗