Posted: 16 April 2016 at 9:11pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by _innocent_
So Tannu Ji...I finally get to read one of your creative pieces...I have to say, kudos to you for writing all of that on your phone.
I loved the story...I loved your take on what transpired between Sharmila and Neel. Sharmila was given the platform to express herself. She felt suffocated, as despite being the victim she was being treated as if she was the one who committed the crime. I loved how she sat there imagining her perpetrator at home smirking, etc.
Neel repenting and confessing his wrongs to her. That was lovely. As she was then put in a dilemma...wondering whether or not to forgive him, etc...!
Honestly, I liked this take from Sharmila's perspective. You've handled it a lot better than the makers did. Well done!
Thank You Aisha Ji.
I genuinely value your feedback and opinion.
I wanted to have it grounded in reality. No matter how far we come, when it comes to actually showing us respect, this society fails. And the imaginations stem from the fact that you have seen so many of those sadist people that you lose trust in humanity. In fact, I would say sometimes I feel even that is dead. I simply wanted to stick to their characters and not deviate much because then it loses its appeal, so Neelu Bhaiya is exactly like he is in the show and so is Sharmila, except she is more vocal about everything that is going on in the interiors of her mind in my OS. I wanted to bring to light the injustice that these girls suffer because whether you are knowingly or unknowingly tarnishing her self respect, she is the silent sufferer in the process and has to give her own life up to a person she can perceptually never learn to love or respect. I get very disturbed when I read such cases and I am truly one of the proponents that cannot make much change in the world as of now by representing such people but through the course of my story, I wanted to bring about my own thoughts on this issue. I am glad you like it so much because I put my heart and soul into this one, there is no fantasy about it.