OS :: Genre Series# Crime/Mystery. (Page 9)

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Posted: 20 April 2016 at 8:11am | IP Logged
Originally posted by MysticRiver

intriguing os..Clap

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Posted: 20 April 2016 at 8:12am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Red.orchid

Amezing os 

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Posted: 22 April 2016 at 11:05pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by .FairyDust.

Nimmiii Hug


Eeekks you started a new Series Dancing
And this is the first one i read and OMGG what was this?! I always knew you were good at suspense and thrillers because of Angel and the awesome twists you gave there but this one toh OMMGG so bloody brilliant ShockedClapClap

Now you are making me blush. thank you for your generous works sweetheart. gaahh.. you reminded me of Angel. my true love.

I loved the bonding between Adarsh Swara Laksh and Ragini and then 'Our' Sanskaar too, 'twas so good to read Day Dreaming. And the case itself was so intriguing I was literally biting my lower lip off thinking who the traitor would be, I suspected Adarsh and Laksh and for a teeny weeny second Sanskaar too as I'm very well acquainted with your twists LOL but I banished the thought! And DAMMIT when I read  Sanskaar was an imposter I literally had a brain freeze and had to re read that part like 3-4 times till it sunk in ShockedShocked
I loved the twist, so brilliant it is aajhgfdzrhfg Day DreamingHeartClap.

Thankh ku thankh ku..Heart.
You do know me well doll. and yup that's why you guessed it right in the beginning. but then  we love our Sanskaar. can't think of him as traitor.LOL.
gee.. I am so glad you loved the twist.

All of them love their Sanskaar, that made me so proud for some reason LOL Cool.

we are Jabra fans of that guy. that's why!LOL.

And that part where Sanskaar leaves a pic of him (his only pic) as a memory with his Swara aawww I was legit swooning at this man and his gesture HeartDay Dreaming.

He is our forever special guy nahi!

And also PLEAASSEE give a sequel to this one, I wanna know how they meet again Shocked

will sure do baby doll.Hug

Fabulous job nimmi,Keep giving us more such OS's Day Dreaming.

Thank you so much once again.
Oye I wrote many more OS's. would love to have you there too.LOLHug.


Love ya.

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Posted: 22 April 2016 at 11:06pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by MusicAddict

Originally posted by Banjaaran.

Originally posted by MusicAddict

Woah Nimmi... That was so f****** amazing I tell ya!! It was too good. Another masterpiece of your sheer brilliance and amazing words!! Fabtabulous hun, and I'm so impressed man!! Such a plot..Kudos!* claps wildly*
I was all the time thinking who the hell is the traitor!! It never occured that it may be Sanskaar. I was like it has to be Laksh. But thinking of Sanskaar was completely outta question!! What all shhe didnt call him and he grinned!! Sanskaar was so cool:-)
SwaSan spending all time together was slowly paving the way for deep true love!! Enigma and Open Book!!? I LIKE IT!!
All this time it was Sanskaar?? God!! This is shocking. I mean i was actually stunned for a moment. Then I read it whole and realised. But dude, you really ought to write a crime novel!! You're fab at it<3 Such a plot!! Wouldn't have ever crossed my mind!! Defence?? Amazing buddy!!
The last part of the card was so heart touching!! Just loved it. Hey Nimmi!! Can you please please please please please please write a part of this one where Swara and Sanskaar actually meet like she hopes!! Please Nimmi! And let his name be Sanskaar only!!
Can you write a part two for me?? I loved it tooo xInfinity much
Lots of love

thank you so much Sakshi.
geee.. you are making me blush now with your compliments and love sweetie.

I am so glad the twist shocked you.
and that you loved the story.

thanks girl.. *big hugs*

don't tempt me Sakshi. I write in extremes only. one shot or pothi size.
I love you babes.. toh chalo will write another part for this story then. Part two.

Lots and lots and lots of love.Heart

Really will you?? Thank you Thank you Thank you sooo much!! I'll be waiting!!HugI love you!!

Love you back Sakshi..

Need a little more time. wasn't accepting this piece to be such a hit. so didn't think of continuation part.


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Posted: 22 April 2016 at 11:12pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by The.Lannister

Fabulous OS Nimmi! Hug I loved it 

I had guessed that the mole was Sanskaar but the second twist took me by surprise! Awesome twist that wasClap He was one of the good guys but was just from a different team. And then the ending was so cuteEmbarrassed This deserves a sequel. I need to know when that "someday" will come in their life when they meet again & how!

Thanks Yukti for suggesting this one otherwise I would have missed out on a good story Hug


thank you so much dearie.
so you guessed it is Sanskaar. but I am glad I could surprise you with other twist.Embarrassed.

sure they are going to meet.. how could they not!

thank you once again girl for reading and liking this story,

and hey Yukthi.. big thanks ra.Hug.

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Posted: 22 April 2016 at 11:13pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Sanavi

What a mind blowing twist...
Must say , u hv a knack of twists.

Thank you so much Sanavi.Hug.

and big hugs and thanks again for the complimentEmbarrassed.


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Posted: 22 April 2016 at 11:14pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Vaiyambar...

Originally posted by Banjaaran.

Originally posted by Vaiyambar...

Res.. Machi... Hug ...


I'm spellbound... Man I'm left with no words... What an OS it was just first class man... I doubted Sanskaar.. But not like this way... I thought he must be son of eighter one.. But man what a twist... Mind blowing Clap Clap Clap ... Mmmawh machi...

Love you...

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">Machi..

thank you so much re.

so you guessed it is Sanskaar.busted thereLOL.
But I am glad I managed to shock you in the end.

Love you back. Muah!</font>

Ha.. Ha... Ha.. Man you imposed doubt seed on Laksh and Adarsh.. When a writer do this then it's definitely not them.. Then my doubt turn on Ragini and Sanskaar.. But that selfie confirmed it.. It's Sanskaar.. I love to solve this kinda enigmas machi... Mmmawh for you giving me this... CBI missed me.. LOL ..

Love you... You won't change.. Still telling me thanku... Puking.. Dead

Muah back..

you are cute!

and yo! you know me na.. I love saying please, thank you and sorry. old world charm!

Love you too.

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Posted: 22 April 2016 at 11:17pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by ishanita

I want part 2 hamaari mange puri karo...laal kile pe dharna denge...we want part 2...
What yaar ?
Every tym I read u I think it is d best n nothing can be better than this ...but I always forget that u are nimmi...kasam khaake baithi ho to prove me wrong ...every tym fresh topic ...fresh story...starplus tagline suits u best...rishta wahi soch nayi...
Bw  m again going out of topic ...yaar Angel hangover nahin uttar ra...I wanna ask Maddy's new profession which he has now opted?
Ishita...but naam pataali Devi hone m der no large GI if u didn't give part 2 ...okLOL


Girl you are cute!

aww.. thank you so much for your lovely lovely words for me. Oh love that start plus ka tag for me. *Muah*

Na Behen! Angel ki yaad na dila. I am trying so hard to let him go.
Maddy.. the guy will literally rock in any profession. Assassin ho, Bar tender ya ModelLOL.

pssst: I love pataali devi.

thank you so much once again sweetie.
love ya.

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