Kaya ff: Humara dil aap ke paas hai *DISCONTINUED*

Kaushiki Senior Member

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Posted: 13 April 2016 at 7:15am | IP Logged
Hello Everyone I m Kaushiki new to IF so only few people knows me. I m a big fan of Kaya so I have decided to write an ff on them... It is a love story but it has nothing to do with the actual one except the characters. Please do tell me should I countinue or not. So here is the prologue.

            Kabir's POV
I was born & brought up in London, my Father was a very reputed businessman. Soon when I was of 3 my mother gifted me a baby sister and I named her RICHA she was my life but when I was of 18 we had to part away because my grandfather wasn't well and he lived in Delhi all alone so he needed to be taken care so my parents and Richu had to migrate to Delhi and I had to stay back in London because of my studies. Then after some time I heared the news of my grandfather's death. I was very sad but even at that time I wasn't able to go to India because of my Final Exams. After my graduation I went back to India I was so happy that I would meet my Richu bt she was changed she was young and was of an eligible age to get married. I was running in my 27 and she was of 24. Her behaviour was totally changed. Then one day she told me that she was in love with someone and then I personally meet the guy, Ronnie I was impressed by him, he was a Senior Reporter in the No.1 News Channel of India KKN and belonged to a good family backgroung. I told this to my parents they had no objetion because they themselves had a love marriage. Finally the day of there marriage came. I was so happy for my Richu and was busy in welcoming guests when suddenly My eyes were hoocked on a girl I was mesmerised seeing her beauty, she wasn't the most beautiful girl but her charm was enough to make anyone fall for her, she had avery little makeup but her face had aglow on it. She walked in with her father and a little girl probably her sister. Then I saw my father greeting them and then I realised that he was Sudhir Uncle my fathers childhood friend and the girl was non other than Ananya my classmate till 3rd and my bestie. They had settled in India after her mother's death. I was busy in remembering all those days of our childhood when I saw her coming towards me. I was feeling something different but I had no idea of that feeling. She came to me and said with a smile
A-Hey Kabir.
Ohhh god her voice was soo soo sweet I cannot believe that she was the same girl whom I used to call FATTY... And then the little girl with her pulled the end of her ghagra & asked in a cute voice
G-Mumma mumma ye kon hain ?

Ohhh thats guys please do tell me should I continue or not...thanks for reading...

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Chapter 1
Chapter 2
Chapter 3
Chapter 4
Chapter 5
Chapter 6
Chapter 7

Edited by Kaushiki - 20 June 2016 at 9:53am

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xFawadKhanx Goldie

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Posted: 13 April 2016 at 7:48am | IP Logged
Wow what a start
Kabir mesmerised by ananya and the twist in the tail the little girl
Overall awesome story
Continue it plzzz
And thanks for the pm!

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annabethpercy Groupbie

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Posted: 13 April 2016 at 7:48am | IP Logged
Awesome start!!!!!!!!!Kabir and richa are siblings here!! OMG  Ananya is a mom!!Cant wait to read further!!!!Continue soonest sweetie!!Lots of love and hugs to you!!!Thanku for the pm!Smile

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vssdp Goldie

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Posted: 13 April 2016 at 8:11am | IP Logged
Very beautifully written Kaushi 
Such a nice start 
But twist in the story is that Ananya is a mom 
Let's see what happens 
And Kabir and Ananya are bestie 
Loved it continue soon and thanks for the pm 

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Sarim.fatmi IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 13 April 2016 at 8:35am | IP Logged
awesome start dear.

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.FlyingClouds. IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 13 April 2016 at 8:43am | IP Logged
A very nice plot Kaushiki!!
It is good that Kaya are friends already...
And if, Ananya is really the mother of that girl, then I think that she must have had a failed marriage or something like that...
But, I am sure that, Kabir will provide for a father figure in the little girl's life!!( like abhishek bacchan in kuch na kaho)
Do cont soon
And plz pm me

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eufara_naghm Goldie

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Posted: 13 April 2016 at 9:02am | IP Logged
Loving the concept 
Do continueTongue

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manaalkhan Senior Member

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Posted: 13 April 2016 at 9:04am | IP Logged
Amazing attempt Kaushi...!!! *hope you won't mind if i call you that*
That story seems really intriguing...!!
Will be waiting for the 1st part...!! Bring it on...!
continue sooner & thanks for the PM...!!

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