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Kaya ff: Humara dil aap ke paas hai *DISCONTINUED* (Page 3)

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Posted: 13 April 2016 at 2:28pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by siramani

Loving the concept
Do continueTongue

Thank u... Yup I will update soon.. Big smile

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Posted: 13 April 2016 at 2:33pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by manaalkhan

Amazing attempt Kaushi...!!! *hope you won't mind if i call you that*
That story seems really intriguing...!!
Will be waiting for the 1st part...!! Bring it on...!
continue sooner & thanks for the PM...!!

Thank u soo much manaal di...I m glad that u liked it...Ya u can call whatever u want..why would I mind...I will update soon.. Big smile
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Posted: 13 April 2016 at 2:39pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by kabirananyafan

Loved it...the twist was so good
plz continue soon

Thank u soo much..I will cont soon...
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Posted: 13 April 2016 at 2:41pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by prasannakamila

Ananya is a mother of little girl nd kabir is still bachelour nd they both r best frnds in childhood*sounds interesting*.
Plz continue soon

Thank u soo much...I will update soon... Smile

Edited by Kaushiki - 13 April 2016 at 2:42pm
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Posted: 13 April 2016 at 2:48pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by chaudhary_kajal

Fabulous prologue kaushu Clap
Yar tune to prologue mein hi jhatka de diya...that girl is annanya's daughter Shocked
update 1st chappy asap
thanku for pm

Thank u soo much Kaju... Tongue I m soo happy that u like it...and PICTURE TOH ABI SHURU HUI H MERE DOST... Wink I will update soon... Big smile
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Posted: 14 April 2016 at 11:56am | IP Logged
Hiii Everyone thanks for the lovely comments...and liking my post... Smile so here is the first chapter enjoy the reading and do tell me how was it...
CHAPTER 1


KABIR'S POV CONTINUED
I was frozed at my spot ,it felt like my whole world was shattered, I could not believe on my own ears, I wasn't able to breath. I mean how could she be married ?? WHY WHY GOD..?? And why didn't she told me before taking such a BIG decision of her life ?? Who was HER HUSBAND, where was he, was he better than me..??? OHH GOD!!! Why m I comparing myself with him ?? My chain of thoughts was broken as she spoke back to HER DAUGHTER
A- Kaya baby mene aapko apne best friend ke baare me bataya tha na ye wahi h Mr.Kabir Sharma.
I was fuming in anger I don't know why as I muttered to myself ''Oh atleast main tumhe yaad to hun''. But I needed to speak, I have to ask her that why didn't she informed me before taking such a big decision. I looked at her and again I was lost in her beauty which was making me weak my all anger was vanished I don't know what I was feeling and why bt it really happened. After alot of trying I finally spoke
ME- Hey tum toh bohot badal gai ho.
A- Tum bhi toh badal gae ho Kabir tum India aaye or tumne mujhe bataya bhi nhi an baat mat krna mjhse main tumse bohot naraz hun..Angry
She turned her face away from me. I laughed at this scarcastically. I mean look who is talking she got married and didn't bothered to inform me and now she is speaking as if I did a biger crime than that. Just then HER DAUGHTER asked her
Kaya- Mumma main waha jau waha pr meri friend bhi h Suhani plz mumma..
A- Haan baby jao pr zyada shaitani ni krna ok..??
Kaya- Ok mumma..Big smile

And Kaya went to her friend and then just we both were left. Then I said to myself ''Mujhe pta lagana hi padega ki iska husband h kon''. Just then she asked
A- Kabir tumne kuch kaha..?
I said with a shocked expression
ME- Ohh I was saying she is so cute kitne saal ki h ?
She said with a motherly voice
A- She will turn 5 in next week on tuesday.
ME- Ohh thats great... Where is your HUSBAND..?? Vo kyun ni ayaa...??
I asked with so much curiosity stressing the word HUSBAND...But she gived a shocked expression on my question and then after a few seconds said with a smile
A- My husband...Kabir shayad tumhe kuch galat fehmi hui hai...Meri shadi nhi hui...
I was hell shoched at that time. What the hell is going on, if she isn't married then why Kaya was calling her MUMMA..?? My chain of thoughts was broken as she put her hand on my shoulder and asked
A- Kya hua Kabir...Kya soch rhe ho..??
I was so shocked but was very happy to know that she wasn't married. But successfully hide it and asked
ME- If you aren't married to Kaya...matlab vo tumhari bati kese...??

Soo this was it...Guy plz tell me how was it...and do hit the like button...*only if u liked it* hihihihi thanks for reading...

Edited by Kaushiki - 19 May 2016 at 4:12am

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Posted: 14 April 2016 at 12:25pm | IP Logged
I think I am first to comment 
Superb part Kaushi 
Thankgod Ananya is not married 
Continue soon and thanks for the pm 

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Posted: 14 April 2016 at 1:27pm | IP Logged
mind blowing chapter
wow kaya is best friend since childhood
OMG ananya have daughter Shocked
more shocking is she is not married Shocked
kabir was so shocked Shocked
continue plz

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