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#6 Devil's Bride Manan Ff epilogue on page 62 (Page 11)

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Posted: 23 April 2016 at 12:28am | IP Logged
Awesome update. Way u penned this update was commendable. Hats off. Seriously I was suprised with ur writing skills. How beautifully u penned this update. Hats off yar.u made me speechless.
Nandini's mom and manik's convo was fabulous. It clearly showed a mother's concern for her daughter.manan's POV was amazing. Manik was helpless and nandini was angry.finally manik got succeeded in making nandini cry.confrontation was phenomenal. U nailed it. Both expressed their emotions.manan's convo of you love me was mindblowing and adorable. Manik's reaction to nandini's actions was fabulous. Nandini slapped him back to back.. Manik was smiling that was adorable. Loved it. Manan's convo was well penned. Hats off. Especially manik's finally he let out his emotions how helpless he was and had no one beside him.wow nandini understood manik was not fully at fault. Nandini's confession was marvellous. Manik's words of again was amazing. Nandini's words of asking for forgiveness was superb.
Wow manan's patch up was rocking. Loved this update. Manan's convo about u will not hurt me again and will not leave me again was adorable. Loved that part to core
Writer's pov was mindblowing. U rocked yar.true there is no one in this world who haven't done any mistake.
Thanks for long update. This is the best update of devil's bride.
Thanks for pm.eagerly waiting for next update. Continue soon. Love to read further
Keep shining
Stay blessedSmile

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Posted: 23 April 2016 at 12:33am | IP Logged
Dam yr dt was beautifulBig smileTongue really really loved d update to d coreEmbarrassed really loved d way both let out their miseries their frustation on eachother n d most imp thing dt dy talke alasSmileBig smile relations ruined like these as v choose to stay quiet but v should talked n confront eacother to sort out d thingsSmile but all well dt ends wellSmile finally dy r 2gthr after all mishapsTongueSmile seruxly u did a justice to maniks's character n im happy for itTongueBig smileupdate soon dear n stay blessed

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Posted: 23 April 2016 at 12:39am | IP Logged
congratulations for ur new thread
now about update it was
just awesome Blossom
u have written it so well ,
the point view u gave from both
manan side was too good
n justified


continue soon

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Posted: 23 April 2016 at 12:41am | IP Logged
am just speechless after reading this update...

tumne ek bhi point nahi choda...

and is story ka end yahi hona chahiye tha,,,,,,,,,

sirf nandu ne hi suffer nahi kiya manik ne bhi utna hi suffer kiya shayad nandu se jyada hi and that to from starting...

ha manik ne jo kiya nandu ke saath that was completely wrong...

but that was not his fault completely...

kabhi kabhi hamare control mein kuch nahi hota circumstances hi aise ho ajte hai k hum aisa behave kar dete hai jaisa hamein nahi karna chahiye and baad mein regret karne ke bina hum kuch nahi kar pate...

galti karana aasan hai lekin use accept karna itna aasan nahi hai...guts hone chahiye uske liye,,,,,,,

ye bhi har kisi k bas ki baat nahi hoti...

nandu puri tarah toot chuki thi she has gone through a lot...but kahi na kahi mnaik bhi apni jagah thik hai...

usne life mein starting mein aisa sab dekha tha ,...he was having insecurities use assurance chahiye thi...

agar nandu us se sab share kar leti to shayad situation aur hota...

dono ki galti thi and dono apni apni jagah thik bhi the,,,,,,,,

but at last sab thik ho gaya dono mein...

kabhi kabhi kisi ko maaf kar pana itna aasan nahi hota but life is like this only...we have to moved on...

i just loved the update,,,,,,,,

u totally nailed it,,,,,,,,,,

tumne itne ache se apna ponit of view rakha.,...justify kiya har chij ko...

wish u all the very best for your upcoming work...

best update till the date...

thanku so much ...

stay blessed

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Posted: 23 April 2016 at 12:42am | IP Logged
Suppper update like always i missed you sooo much yaar. You are my first favourite writer. Finally they are cleared all their misunderstandings great thanx for giving dis story to us and i love ur writing skills always .

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Posted: 23 April 2016 at 1:00am | IP Logged
It's superb! Emotional update! It's nyc waiting fr nxt one!

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Posted: 23 April 2016 at 1:16am | IP Logged
AMAZING.AWSM . .NOTHING CAN BE BETTER THAN THIS .AM OVERWHELMED WITH UR UPDATE..U MAKE ME CRY THROUH MANY UPDATES .BUT THIS ONE IS BEST..NOTHNG MORE TO SAY...GONNA MISS THIS FF LIKE HELL. . .THANKS FOR THE HAPPY ENDING. WAITING FOR NXT.LOTS OF LOVE. . . .LOVE . . . .LOVE . . .

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Posted: 23 April 2016 at 1:20am | IP Logged
Greattt
Never did I imagine that Nandini will also ask for forgiveness
Its so true, its always a twos game in a relationship
The way u portrayed the emotions, be it anger, frustration, dejection, everything was simply superbbb
Sooo happy that Manan are finally at peace
Eagerly waiting for next one
Thanks for pm
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