Kaya ff: Humara dil aap ke paas hai *DISCONTINUED* (Page 40)

Swatishubh IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 16 June 2016 at 8:24am | IP Logged
Awesome and a very beautiful update doll Clap
So, this time the update with the pics!!! Wow! Lovely scenario and loved how Kabir told himself a killer Wink Indeed he is EmbarrassedWink
The b'day party is for the kids and kabir almost lost himself to the monster crowd. Loved to see a loving Ananya coming to him and relieved him! I cud very well judge out that Ananya was taking care of him. 
This time even Kaya smiled to him, lucky him Embarrassed
The song he played for Ananya! Outstanding wordings with all his feelings expressed! Lovely way to say what he felt for her and Ananya understood him so well. Awesome, stupendous scene Kaushi Star Loved it to the core.Clap
The tears falling expressed their hearts to each other. The finger she put on his lips not to say words of death and she nodded too. What a lovely scene in progress with the song so perfectly gelling the feelings. Heart
I just loved their confession! Very beautiful and very sweet. Sweetness personified Heart
Kaushi dear, you have made me emotional today with this purely magical update!Clap
Kabir was all prepared to tell his feelings and now it's a known fact that he won't have her heart, unless she dies. 
In aura of your story, luv ya soo soo much sweetie HeartHug

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sorathsheikh IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 16 June 2016 at 8:27am | IP Logged
Awesome update sis Big smile
Kabir Bhai bought gift for kaya but didn't give it to her as he wanted to tease her Big smile but when she was about to cry he told ananya to give her the gift which he bought for her 
After receiving the gift she becomes happy 
continue soon thanks for pm

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bawaswift IF-Stunnerz

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Posts: 32215

Posted: 16 June 2016 at 8:58am | IP Logged
O yeah... what an update... kaushi doll... StarClap
First things first... i loved the pics inserted in between the narration... ! Then i loved the handsome hunk Kabir killing every one here... ! Hey me too call  myself handsome sometimes... there is nothing wrong in it... WinkLOL
Now the party... ! 
I almost got bowled over dear... StarClap
The way kabir asked Ana to put the gift n then gave it when the little girl was almost in tears.. suggest how he wants to be very familiar with the little angelic monster... Embarrassed But more loved his speciality in winning her mumma too... Wink
The party had parents of the kids as well... n Ana's request got filled so is ours today... !
Kabir no no... Ana's kabir on guitar... n His Ana asked him to start... .this was lovable... the most lovable..!!!Day Dreaming
Loved the song chosen... the words almost touched Ana's soul n she got what he wanted to say... 
The expressed feelings n love... the fact n reality told.. n the way he almost told her that even if he dies he will be loving her n will be back to her... Clap
The last moment they felt with each other... Beyond words... You have a caliber to make your readers glued to your work dear... StarClap
Just loved the confession... n will be in wait what Kabir says abt her decision to donate her heart... n he knows everything..
wanna know Ana's reactions too..
Very fabulous piece of work doll... just cud not see anything than this one... read it last night... n now reviewing... the update was all in my mind all the time... ! Big smile
God bless you dear... ! Hug

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cuteariya IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 16 June 2016 at 2:09pm | IP Logged
Fabulous update 
Loll kabir called Kaya & her friends monsters 
But seeing ananya kabir lost
At at that moment kabir like Kaya & she was really happy to get gift from kabir 
Song was awesome both Kaya feel each other love
Finally confession happen 
Continue plz

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Mrumi Goldie

Joined: 30 October 2015
Posts: 1206

Posted: 16 June 2016 at 9:27pm | IP Logged
Wow.. finally they said it.. those 3 words will prove magical more than that magician's magic. Embarrassed

I hope that they will defeat their destiny together

Update soon..Smile

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Zannat. IF-Dazzler

Joined: 05 April 2014
Posts: 3696

Posted: 17 June 2016 at 3:07pm | IP Logged
Kaushi...Another Great Update 

Kaya (the liitle one)

I just loved Kaya and Kabir's bond Smile

Kabir is like..
Well Kabir..I totally agree with you..You were looking super handsome specially  when you're singing for Ananya Day Dreaming

I feeling so so so so so
tv black and white cute happy baby
finally Kabir confessed his feeling to Ananya Day DreamingEmbarrassed

Still I'm hopeful...that something good will happened to KaYa
so-you-think-you-can-dance fox worried nervous so you think you can dance

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eufara_naghm Goldie

Joined: 14 February 2016
Posts: 1640

Posted: 20 June 2016 at 7:17pm | IP Logged
If u don't mind Kaushiki why r u discontinuing it????Ouch
We all love this ff...
Please don't do this to us...

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piyali_6 Senior Member

Joined: 30 November 2015
Posts: 212

Posted: 20 June 2016 at 9:03pm | IP Logged
Why r u discontinued this story Angry Question

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