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Posted: 20 April 2016 at 8:00am | IP Logged
Originally posted by -Prithi-

Amazing one




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Posted: 20 April 2016 at 8:01am | IP Logged
Originally posted by ANfan_1810

Awesome ...
loved it ...

hope that someday comes soon ...

u cant stop here ... you have to continue ...

please ...



Thank you so much Annie.Embarrassed.

that someday will come soon.
gonna continue.

thanks again dear.
Love.

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Posted: 20 April 2016 at 8:03am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Krishnabhisarik

Awesome!!!! This was so sooo good!! Brilliantly written!! I absolutely love suspense thrillers, and here mixed with romance it was superb!!ClapClapClap


gee..
thank you so much Krishna.
I am so glad you found this story so good.

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Posted: 20 April 2016 at 8:05am | IP Logged
Originally posted by kritz4ever

Fabulous work 


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Posted: 20 April 2016 at 8:11am | IP Logged
Originally posted by MysticRiver

intriguing os..Clap


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Posted: 20 April 2016 at 8:12am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Red.orchid

Amezing os 


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Posted: 22 April 2016 at 11:05pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by .FairyDust.

Nimmiii Hug

Doll.Hug


Eeekks you started a new Series Dancing
And this is the first one i read and OMGG what was this?! I always knew you were good at suspense and thrillers because of Angel and the awesome twists you gave there but this one toh OMMGG so bloody brilliant ShockedClapClap

Now you are making me blush. thank you for your generous works sweetheart. gaahh.. you reminded me of Angel. my true love.

I loved the bonding between Adarsh Swara Laksh and Ragini and then 'Our' Sanskaar too, 'twas so good to read Day Dreaming. And the case itself was so intriguing I was literally biting my lower lip off thinking who the traitor would be, I suspected Adarsh and Laksh and for a teeny weeny second Sanskaar too as I'm very well acquainted with your twists LOL but I banished the thought! And DAMMIT when I read  Sanskaar was an imposter I literally had a brain freeze and had to re read that part like 3-4 times till it sunk in ShockedShocked
I loved the twist, so brilliant it is aajhgfdzrhfg Day DreamingHeartClap.

Thankh ku thankh ku..Heart.
You do know me well doll. and yup that's why you guessed it right in the beginning. but then  we love our Sanskaar. can't think of him as traitor.LOL.
gee.. I am so glad you loved the twist.

All of them love their Sanskaar, that made me so proud for some reason LOL Cool.

we are Jabra fans of that guy. that's why!LOL.

And that part where Sanskaar leaves a pic of him (his only pic) as a memory with his Swara aawww I was legit swooning at this man and his gesture HeartDay Dreaming.

He is our forever special guy nahi!

And also PLEAASSEE give a sequel to this one, I wanna know how they meet again Shocked

will sure do baby doll.Hug

Fabulous job nimmi,Keep giving us more such OS's Day Dreaming.

Thank you so much once again.
Oye I wrote many more OS's. would love to have you there too.LOLHug.


Love,
Doll

Love ya.

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Posted: 22 April 2016 at 11:06pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by MusicAddict

Originally posted by Banjaaran.

Originally posted by MusicAddict

Woah Nimmi... That was so f****** amazing I tell ya!! It was too good. Another masterpiece of your sheer brilliance and amazing words!! Fabtabulous hun, and I'm so impressed man!! Such a plot..Kudos!* claps wildly*
I was all the time thinking who the hell is the traitor!! It never occured that it may be Sanskaar. I was like it has to be Laksh. But thinking of Sanskaar was completely outta question!! What all shhe didnt call him and he grinned!! Sanskaar was so cool:-)
SwaSan spending all time together was slowly paving the way for deep true love!! Enigma and Open Book!!? I LIKE IT!!
All this time it was Sanskaar?? God!! This is shocking. I mean i was actually stunned for a moment. Then I read it whole and realised. But dude, you really ought to write a crime novel!! You're fab at it<3 Such a plot!! Wouldn't have ever crossed my mind!! Defence?? Amazing buddy!!
The last part of the card was so heart touching!! Just loved it. Hey Nimmi!! Can you please please please please please please write a part of this one where Swara and Sanskaar actually meet like she hopes!! Please Nimmi! And let his name be Sanskaar only!!
Can you write a part two for me?? I loved it tooo xInfinity much
Lots of love
Sakshi!!


thank you so much Sakshi.
Hug.
geee.. you are making me blush now with your compliments and love sweetie.

I am so glad the twist shocked you.
and that you loved the story.

thanks girl.. *big hugs*

don't tempt me Sakshi. I write in extremes only. one shot or pothi size.
I love you babes.. toh chalo will write another part for this story then. Part two.
soon!

Lots and lots and lots of love.Heart




Really will you?? Thank you Thank you Thank you sooo much!! I'll be waiting!!HugI love you!!


Love you back Sakshi..
Hug

Need a little more time. wasn't accepting this piece to be such a hit. so didn't think of continuation part.

soon!Embarrassed


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