Drabble: Tomay Amae Mile

Posted: 7 years ago
Hello,
This one is based totally on the song (as Bengalis would totally understand) 'Ei toh hethey kunjo chhaayay' from the cult film 'Lukochuri'.
So, a happy Poila Boishakh once again!



Laying his flute, the king of cowherds enclosed his sweetheart's hands in his. He laid aside his crown, she laid her veil; his eyes bathed her in delicate love, she lowered hers in coy. Frivolity had raced past their rendezvous.

The days are numbered, but together we shall live the dream. The dream that we have spun on wheel of our lives, with threads of our gaiety. The dream that is to remain. The warmth of your hands shall sooth mine, your eyes shall win me. You and I shall stay awake through sweet nights as the moon shines her way through the dainty stars.

You shall stay by me to witness the vivid colours of impassioned Spring deluge our lives; our love overwhelming all senses the draw us apart. The bumblebees shall fill up the fragrant air with sweet concerts and this be their day.

This day, we indulge once more in this scandalous game of love, sprinkled with pain that shall destroy us.


We shall rise again from our ashes, victorious.


The title literally means 'You and I together' and has got nothing to do with that nonsensical serial.
Thank you!

Edited by Radhikerani - 7 years ago
Posted: 7 years ago
A very happy New Year to you Pro!
Shubo NoboborshoπŸ€— 
May all your wishes come true..
Wishing loads of good health, prosperity and love!
A fantastic drabble... So informative for non bongs like me
Thank you for enlightening about this...

IF really is so nice in these matters...

Stay cool, stay healthy this terrible summer😎

With lots of love,
Mahi
Edited by Artist_Forever - 7 years ago
Posted: 7 years ago
Pro πŸ€— Happy New year, Choti :) It's amazing that our New Years coincide :P
This drabble is just  
I am currently imagining myself in that position and going β˜ΊοΈ
Stay cool this terribly hot summer πŸ˜ŽπŸ˜Š
And write a lot as well :)
Posted: 7 years ago
Happy New Year dear...wish you all the happiness and your dreams come true. Beautiful Drabble. Very beautifully written.
Posted: 7 years ago
Poila boishak er shubheccha jannachi proteeti.
Wishing all a very happy New year.
Loved the post.
Tfd pm dear.
Posted: 7 years ago
Happy New Year dear , may you will have many blessings in the year to come...😳😳😳


Posted: 7 years ago
Hii Pro :))
Thanks for the PM
And wishing you too an absolutely amazing year ahead!
Teach me Bengali :P
This one is really short,sweet and soothing :)))
Posted: 7 years ago
Such a Beautiful Drabble Choti. ❀️
Shubho Nobo Barsho To you and your family.

Lots Of Love And Blessings. 
Thanx For Pm.
Posted: 7 years ago
Thanks Pro. πŸ˜Š
Wishing you the same. πŸ€—
Posted: 7 years ago
Hey Pro ! Happy new year to you too ! πŸ€—
And the os is just beautiful . Such beautiful choice of words I must say ! Well done . πŸ‘πŸ‘
A short os but will lay down the most of the heart . πŸ˜ƒ
Love 
Sam 

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