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#6 Devil's Bride Manan Ff epilogue on page 62 (Page 43)

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Posted: 13 June 2016 at 1:52pm | IP Logged
Awesome 
Everything is sorted 
Continue soon  dear 

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you wrote with so much maturity dude!!!!! u expressed the entire emotion like a pro!!! take a bow girl!!!! it was awesome!!! u always amaze me.. seriously... many writers at first say that it's going to be a dark story, but after a while they just deviate there way in order to make things look normal, like things r falling back to places... but here u r... it was, & it continued like what u said earlier... u never made things look white just for the sake of the audience... u have reasoned every thing, every damn thing that sometimes seemed odd... we always say that "taali kabhi bhi ek haat se nahi bajti"... & u showed that... even I was seeing nandini as the victim only, ofcourse manik has suffered equally.. the way u turned the card to show us the another side, it was awesome... & now this, nandini's father's situation!!!! damn, it was so apt!!! at this age, writing a situation like this with this much maturity!!!! I'm really out of words... I know I have already written many words, but still I think I couldn't expresse how I really felt... I can't find the proper words, that can make a sensible complement for your work!!! u r awesome!! the update was awesome!!! I don't know what to say more...

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Posted: 13 June 2016 at 6:41pm | IP Logged


Very very beautiful chapter. ..

Appa was very hurt. ..

Like all the conversation between them. ..

Amazing chapter. ..

Thanks for sharing this. 

Stay blessed. 




Thanks



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Posted: 13 June 2016 at 8:28pm | IP Logged
Awesome update amazing story can't believe this story going to end. I like manik confession emotional update love it thanks Clap

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Posted: 14 June 2016 at 12:04am | IP Logged
Yaar I just love him,
I mean accepting your each and every fault bigger or smaller needs guts and with which honesty he has done it has increased the love and respect I have for him,
awesome update dear,
Mindblowing.

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Posted: 14 June 2016 at 1:30am | IP Logged
Wow.worth the wait

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Posted: 14 June 2016 at 2:57am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Raka_bd

you wrote with so much maturity dude!!!!! u expressed the entire emotion like a pro!!! take a bow girl!!!! it was awesome!!! u always amaze me.. seriously... many writers at first say that it's going to be a dark story, but after a while they just deviate there way in order to make things look normal, like things r falling back to places... but here u r... it was, & it continued like what u said earlier... u never made things look white just for the sake of the audience... u have reasoned every thing, every damn thing that sometimes seemed odd... we always say that "taali kabhi bhi ek haat se nahi bajti"... & u showed that... even I was seeing nandini as the victim only, ofcourse manik has suffered equally.. the way u turned the card to show us the another side, it was awesome... & now this, nandini's father's situation!!!! damn, it was so apt!!! at this age, writing a situation like this with this much maturity!!!! I'm really out of words... I know I have already written many words, but still I think I couldn't expresse how I really felt... I can't find the proper words, that can make a sensible complement for your work!!! u r awesome!! the update was awesome!!! I don't know what to say more...

Thank you so much feeling overwhelmed by your comment really meant a lot for me Smile
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Posted: 14 June 2016 at 3:13am | IP Logged
Oh god I don't know where to hide my tears Cry Cry really parents are such a bless to have.. it's an inspiration for the readers yaar..
Even i hope not to hurt my parents in future..

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