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Posted: 19 April 2016 at 9:23am | IP Logged
Janaki, excerpt at the top Wink
Of page 81 lol


Edited by TwinMadness - 19 April 2016 at 9:24am

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Posted: 19 April 2016 at 9:24am | IP Logged
Originally posted by ..RamKiJanaki..

Originally posted by Shivam...

Originally posted by Sumi-19

Hello everyone !!!!!!!! How many of u like the starting that is action scenes of ram n lakshman .Wink

It was good , more like 3392 ad  series

But in these 10 years leap , they missed some important events

Yes, they missed the battle with Viradha and receiving weapons from Agastya. Agastya did not give them any special weapons here, did he?

Lord Ram is known as Kodandapaani because the bow he fights his battles in is called the Kodanda, and it is actually from Agastya that he receives the Kodanda.

So in SKR, Ram cannot be Kodandapaani without receiving it from Agastya first, and they are already at Panchavati. 

I think it is Agastya who gives lakshman a brahmastra

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Posted: 19 April 2016 at 9:24am | IP Logged
Originally posted by TwinMadness

Guys, excerpt:

"Go ahead! I trust both of you with him", said Rukmini. Taking Pradyumna from Satyabhama, she softly whispered to him, "Be nice for your Satya Ma and Jambavathi Ma, okay? They love you". Saying thus, she kissed his forehead. She looked up to see Satyabhama's lovely eyes shining with tears. Rukmini kept Pradyumna down, and opened her arms. Satyabhama promptly hugged each other. The two queens of Shri Krishna stayed like that, till Pradyumna started crying.

Both of them broke apart, laughed, and Satyabhama picked Pradyumna up. He immediately stopped crying.

"See Bhama. He just wants his Satya Ma's attention", said Rukmini.

"He does, doesn't he?", said Satyabhama, staring at Pradyumna with love. 


Aww, this is damn adorable! Heart It's so cute and sugary, I feel a cavity coming. LOL

Can't wait to read the whole thing. Day Dreaming

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Posted: 19 April 2016 at 9:25am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Shivam...

Originally posted by ..RamKiJanaki..

Originally posted by Shivam...

Originally posted by Sumi-19

Hello everyone !!!!!!!! How many of u like the starting that is action scenes of ram n lakshman .Wink

It was good , more like 3392 ad  series

But in these 10 years leap , they missed some important events

Yes, they missed the battle with Viradha and receiving weapons from Agastya. Agastya did not give them any special weapons here, did he?

Lord Ram is known as Kodandapaani because the bow he fights his battles in is called the Kodanda, and it is actually from Agastya that he receives the Kodanda.

So in SKR, Ram cannot be Kodandapaani without receiving it from Agastya first, and they are already at Panchavati. 

I think it is Agastya who gives lakshman a brahmastra

Yes, Agastya gives Ram and Lakshman a lot of weapons. He also gives Lakshman a sword (the one which he uses to chop Shurpanakha's nose and ears).

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Posted: 19 April 2016 at 9:25am | IP Logged
Originally posted by ..RamKiJanaki..

Originally posted by LakshMila

We got a BharMa scene!!Cry
And Lakshman?


Those stupid writers can spare a good no of epiis on Sugriva-Ruma's love story.Why,Did StarSita saw it with her third eye?Where does that come in her POV..?
But they ovio can't spare a single epii like twice a month showing Lakshman talking to MudMila!!!

I know, right? There is no need to show Surgriva-Ruma's nonexistent love story since "Sita's POV" wouldn't have known about it.

As I said before, Sita's POV is merely their excuse of showing whatever they want in the name of Ramayan.

Star Sita knows about everone's Personal Life

Wait till she reaches lanka , she will know every member of Raavan clan inside out

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Posted: 19 April 2016 at 9:25am | IP Logged
Originally posted by ..RamKiJanaki..

Originally posted by TwinMadness

Originally posted by ..RamKiJanaki..

Originally posted by TwinMadness

@bold 1: What a Rukmini thing to say Clap
@red: The best Rukmini I have read Embarrassed
@pink: I love it Heart
@purple: This is part of our serial, okay?
@bold 2: I love this Heart
@blue: What brilliance! Sheer perfection of words ClapClap
@red 2: So true Embarrassed
@blue 2: Our mischievous KanhaDay Dreaming
P.S. Why don't you post it separately as well?

Aww, thank you so much, Shru! Hug I am so happy you liked this OS, I had a lot of fun writing it, and I think I might even write a sequel, focusing on the dinner that night. Wink

And yes, we can include that moment in our serial. I just had to write it. I always imagined Rukmini being a little estranged from her parents due to their weakness for Rukmi and always following his orders, and I love the thought of Bhama and the other wives "sharing their parents" with her. Smile
Hug
I thought that too :) Such an amazing relationship depiction :P
My OS is on the works. I'll post it tomorrow or day-after :)
Focus on the dinner please Wink
Any other challenges for me? As I told you, my creativity flows during exams LOLLOL

Thanks once again! It's so easy writing Rukmini and Satyabhama, but I feel Jambavathi and Kalindi are kind of boring/stagnate. I need to give them more character in my next OS. LOL 

Can't wait for your OS, looking forward to it!

As for ideas, maybe you can write something on Subhadra bringing Abhimanyu and the Upa Pandavas and staying at Dwaraka while the Pandavas and Draupadi are on vanvaas. I would love to see Revathi and Krishna's eight queens pitching in with the kids. Wink
Go ahead then Guru Ma Wink
I will work on that :)

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Posted: 19 April 2016 at 9:26am | IP Logged
Originally posted by ..RamKiJanaki..

Originally posted by TwinMadness

Guys, excerpt:

"Go ahead! I trust both of you with him", said Rukmini. Taking Pradyumna from Satyabhama, she softly whispered to him, "Be nice for your Satya Ma and Jambavathi Ma, okay? They love you". Saying thus, she kissed his forehead. She looked up to see Satyabhama's lovely eyes shining with tears. Rukmini kept Pradyumna down, and opened her arms. Satyabhama promptly hugged each other. The two queens of Shri Krishna stayed like that, till Pradyumna started crying.

Both of them broke apart, laughed, and Satyabhama picked Pradyumna up. He immediately stopped crying.

"See Bhama. He just wants his Satya Ma's attention", said Rukmini.

"He does, doesn't he?", said Satyabhama, staring at Pradyumna with love. 


Aww, this is damn adorable! Heart It's so cute and sugary, I feel a cavity coming. LOL

Can't wait to read the whole thing. Day Dreaming
Thank you :)
I hope you will like it Smile

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Posted: 19 April 2016 at 9:27am | IP Logged
Originally posted by TwinMadness

Originally posted by ..RamKiJanaki..

Originally posted by TwinMadness

Guys, excerpt:

"Go ahead! I trust both of you with him", said Rukmini. Taking Pradyumna from Satyabhama, she softly whispered to him, "Be nice for your Satya Ma and Jambavathi Ma, okay? They love you". Saying thus, she kissed his forehead. She looked up to see Satyabhama's lovely eyes shining with tears. Rukmini kept Pradyumna down, and opened her arms. Satyabhama promptly hugged each other. The two queens of Shri Krishna stayed like that, till Pradyumna started crying.

Both of them broke apart, laughed, and Satyabhama picked Pradyumna up. He immediately stopped crying.

"See Bhama. He just wants his Satya Ma's attention", said Rukmini.

"He does, doesn't he?", said Satyabhama, staring at Pradyumna with love. 


Aww, this is damn adorable! Heart It's so cute and sugary, I feel a cavity coming. LOL

Can't wait to read the whole thing. Day Dreaming
Thank you :)
I hope you will like it Smile

Of course I will, can't wait! Embarrassed

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