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Kaya ff: Humara dil aap ke paas hai *DISCONTINUED* (Page 36)

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Posted: 13 June 2016 at 8:24am | IP Logged
Originally posted by .FlyingClouds.

Emotional chapter!!
But a good one...
Cont soon Kaushiki!!
Thank u so much Aadii...Embarrassed I'll update soon dear...Smile

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Posted: 13 June 2016 at 8:28am | IP Logged
Originally posted by sutapabanerjee

A short emotional chapter.
So finally Kabir and Ananya will meet once again.
A birthday wish from me to Kaya.
Was waiting for this PM.
Hoping the next update will be a bigger one,
Bye for now.
Gearing up for the partyLOL
Thank u so much...Embarrassed Thanks from kaya toooLOLYeah I'll update soon and will try to update a bigger one atleat isse to badi hi...SmileTongue
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Posted: 13 June 2016 at 8:30am | IP Logged
Originally posted by eufara_naghm

Hiii...Kaushiki...it's very nice... Please continue soon... Thanks for the pm ...
Hey Sahira...Thank u so much...Embarrassed I'll update soon...Smile
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Posted: 13 June 2016 at 8:31am | IP Logged
Originally posted by chaudhary_kajal

Lovely update..
Kabir is overwhelmed seeing ananya's love for him but he can't do or say anything to anyone at this moment.
Its kaya's bday and ananya has invited kabir.
Thanku for pm
continue soon
Thank u so much Kaju...Embarrassed I'll update soon...Smile
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Posted: 13 June 2016 at 8:38am | IP Logged
Originally posted by babita..

Hello KaushiHug
As i'm new to this story, i wanted to comment for the past chapters in one go.TongueHope it's all okayEmbarrassed

I liked the way story starts. Kabir in the awe of Ananya with a girl calling her Mom. And the truth that she adopted this abandoned girl, his respect for Ananya raised in love and regards.
But the monster girl, Kaya is like a hater, who hates him.TongueI laughed to read how he got scared by her looksLOL
The night he spends with his parents and trying to know his life's plans of Ananya and him as a pair choice of parents, i liked his kid like attitude and a relief all over his soul.
The rejection by Ananya made him feel shattered, and he hurt himself. The truth came to him in his oblivion and he gets to know that she loves him, but due to her short life, she is going to die and will be donating her heart to Kabir, who is suffering with a hole in his heart.
Very emotional part later, but the story is a life to the readers who crave for Kaya moments and long for the stories made for them.
Loved your written ability and the way story developed.ClapClap
Will be back with the latest chapter ain a while. LovesHeart
Thank u so much didi...Smile I'm so happy that u loved it...Hahahaha...ek baar min karo ya 100 baar mein but comment dil chu gaya...WinkEmbarrassed
Meri inni saari tareef...OMG..!!!Shocked Yahan mujhse bhi acche writers hain...Smile
Well thanks alot again...Hug

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Posted: 13 June 2016 at 8:44am | IP Logged
Originally posted by babita..

I loved
Kabir's Mom ready to do everything for her son. Even to request Ananya to marry
him. Liked his sis talking to him in annoyance and felt bad that he did
it.


He is happy that Ananya
loves him more than anything, but felt for her not coming to meet him ! Nice
phone convo though. They both are starting afresh, and now the function time --
kaya's b'day. He asked to give his wishes to the angel { he meant the monster
na }Wink



Loved him calling her
fatty and after the call said"I love u Ananya...tum
meri zindagi ho...tum mere liye mera sb kuch ho...



Liked to know what
happens next, bcos they both are ailing and can't live for long. It's a mix
feeling.


Sadness and joys both
are prevailing together.


Very nice and emotional story Kaushi,
thanks and lovesHeart



Thanks alot didi...once again...!!!Big smile
Yeah he meant Monster...hahahaha...
But soon he will fell in love with his monster tooo...after all humara monster hai hi inna cute...Embarrassed
No need to say thanks...Smile
Love uhhh...Hug

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Posted: 13 June 2016 at 8:52am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Swatishubh

Such an emotional flow in the story! Loved it Kaushi dearClap
The fine thing is that Kabir cud have a phone convo with Ananya and they are smiling to each other. It wud be nice to see them together in the party thrown for the angelic love of Ananya, Kaya! I'll wait for them to meet and talk!Day Dreaming
Got a lovely impression of Kabir's mother who affectionately cried for him and wants to beg Ananya to marry him. What a pity that they both are going with the same situation, and have not much timeCry
I liked Kabir's views for his love - she is everything for him and he loves her so much!Heart
Calling her with the pet names like Fatty and likewise, it seemed they both are friends again and no past days' talks going to matter.
But that's not the real thing. Where Ananya is readily waiting to give his heart to him, Kabir is all set to get her back in his life as a lover and will say No to her to donate her heart to him.
I have a feeling, that he will do that. He will ask his love to let's die together instead of one of them living alone with her heart in him!
Want to wait to know more.
Luv ya Kaushi doll, for the most tough times presented to us in such a lovely wayHeartHug
Thanks alot Bhabhiii...Big smile
Yeah they both r in such a pathetic situation...Cry
But sometimes life plays its own games...and we can't do anything...and have to suffer...
Yeah Kabir's mother loves him alot that's why she is ready to do anything for her Son's happiness...Smile
Yeah one more meeting in kaya's birthday party...lets see what will happen in it...Tongue
Thank u soo much again bhabhi...
Love uhhh...Hug

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Posted: 13 June 2016 at 9:06am | IP Logged
Originally posted by bawaswift

Short update.. but so much happened in the chapter...
Loved how things moved on Doll...StarClap

Ek toh main na banner mein kho jata hoon...Day Dreaming good ki tu every time isse post karti hai...WinkLOL

Aww.. such a teary Mom... n all crying for his son... to be fine sooner.. ! Good ki sis ne daanta... for what he did to himself... That was not at all a solution at all...
Nice to hear them on phone... Very casually they talked n now party time for Kaya the monster... or the angel... This will be clear in the party i guess...Embarrassed
Such a lovely line in his heart... Kabir loves Ana n cant live without her... he will never let her donate her heart to him... or will she forcefully or emotionally... ??/ That will be a tear jerker then...EmbarrassedOuch
Well... very nice portrayal of the characters... where all seems so well... but hard times ahead for both.. !
Wanna say a line here...
Dil ne ye kahaa hai dil se... Mohabbat ho gayi hai tumse... !!!

Kaushi you rock dear...Clap
Thank u shoo much mere pyaare se teddy bear bhaiyu...TongueBig smile Yeah I know that it was really short nxt time I'll try to post a bigger one...Smile
Hmmm...Yeh to mere sath bhi hota h...main bhi kho jaati hu...but banner mein ni aap k or bhabhi k comments mein...or hasti rehti hu...fir mumma puchti hain k itna kyu hass rhi h...TongueLOL
Yeah u r right that was not a solution at all...pta ni kabir ne esa kyu kiya...Tongue
Yeah Kaya is a monster or now will she trns up in an angel for kabir that will be clear in the nxt update...Wink
Ab inna sb thodi na bta dungi abhi...aapko to sb abi hi pta krna h...LOLTongue
AB KABIR KYA KAREGA YEH JANNE K LIYE BANE RAHEIN HUMARE SATH HUM BS ABHI HAZIR HOTE HAIN EK CHOTE SE BREAK K BAAD...ROFL
SO THE AWARD FOR THE BEST COMMENT GOES TO MR.BHAVIT KAPOOR...Clap
Awww bhaiyu ye to mera favourite song h...Big smile
Thanks alot...
Love uhh bht sara bhai...Hug

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