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Kaya ff: Humara dil aap ke paas hai *DISCONTINUED* (Page 17)

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Posted: 09 May 2016 at 6:02am | IP Logged
Originally posted by sona_naksh

nice
continue soon

Thank u soo much...will cont soon...Big smile

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Posted: 09 May 2016 at 6:16am | IP Logged
Originally posted by bawaswift


Again Awesome as always...StarClap
I liked the way the home was emptied when the beti of the home was gone after her bidaai... It happens at every home...Smile

So... our kabir has no sleep in his eyes... n what a chance n idea he had to enter his parents' room... Chupke se sab sun liya...Tongue Bad habits...LOL
But liked that they also like Ananya as their daughter in law...
Loved to hear this... !

Now Kabir has no sleep again... but the right thought... what if Ananya will reject him...Embarrassed
I liked his confidence... but cant say what Ananaya wud say.. will wait for that..

Nice chapter n progress Kaushiki...StarClapThanks... n keep it up dear... !




BHAIYU...!!! Thank u shoo much...Big smile U know what I really wanted to write more and more just because of these lovely comments...LOL Ab humare SHARMA JI to ese hi hain...Tongue thoda sa zyada soch lete hain...LOL ZYADA SUCHNA K LIYE LINE PAR BANE RAHIEN...ROFL Or again best comment award goes to Mr.Bhavit Kapoor...ClapBig smile I will continue soon...

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Posted: 09 May 2016 at 6:18am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Gaytri123

Awesome dear .. Waiting for next partTongue

Thank u soo much Chaya...Big smile
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Posted: 09 May 2016 at 10:51pm | IP Logged
Aagayi mein.. Big smile
Muj ko pehechaan lo mein hun kon Cool
uff yeh lijiye madam aapke KOHINOOR comment LOL

Haan jii toh kya bolu.. update accha tha.. ya bohut accha.. buraa tha ya bohut boora.. ya phir ok ok Confused
toh cheliye bataa hii deti hun... Update was superbb... matlb Aww... Kabir ke mann mein toh laddoo k baarish ho rahe honge... ye sunn ke that his choice is same as his parent's..

At first Richaa k bidaai.. Cry
koi royaa hii nahi.. chalo ham dono mil ke roh lete hai CryCry
haan ho gaya ronaaa dhonaa.. ab hai.. next Band bajaa Baraat yuppiee.. Chal naach teh hai... Arre naccho saare jee fhaar ke DancingDancing... mere hisse ka naachnaa ho gaya.. chal kabir ko bhi thora chor denge.. phir shaadi k baad vaise hii bichaare ko naachna hii parega.. toh thore training toh kar le bande ne LOL
Par I loved the scene jaha janaab ne apne parent's k beech bed par jump kar ke soh jaate hai... lol... it was kinda cutee... Day DreamingDay Dreaming
Phir eavesdropping karna mumma papa ke baat bad manner's
haww.. acche bacche nahi karte aise... ShockedShocked
Chalo ab kar bhi diya hai.. toh haan bhi bol do.. Aww.. mini monster will get PAA soon... oyee hoyee...
I am choo excited StarStar

Continue soonish..
Thanks for the PM

take care
love you Hug

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Posted: 09 May 2016 at 11:39pm | IP Logged
Amazing! I could not stop laughing at Kabir's reaction toward Ananya when he thought she was married. And Kaya is very spicy combo in their life. Let see what Ananya say towards Kabir's alliance brought by his family.

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Posted: 10 May 2016 at 2:40am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Snehasn

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">Aagayi mein..Big smile
Muj ko pehechaan lo mein hun kon Cool
uff yeh lijiye madam aapke <font color="#FF0000">KOHINOOR </font>comment LOL

Haan jii toh kya bolu.. update accha tha.. ya bohut accha.. buraa tha ya bohut boora.. ya phir ok ok Confused
toh cheliye bataa hii deti hun... Update was superbb... matlb Aww... Kabir ke mann mein toh laddoo k baarish ho rahe honge... ye sunn ke that his choice is same as his parent's..

At first Richaa k bidaai.. Cry
koi royaa hii nahi.. chalo ham dono mil ke roh lete hai CryCry
haan ho gaya ronaaa dhonaa.. ab hai.. next Band bajaa Baraat yuppiee.. Chal naach teh hai... Arre naccho saare jee fhaar ke DancingDancing... mere hisse ka naachnaa ho gaya.. chal kabir ko bhi thora chor denge.. phir shaadi k baad vaise hii bichaare ko naachna hii parega.. toh thore training toh kar le bande ne LOL
Par I loved the scene jaha janaab ne apne parent's k beech bed par jump kar ke soh jaate hai... lol... it was kinda cutee... Day DreamingDay Dreaming
Phir eavesdropping karna mumma papa ke baat bad manner's
haww.. acche bacche nahi karte aise... ShockedShocked
Chalo ab kar bhi diya hai.. toh haan bhi bol do.. Aww.. mini monster will get PAA soon... oyee hoyee...
I am choo excited StarStar

Continue soonish..
Thanks for the PM

take care
love you Hug
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Didu...!!! Thank u sooo much for ur KOHINOOR COMMENT...LOL Mera ff padh kr kisi ko hasi aayi ho ni bt mujhe aap ka comment padh kr OMG...!!!ROFL hass hass k pagal ho gai main sachi me...Kabir to esa hi h...ladoo kya usk mn me to chocolate or ice cream or custard sb k barish ho rhi h...LOL Agr pehle comment krti to BEST COMMENT AWARD app hi ko jata...ROFL Chalo koi ni...I love uhh tooo...EmbarrassedHug I will update soon...
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Posted: 10 May 2016 at 2:45am | IP Logged
Originally posted by MistiofMistz

Amazing! I could not stop laughing at Kabir's reaction toward Ananya when he thought she was married. And Kaya is very spicy combo in their life. Let see what Ananya say towards Kabir's alliance brought by his family.

Thank u soo much...Big smile For more information plzz stay tune...LOLWink Whats ur name..??
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Posted: 11 May 2016 at 6:45am | IP Logged
CHAPTER-4

In the morning I woke up as the 1 ray of sun hit my eyes...And soon after a shower I came out and got ready I wore a three piece suit '' I have to look my best'' I thought...And looked at myself in the mirror...''Not bad Mr.Sharma''LOL I said to myself and smiled...today is a big day...I know Sudhir uncle loves me and is very happy with the alliance but still today he will examine me as his future son-in-law...Embarrassed with these thoughts I headed downstairs and went to the dinning room...Mom-Dad were already present there...they both looked at me and gaved me a ''OHOO'' type look...
ME-Ohh please guys today is a big day...right..??Embarrassed
DAD- Haan haan...humein sb pta hai...Smile
Both smiled at me and after breakfast we left...
As Dad drove the car my heart was running at 1000km/hr...Thousands of thoughts were running in my mind...And soon we reached our destination...we stoped near a six storage bunglow just our's...Each corner of the house reflects beauty and richness...Their servents lead us inside...Sudhir uncle greated us and we all get seated...and one of the servent offered us cold drinks...I was so nervous...First time in my life I was feeling nervous...just then Sudhir uncle spoke...
SUDHIR- How are u Kabir..??
ME- I m fine uncle...Smile
SUDHIR- Kabir...main tumara uncle tha bt ab ni hu...so call me SIR...
ME- Ohk Sir...I...a...m...fi...ne...
I stammered and I felt my heart coming out as he gave me one of his frosty looks...but soon he started laughing...and my parents followed his laughterROFL...after some time I understod that Uncle was pullinh my legs...I felt embarassed...
SUDHIR- Ohh come on Kabir beta daro mt main toh mazak kr rha tha...Raj tumhara beta sach mein bohot sidha h...LOL
RAJVEER (DAD)- Haan...pr Ananya kaha hai...??Smile
SUDHIR- Wo Kaya ko school chodne gai h...bs aati hi hogi...
MOM- Actually...Sudhir...mujhe kaya k baare mein kuch baat krni hai...
SUDHIR- Main janta hu Sadhna (MOM) K tumhe kya baat krni h...tum log chahte ho k shadi k baad kaya Ananya k paas na rhe...main is baare mein sochunga aur Ananya se baat karunga...Don't worry...
DAD- Nahi Sudhir esa nahi h...hume toh Kaya bohot acchi lgti hai...aur hum chahte hain ki Kabir aur Ananya ki shadi k baad Kaya unhi k sath rahe...Kaya is like our grand daughter Sudhir...
SUDHIR- Tum logon ko koi pareshani nahi hai...pr Kabir ka kya...
Again my turn to answer...that too about that monster...bt for Ananya I can do anything...
ME- Uncle mujhe bhi kaya se koi problem nahi hai...even I like her alot...Smile
Again lie Mr.Sharma...''Aur kitna jhut bologe...I hate that Monster I hate her...bt can't tell that to anyone...'' I thought to myself...just then I saw Ananya coming towards us...She looked so beautiful in that red colored salwar-suit...She made her way inside and sat beside Sudhir uncle...
ANANYA- Good morning everyone...kya baat hai aaj sb ek sath...koi occasion hai kya...??Big smile
MOM- Haan Ananya aaj hum yahan tumhari or Kabir ki shadi ki baat krne aaye hain beta...Smile
I saw her face turned pale and eyes were full of tears...as she spoke
ANANYA- Whattt..???Shocked
SUDHIR- Ananya hum iss baare mein pehle hi baat kr chukey hain...
ANANYA- Or papa main aapko pehle hi bata chuki hun ki Mujhe Kabir se shaadi nahi krni h...
My heart got the strongest jerk of my life...and I kept telling myself ''Nahi esa nahi ho skta...Ananya jhut bol rahi hai...vo esa nahi kr skti...vo mujhe reject nahi kr skti..'' Even the elders were in a great shock...
SUDHIR- Ananya tum kya keh rhi ho tumhe pta bhi hai..??
ANANYA- Haan papa mujhe pta hai...pr aapko kya ho gaya hai...aap samjh kyu ni rhe hain...?? Im sorry Uncle Aunty...but main yeh shaadi nahi kr skti...
Ohh...look she said sorry...she said sorry to my parents but what about me...?? Miss Ananya Kashyap will u please include me in ur sorry list...Or have u rejected from there too...I felt tears swelled up in my eyes but I held them back...and finally spoke
ME- Why...why you don't want to marry me...??
All the three turned towards me...she looked at me and the anger which was builting inside me started to melt...she gave me a innocent look...those dark brown eyes I don't know why they always made me weak...but I managed to give her a ''Will you explain'' look...My mom understood the situation and said...
MOM- Mujhe lgta hai humein baccho ko akele mein baat krne dena chahiye...it will be good...
With that the elders left...and then Ananya said..
ANANYA- Dekho Kabir samjhne ki koshish karo...main ye shaadi nahi kr skti...
ME- Main samjhne ki koshish karu...REALLY..?? To samjhao na mujhe main bhi toh yahi keh rha hu na...Samjhao kya samjhana chahti ho...??
ANANYA-Kabir...
ME- Please Ananya...agar tum yeh sab Kaya ki wajah se kr rhi ho to please esa mt kro kyuki main Kaya ko accept krne k liye ready hu...Please main tumse bohot pyar krta hu Ananya...I promise main kaya ko bhi bohot khush rakhunga...but please don't do this...
I looked at her...her eyes told that she was hurt her eyes were all teary and she said...
ANANYA- Jao yaha se Kabir...Ye sab mere liye wese hi bohot mushkil h use aor mushkil mt kro...please...
I didn't uttered a single word jsut got up to leave...she held my hand I know that she was crying but I was so angry on her...I jerked her hand and left...

That's it guys...do tell me how was it...thank u so much for reading...Big smile

Edited by Kaushiki - 19 May 2016 at 4:28am

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