Kaya ff: Humara dil aap ke paas hai *DISCONTINUED* - Page 15

hey awese n marvelous update dear.    so Kabir is slowly or may say falling hard for ananya. he is quite excited for this marriage proposal. n even he has agree to accept kaya. but y annanya has rejected Kabir proposal. Kabir is heartbroken. oh no update soon dear.

Wat hpnd 2 anu she rejects kabir.my poor kabir.nice ud

very nice update dear... 😊

poor kabir... 😭

Oh God... feeling sad for kabir...

hmm. ..so finally reading complete kiya. .baht lazy hu na. ..day before yesterday hi bola tha ki padungi and padh abhi rahi hu. ...hehehhe. ...
The X super duper cute thing in this ff is that lil cute minsters for whom I just felt in the prologue itself as I love children 😳
offo kabir thinks a lot. .like seriously ...
that kaya's story was soo sad ...
aise bhi parents hote h kya :/ .
but jo bhi hua acha hua because annaya got her ...
awww! !kabir ko toh baht gussa aata h. ... 😆
and then his parents only talked to him ...He would be dancing from inside ...
that Lil cute baby is shooo cute really mai. ..she is toh very saitan! !. .
but but but y Anna ya rejected ...why she didn't agree ??? aisa kya hogaya bhala? ??
I think something is really wrong ...
hmm ...so waiting for the next one ..
continue soon !!

lots of love   🤗
ekta ...

first of all am extremely sorry for my lateness..today I read ur story,n I read the whole story in one go..then I regreted that y had'nt I read it earlier.its super awesome story..i'am totally hooked..dying to read further plz update soon :) Edited by sanee - 7 years ago

Originally posted by: sur1911

Nice update kaushu

So kabir is all excited

But what is this ananya reject his proposal

But why.

Egar to know her reason

Update soon

Thanks for pm

Thank u so much dear...😃
I will update soon...

Originally posted by: siramani

Well...Ananya rejected Kabir😭

Kabir is so hurt...I'm feeling bad for him..

But Ananya must have some reasons...

Please continue soon and thanks for the PM😛

Yeah...Even I m feeling bad for Kabir...😭
But can't do anything...may b Ananya have some reasons...don't know...😛 I will cont soon...😊

Originally posted by: .FlyingClouds.

Very sad!!

But Ananya ke paas valid reson toh hoga hi...

I just hope,confusion gets clear soon

Yeah its sad but kya kr skte hain...ab Annaya ko jo krna tha vo to kr chuki...😛 hihihihi

Originally posted by: bawaswift

Dil todh diya na bachhe ka...😭

He was ready to accept that monster... his heart was beating 10000000 / kmph... i am exaggerating cos i know the exact speed...😛

And what a handsome looking man gone into teasing by Sudhir Uncle... n laughs were taking place... with Kaya all accepted...

Then... ??/😕

Why Ana why you did this to our sweet kabir..😭

He wanted to listen to her... he confessed his love to her... then whats troubling Ananaya...

Poor kabir got angry n jerked his hand n left..

ab aage kya...

Kaushiki... the update stated with a lovely morning... but ended in a blast...

Loved to see every character performing so well n maturely...But Ananya will have to tell whats bothering her..

Is there any secret she is hiding about kaya.. ??/ Or something relating to the monster... or..

Arrey kya...😕

Nice progress but all smashed by Ana's decision n not telling anything to kabir...

I wish she will respond to his love n then will think to talk to him personally..

I wish ye jo dil ananya kep aas hai na kabir ka... bas toote nahi... otherwise hum toot jayenge...

Do something Kaushiki...

Thanks for the update... Mixed feelings... !😳

Ab dil to toot hi chuka h bhaiyu...ab kya kr skte hain jo krna tha Ananya ne kr diya...Main uski jagah hoti na to kbi b esa ni krti😛...sacchi...🤣
Yeah u r right his heart was beating 10000000kmph...😆 ab Ananya ko kya bother kr rha h ye to baad mein pta chalega😛...Don't worry...bt now I can't do anything as the story was preplanned to be like this...Wese don't u remember what the title states ''HUMARA DIL AAP K PAAS HAI'' to abi k liye I jst wanted to say...''ADHIK JANKARI K LIYE LINE PR BANE RAHIEN''😆

Thank u soo much... Or hum aapko tutne to nahi denge...😃Edited by Kaushiki - 7 years ago