Hello to everyone I m attempting writing first time before this I had never written anything my writing skills are bad so pls pls bear with me
Okkk now the intro of my ff
Lakhan thakur is the elder son of phulan thakur who rules over the whole begusarai . lakhan is soft by heart but he is so ambitious what he want he get it either by hook or crook . guddi is his sister who is very studious .rekha devi and Badi amma r there in the family
Now poonam kumari lives with her mom ,dad and elder brother named rishab in Lucknow .her father is a gov . servant and he is transferred to begusarai .her brother loved her so much .poonam is very fun loving girl who enjoy every second of her life .
Now PART 1:
Guddi ne apne exam mai top kiya h
Aur badi haveli mai bahut bada jashn ho raha h
Lakhan ne guddi ko ek beautiful sa necklace gift kiya h .phulan thakur bahut khush h aur sab Badi jor shor se jashn ki taiyyari kar rahe h .
Phulan thakur calls lakhan
Lakhan : ji papa bulaya apne Hame .
Phulan : han beta wo vikas sweets se gulab jamun abhi tak nhi aaye tumne order to diya tha na . janatey ho na guddi ko kitne pasand h .
Lakhan : papa diya to they rukiye hum khud hi lekar aatey h .
On the other side poonam and her family had reached begusarai .
They are going to their gov house when suddenly poonam screams papa ... Rukiye
( oops I forgot to tell her father name is mohan and mother name is radha )
Mohan: kya hua poonmi ???
Rishab : ka hua kahe cheek rahi ho .
Poonam : papa aapko hamari dost Najma yaad h, wo bhi begusarai mai rahti h usne hame ek bar yahan ki gulab jamun khilayi thi bahut swad thi ..
Rishab : to kya kare ???
Poonam : tum chup raho tumse kaun baat kar raha h , papa ye vikas sweets wahi dukan wala h aap to jantey h na
Hame gulab kitna pasand h ..
Mohan : poonam abhi sab bahut thak gye h bad mai ... Abhi ghat chaltey h
Poonam make faces
Radha : are le lene dijiye na
Rishab : papa aap ma kai sath ghar chalo hum chutki kai sath aatey h ..
Mohan agrees with him and goes home . poonam become very happy and hugs her brother
Rishab : acha bas jayda na khush ho
Lene tum hi jaogi aur hum ek paisa nhi dengey ..
Poonam : thek h thek h ( in full attitude ) hamare pas paise h hum abhi lekar aatey h
Poonam enters that sweet shop
Poonam shopkeeper se bolti h bhaiya 6 gulab jamun de dijiye shopkeeper
Shopkeeper : maaf karna beta hum abhi 6 kya ek bhi gulab jamun nhi de payengey sari gulab jamun ko Badi haveli pahuchna h upar se hame deri bhi ho gyi h
Poonam becomes so sad and begs like a kid to the shopkeeper to give her gulab jamun and finally he agree to give her two of them
Poonam: thank u sooo much uncle
Here comes our hero he stops the jeep and come out from it and poonam had also leaves the shop and coming out .
Poonam is in her own world.
Suddenly lakhan's phone ring and he doesn't look in front and he collides with poonam
Poonam kai gaulab jamun zamin par gir jatey h aur lakhan ka kapda gulab jamun ki wajah se kharab ho jata h
Poonam in full angry mode look at lakhan who is looking at his clothes
Poonam : in full tashan mode said aandhe ho kya dekhayi nhi deta ..
Hamari puri gulab jamun gira di
Lakhan is in shock that how can someone dare to talk to him like that
And he looks at her Lakhan is like wow. Poonam is looking so pretty in her red long skirt with white top and a scarf over it . Lakhan heart beat skips but immediately he control himself and he was about to say something but poonam interrupt
Poonam : khuch puch rahe h kya dikhta nhi h aapko itni mushkil se hame mili thi
Lakhan : aap dusri le lijiyega ..
Poonam looks at him furiously
Lakhan : kya aapke pas paise nhi h rukiye hum dete h .
Poonam : apne paise apne pas hi rakho ... Poonam murmur ek to pata nhi ye Badi haveli wale kitni gulab jamun khatey h .
Lakhan: aapne Badi haveli kai bare mai khuch kahan
Poonam : hain kaha to aapse kya
Poonam in her mind thinks I should try one more time my be shopkeeper agree and she enter in the shop again
Lakhan also follows her
Shopkeeper is doing some work
Poonam: uncle kya aap hame phir se gulab jamun de dengey
Shopkeeper : are kaha na hamne nhi de saktey abhi to di thi
Lakhan us listening all this
Poonam : hain par ek ladke ne gira de
Shopkeeper : ( turn around ) to hum ka arrey lakhan bhaiya aap ... Hum bas bhej hi rahe they badi haveli apne kahe aane ki takleef ki
Poonam turn around and see lakhan who is standing there
Lakhan: ab takleef to kar di hamne
And looks at poonam
Ek kaam karo inko jitni gulab jamun chahiye de do
Shopkeeper : par bhaiya ji .
Lakhan: ek baar mai baat samjh nhi ata h ka aur h ( and he was leaving but stops and say) paise mt Lena inse
Shopkeeper : hai. Beta bola kitni chahiye
Poonam : hame aapko jitne paise diye h utne hi de dijiye
Lakhan turn around and poonam looks at lakhan and say
Kisi ka ehsaan nhi chahiye
And take her packet and moves out of the shop . lakhan smiles
When they both are out of the shop rishab comes there searching poonam as she got late
Rishab : chutki kahan chali gyi thi itna der lagta h kya gulab jamun pe rahi thi ki bna rahi thi
Poonam: arrey bhaiya chaliye hum aapko batate h sab
Poonam looks at lakhan and say
Begusarai waloon ko chalna bhi nhi aata
Rishab : kya hua kisi se koi jhagda to nhi kiya na
Poonam : nhi bhaiya ab chaliye ma papa intezar kar rahe honge
And they both leaves and lakhan also come to his jeep and start driving
He comes back home but he is lost in that incident . guddi calls him but he didn't reply
Okkk i m stopping here
I know my story is bad and it is nothing in front of os written by all of u but I tried
Pls tell me whether I continue or not
Pls good bad every type of comments are welcome pls don't throw tomatoes upon me
I just tried ( this is the first ever time I m writing somethingsomething )
part 1 scroll up
Part 4 http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4608279&TPN=7
Part 5 http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4608279&TPN=9
Part 6 http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4608279&TPN=10
Part 7 http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4608279&TPN=13
Part 8 http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4608279&TPN=14
Part 9 http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4608279&TPN=17
Last part http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4608279&PID=133588747&#p133588747
Edited by bishmakhan - 04 May 2016 at 7:49am