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Kaya ff: Humara dil aap ke paas hai *DISCONTINUED* (Page 38)

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Posted: 16 June 2016 at 1:13am | IP Logged
Wow...kaushiki dear...it's so nice...
Loved it...

Continue soon...

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Posted: 16 June 2016 at 1:59am | IP Logged
Hiii
U read it in a one go
Must say awsm ff
Loved it 
Continue soon

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Posted: 16 June 2016 at 2:24am | IP Logged
Beautiful just a very beautiful update Kaushi ClapClap Take my hugs Hug
Sure, kabir was looking like a killer EmbarrassedClap But his destination consisted of monsters and kids LOL Nice meeting of Kabir and Ananya and then Kaya and she loved the gift. A very good sign for kabir Wink
Very lovely song and so perfect for the expressions of his feelings for Ananya ! For him " My Kabir " was everything and he started his heart out, lovely !Heart
The song, it's lyrics made Ananya think his feelings for her and she understood what he was trying to say. The confession made with tears in their eyes. Clap
Such a beautiful way of confession !!! Kaushi this was superbly stunning ! I just loved it to the core !
Thanks will wait for the next. Loves Heart
Loved to have the dressed up Kabir, Ananya, and Kaya in between the update. Got to know how they were looking like. Nice pics chosen ! StarStar

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Posted: 16 June 2016 at 2:29am | IP Logged
Fantastic...

Finally confession is done..

Awesome update dear

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Posted: 16 June 2016 at 8:09am | IP Logged
Finally kaya confessed their feelings.superb ud

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Posted: 16 June 2016 at 8:24am | IP Logged
Awesome and a very beautiful update doll Clap
So, this time the update with the pics!!! Wow! Lovely scenario and loved how Kabir told himself a killer Wink Indeed he is EmbarrassedWink
The b'day party is for the kids and kabir almost lost himself to the monster crowd. Loved to see a loving Ananya coming to him and relieved him! I cud very well judge out that Ananya was taking care of him. 
This time even Kaya smiled to him, lucky him Embarrassed
The song he played for Ananya! Outstanding wordings with all his feelings expressed! Lovely way to say what he felt for her and Ananya understood him so well. Awesome, stupendous scene Kaushi Star Loved it to the core.Clap
The tears falling expressed their hearts to each other. The finger she put on his lips not to say words of death and she nodded too. What a lovely scene in progress with the song so perfectly gelling the feelings. Heart
I just loved their confession! Very beautiful and very sweet. Sweetness personified Heart
Kaushi dear, you have made me emotional today with this purely magical update!Clap
Kabir was all prepared to tell his feelings and now it's a known fact that he won't have her heart, unless she dies. 
In aura of your story, luv ya soo soo much sweetie HeartHug

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Posted: 16 June 2016 at 8:27am | IP Logged
Awesome update sis Big smile
Kabir Bhai bought gift for kaya but didn't give it to her as he wanted to tease her Big smile but when she was about to cry he told ananya to give her the gift which he bought for her 
After receiving the gift she becomes happy 
continue soon thanks for pm

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Posted: 16 June 2016 at 8:58am | IP Logged
O yeah... what an update... kaushi doll... StarClap
First things first... i loved the pics inserted in between the narration... ! Then i loved the handsome hunk Kabir killing every one here... ! Hey me too call  myself handsome sometimes... there is nothing wrong in it... WinkLOL
Now the party... ! 
I almost got bowled over dear... StarClap
The way kabir asked Ana to put the gift n then gave it when the little girl was almost in tears.. suggest how he wants to be very familiar with the little angelic monster... Embarrassed But more loved his speciality in winning her mumma too... Wink
The party had parents of the kids as well... n Ana's request got filled so is ours today... !
Kabir no no... Ana's kabir on guitar... n His Ana asked him to start... .this was lovable... the most lovable..!!!Day Dreaming
Loved the song chosen... the words almost touched Ana's soul n she got what he wanted to say... 
The expressed feelings n love... the fact n reality told.. n the way he almost told her that even if he dies he will be loving her n will be back to her... Clap
The last moment they felt with each other... Beyond words... You have a caliber to make your readers glued to your work dear... StarClap
Just loved the confession... n will be in wait what Kabir says abt her decision to donate her heart... n he knows everything..
wanna know Ana's reactions too..
Very fabulous piece of work doll... just cud not see anything than this one... read it last night... n now reviewing... the update was all in my mind all the time... ! Big smile
God bless you dear... ! Hug

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